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Daniel Meuli Web Recovery has helped saved my business investment! Don't know how else I could had picked up if not for the assistance I got from them in getting my 550,000 USD cleared from my business account wallet back. I say a big thanks to them again. You can get across to them for assistance with: EMAIL. Danielmeuliweberecovery (@) email (.) come OR WHATSAPP. +19.45 2.46.49.92 TELEGRAM. (@) DANIELMEULI
Overall great story but the ending was rushed and unfulfilling really a huge let down from such a great author
Guys, just drop off the chapter number where all the "unpleasant" events with Freya and so on take place, after reading them you will be able to understand whether this is your cup of tea, and whether it will be possible to tolerate it...
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It's better dan the original Danmachi I'm at chapter 1444 And its amazing Harem is a bit big but hey man can't complain Hey Author can you do a story about MY THREE BEAUTIFUL WIVES ARE VAMPIRES I vampire story with long and lots of chapters would be awesome
Forgot to review so here I am, one of the worst story I have read on Webnovel. The author has a c*ckold fetish, and the Mc isn't likeable, in fact he just feels like a *****. I am only giving 2 stars 🌟 for the writing style, which I have to admit Is pretty good. Now if only you could use that to create a story with a likeable and great MC
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Reveal Spoiler I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
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Have not read it till yet cause I am the type of guy who read its in one full flow or I just drop it forever and I ain't got the time yet for 2000 fking chapters but still got to aplaud the author for his work Though I heard its consists of ntr in one scene sighhh.....
This was my first ever fanfic I have read, it introduced me to this type of reading I fell in love with this book it was amazing and sucked me in. The author was in-depth with the story, characters and world. The development of the main character was fascinating and well done in my opinion. I have re-read this book roughly 5 or 6 times and have yet to get bored with it. If you get the time it is definitely worth reading as well as any other fanfic by this author. Thank you for your hard work.
This book has been an emotional anchor in my life , I am so glad for you to have made this. I honestly cannot tell others about this from words alone.. If you read this and you like good anime and stories your gonna love this. I swear whenever I get my taxes finalized I will give this author alot of money... I'm really sad that I cannot see Vahn and Co buti hope someone will read this book and make a enter show or movie series or even a Manga out of it . I would pay $3,000 for it. Love you author- san!!!!!!!!
This story is absolutely amazing I love it Overall everything is okay But there is a problem but it,s okay this story is great slightly slow if you want to read a story with good plot and emotion and good background then it,s okay Try it,it will not disappoint you like
I like this story and the ideas it has, but it is so slow, I get it can be considered fixing a broken character. However, I am at 230ish in the story and it is still like this, let me know if it gets better later on though.
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I personally love this story a bunch but I have problems reading to.much at a time and when I come back I have forgotten a ton and have to be like(what da helll is going)on for a bit. the reason is that it just goes really slow and there is a ton of harem I don't really mind either but it gets overwhelming and I need a break from it every once and a while. it gets way better when he leaves danmachi.
Called epik is epik also dont read the previous chapters if you just started reading i managed to escape with few wounds arberabrebarebaerbebare
Oh how I wish this novel was a typical I want to be the strongest novel or I want to gain eternal life novel. Vahn goes brrr with his Pokémon balls catching every girl he can because he’s super innocent and empathetic. If you like slow strength gains and a bunch of romance/harem stuff then go ahead and read this, if you desire a man with a solid grasp of what he truly wants in life with an impeccable desire to obtain it, this probably isn’t for you.
This is the story that got me into reading light novels and stuff like this, einlion is still one of my favorite authors after over 5 years of reading. If you’ve read manga or watched anime you will love a lot of his content, you get to see all your favorite characters like you’ve only ever imagined or like you’e never even thought about highly recommend to those over 18.
This fanfic is all about a boy and countless girls he had. Also, there are only a few males except the MC himself that is mentioned on this story.
writing quality: a lot of the time i feel like i don't miss anything of significance if I skip a chapter or three. the first 50 chapters the mc basically doesn't have a functioning memory and has no common sense due to history.story development: its like what if bell was dumber with more plot armor and named something else. we will have similar or identical relationships with all the other people in the story but 3 years early so bell doesnt have to not exist.character design: only gets a marginal score because valid effort was made to play someone who had nearly 0 life experience. honestly probably only deserves a 2.updating dunno ill let it sit at max. there are 2k chapters.world background: its based in danmachi so its solid.
I'm just gonna leave this rating here after finishing the story. Idk if there will still be continuation of the epilogue but I will wait for an actual closure of the story.
As I sifted through the evidence provided by Hi Tech Recovery, my suspicions were confirmed. Some messages and conversations raised red flags and shattered the trust I had once placed in my husband. It was a painful realization, but one that I knew I needed to confront. The evidence didn't stop at messages alone. Hi Tech Recovery also uncovered multimedia files that painted a vivid picture of my husband's actions. From incriminating photos to compromising videos, it was undeniable proof of his infidelity. It was like being hit with a one-two punch in the gut and heart. Coping with the aftermath of infidelity is no easy task, but with a little bit of magic, you can begin the healing process. It is with the help of Hi Tech Recovery that I was able to see through his phone that was hacked without his knowledge that she derived pleasure in other men. This is a very sad write up to me but it is better because I now know where I stand. Reach out to Hi Tech Recovery for more information on Email: hitechrecovery(At)contractor.net and Telegram: @hitechrecovery
man to be honest the starting was really good . i thought i got a hidden gem but after mc interacting with other girl the story just went downhill. honestly i like harem but not this much bruh he is literally 14yrs old and he is thinking of having child. literally most of the chapter is just about romance. this novel is starting to feel like slice of life novel.
If I were to think of the Seven Deadly Sins of Fanfiction authors, Einlion will be in Sloth. He writes the same things over and over again, even if it is in variations
Melhor obra de viaje de animes eo sistema de poder e muito bom mais eu não gostei do sentimentalismo do protagonista que em todos os mundo que ele inha ele tentava criar um mundo sem maldades oque praticamente impossível
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
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Daniel Meuli Web Recovery has helped saved my business investment! Don't know how else I could had picked up if not for the assistance I got from them in getting my 550,000 USD cleared from my business account wallet back. I say a big thanks to them again. You can get across to them for assistance with: EMAIL. Danielmeuliweberecovery (@) email (.) come OR WHATSAPP. +19.45 2.46.49.92 TELEGRAM. (@) DANIELMEULI
Overall great story but the ending was rushed and unfulfilling really a huge let down from such a great author
Guys, just drop off the chapter number where all the "unpleasant" events with Freya and so on take place, after reading them you will be able to understand whether this is your cup of tea, and whether it will be possible to tolerate it...
Reveal Spoiler It's better dan the original Danmachi I'm at chapter 1444 And its amazing Harem is a bit big but hey man can't complain Hey Author can you do a story about MY THREE BEAUTIFUL WIVES ARE VAMPIRES I vampire story with long and lots of chapters would be awesome
Forgot to review so here I am, one of the worst story I have read on Webnovel. The author has a c*ckold fetish, and the Mc isn't likeable, in fact he just feels like a *****. I am only giving 2 stars 🌟 for the writing style, which I have to admit Is pretty good. Now if only you could use that to create a story with a likeable and great MC
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Reveal Spoiler I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Reveal Spoiler Have not read it till yet cause I am the type of guy who read its in one full flow or I just drop it forever and I ain't got the time yet for 2000 fking chapters but still got to aplaud the author for his work Though I heard its consists of ntr in one scene sighhh.....
This was my first ever fanfic I have read, it introduced me to this type of reading I fell in love with this book it was amazing and sucked me in. The author was in-depth with the story, characters and world. The development of the main character was fascinating and well done in my opinion. I have re-read this book roughly 5 or 6 times and have yet to get bored with it. If you get the time it is definitely worth reading as well as any other fanfic by this author. Thank you for your hard work.
This book has been an emotional anchor in my life , I am so glad for you to have made this. I honestly cannot tell others about this from words alone.. If you read this and you like good anime and stories your gonna love this. I swear whenever I get my taxes finalized I will give this author alot of money... I'm really sad that I cannot see Vahn and Co buti hope someone will read this book and make a enter show or movie series or even a Manga out of it . I would pay $3,000 for it. Love you author- san!!!!!!!!
This story is absolutely amazing I love it Overall everything is okay But there is a problem but it,s okay this story is great slightly slow if you want to read a story with good plot and emotion and good background then it,s okay Try it,it will not disappoint you like
I like this story and the ideas it has, but it is so slow, I get it can be considered fixing a broken character. However, I am at 230ish in the story and it is still like this, let me know if it gets better later on though.
Reveal Spoiler I personally love this story a bunch but I have problems reading to.much at a time and when I come back I have forgotten a ton and have to be like(what da helll is going)on for a bit. the reason is that it just goes really slow and there is a ton of harem I don't really mind either but it gets overwhelming and I need a break from it every once and a while. it gets way better when he leaves danmachi.
Called epik is epik also dont read the previous chapters if you just started reading i managed to escape with few wounds arberabrebarebaerbebare
Oh how I wish this novel was a typical I want to be the strongest novel or I want to gain eternal life novel. Vahn goes brrr with his Pokémon balls catching every girl he can because he’s super innocent and empathetic. If you like slow strength gains and a bunch of romance/harem stuff then go ahead and read this, if you desire a man with a solid grasp of what he truly wants in life with an impeccable desire to obtain it, this probably isn’t for you.
This is the story that got me into reading light novels and stuff like this, einlion is still one of my favorite authors after over 5 years of reading. If you’ve read manga or watched anime you will love a lot of his content, you get to see all your favorite characters like you’ve only ever imagined or like you’e never even thought about highly recommend to those over 18.
This fanfic is all about a boy and countless girls he had. Also, there are only a few males except the MC himself that is mentioned on this story.
writing quality: a lot of the time i feel like i don't miss anything of significance if I skip a chapter or three. the first 50 chapters the mc basically doesn't have a functioning memory and has no common sense due to history.story development: its like what if bell was dumber with more plot armor and named something else. we will have similar or identical relationships with all the other people in the story but 3 years early so bell doesnt have to not exist.character design: only gets a marginal score because valid effort was made to play someone who had nearly 0 life experience. honestly probably only deserves a 2.updating dunno ill let it sit at max. there are 2k chapters.world background: its based in danmachi so its solid.
I'm just gonna leave this rating here after finishing the story. Idk if there will still be continuation of the epilogue but I will wait for an actual closure of the story.
As I sifted through the evidence provided by Hi Tech Recovery, my suspicions were confirmed. Some messages and conversations raised red flags and shattered the trust I had once placed in my husband. It was a painful realization, but one that I knew I needed to confront. The evidence didn't stop at messages alone. Hi Tech Recovery also uncovered multimedia files that painted a vivid picture of my husband's actions. From incriminating photos to compromising videos, it was undeniable proof of his infidelity. It was like being hit with a one-two punch in the gut and heart. Coping with the aftermath of infidelity is no easy task, but with a little bit of magic, you can begin the healing process. It is with the help of Hi Tech Recovery that I was able to see through his phone that was hacked without his knowledge that she derived pleasure in other men. This is a very sad write up to me but it is better because I now know where I stand. Reach out to Hi Tech Recovery for more information on Email: hitechrecovery(At)contractor.net and Telegram: @hitechrecovery
man to be honest the starting was really good . i thought i got a hidden gem but after mc interacting with other girl the story just went downhill. honestly i like harem but not this much bruh he is literally 14yrs old and he is thinking of having child. literally most of the chapter is just about romance. this novel is starting to feel like slice of life novel.
If I were to think of the Seven Deadly Sins of Fanfiction authors, Einlion will be in Sloth. He writes the same things over and over again, even if it is in variations
Melhor obra de viaje de animes eo sistema de poder e muito bom mais eu não gostei do sentimentalismo do protagonista que em todos os mundo que ele inha ele tentava criar um mundo sem maldades oque praticamente impossível
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
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