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I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world
The book is nice. The MC is really edgy in my opinion, not that I'm complaining though cause I have no problem with edgy MC's if they are written well. Which the author tried to do, though not really well.
I just started reading this now and i think its an amazing book. The title is quite catchy and the cover is also pleasing to the eye. Would definitely recommend to anyone
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dude I'm not here to hate on you, i just started, stopped on chapter 10 or something. There's no spelling errors, the translation is ok, the english level fine. But its just that weird way you use vocabulary and grammar that just irks me, the fact that i have to repeatedly try and figure out which phrases you meant to use is waaay too tiring, i just wanted something chill to pass the time. As for your so called plot holes, the cops in your book are dumb af, just throw a few rounds of tear gas into his cell, also just shoot him with tranqs. And i know you're probably gonna explain more about him as the story progresses but if I'm 10 chaps in and i know nothing about him other than the fact that he kills, loves it just as much as putting roses on bodies which is another thing i dont get, then you're definitely doing something wrong. I dont care about his whole life story i just wanna know who he is, his train of thought, you know, the simple things. Oh and one last thing regarding the way you write twisting phrases or botching up use of vocabulary . "not allowed to open it" and "can't open it are two very different things ". Fiddling with a knife in your pocket... My point is i feel like punching you mostly coz i somehow think you're mocking me with these mistakes . The book has promise though
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
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The reason I'm giving this two stars is simple,when the MC came back to his sect after being away for ten years he didn't just go in there and told everyone he was back,no he decided to be a d#ck and pretend to be someone who knew him self. I feel like those chapters where just filler that didn't give anything to the story,it was just annoying. I would of given this at least three stars but the author decided to do this and I didn't want to read anymore of the novel after.
I like the story. Palaban po yong female lead . I need to collect stone para continues yong pag nabasa ko . Thanks to the author for a wonderful story 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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I really like to read and watch horror novels and movies and whatsoever so it's quite interesting to read it and imagine of whatever happens in ur own mind
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A story of an op torture loving psychopath who would make a good cult leader....with magic (Read to cp 39) The story is pretty good, but sometimes you see the author “clash” with the mc, making the mc do things that he would probably not do (then again a lot better then most with this), but usually he does not get out of “character” But I would say the worst part of it is the mc’s power is his “power ups” lack of “reason”.... I think he should have had a cost or at least “cult-like” sacrifices to gain or use the power, but that is just my opinion
I love love love it😃😄 Thank you author, the plot of the story is amazing and Zuhn is unstoppable which makes me love the story even more😆 the way you describe the story is something that makes the persons blood boil by reading it😆 Please keep up the good work and remember to take care of yourself two🤗
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Bretty goo still scarab me ti dis dey..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye was goo
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killing is just a chilplay to him. a boy at his **** who kills without batting an eye even at the court he admitt for killing 100 people and just laugh at his doing.
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Aka white rose who killed a hundred of people just for fucking fun was now captured and during his trial he admit his killings without batting an eye.He really is a devil
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Love the book and hope you keep writing and please don't drop it.😁😁😁😁😁🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐶🐶🐶🐶🐭🐭🐭🐭🐹🐹🐹🐹🐰🐰🐰🐰🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐯🐯🐯🐯🐯🐯🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐻🐻🐻🐻🐻🐻🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐗🐗🐗🐗🐗🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞
There's an interesting turn of events and even the plot of the story. . . However, it would be more wonderful if the grammar construction is not confusing and is rechecked. . .
Although it has a bit errors the plot is very interesting. If you have a tolerance for the lack of logic at certain points in the story than this is the novel for you
First of all i want to tell the author that. Please don't stop writting this novel... The best till date I love the character zuhn and liu... I think they will fall for each other. After some chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
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A psychopath story ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷 ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Bloody killer but bloody amazing killer... I dunno why I like Zuhn.. But he iz a negative hero... He doesn't look right or left when he iz on his killing spreee...
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Ruthless, evil and overpowered main character who's passion for killing never dies. Even after he does. Story development hooks you and it doesn't let go. A must read if you like a darker and more sinister take on cultivation novels. I enjoy reading this novel . Can't wait for the next chapters .
At first Zuhn was a ruthless killer, killing people for fun but after teleporting to ziom continent he has some sparks of mercy for his disciples.. But again after transporting to another world he iz same as first emotionless killer.. But still story iz outstanding
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This is a decent overall book, however the quality and clarity on everything could be a lot better. Also I absolutely love the main character. Please have him stay Ultra-Psychopath and remember that Psychopaths can feel emotions just not empathy.
When I star using webnovel this story really caught my attention not just because of its title but of course the content, this story really deserves to be read by everyone and above all it deserves to be in your library
The author here, I'm not going to say my book is amazing. For sure at the beginning, it was quite rough. Lots of plot holes, I've been going through the starting chapters and rewriting a lot of them. I've fixed chapters 1-23. 24+ is pretty smooth, there shouldn't be any plot holes. In my perspective, my book started bad and has started to become better. My release schedule is going to be 2 chapters a day. I hope everyone enjoys my first long-term novel. (Meaning I didn't quit after ten chapters)
I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world
The book is nice. The MC is really edgy in my opinion, not that I'm complaining though cause I have no problem with edgy MC's if they are written well. Which the author tried to do, though not really well.
I just started reading this now and i think its an amazing book. The title is quite catchy and the cover is also pleasing to the eye. Would definitely recommend to anyone
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Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
dude I'm not here to hate on you, i just started, stopped on chapter 10 or something. There's no spelling errors, the translation is ok, the english level fine. But its just that weird way you use vocabulary and grammar that just irks me, the fact that i have to repeatedly try and figure out which phrases you meant to use is waaay too tiring, i just wanted something chill to pass the time. As for your so called plot holes, the cops in your book are dumb af, just throw a few rounds of tear gas into his cell, also just shoot him with tranqs. And i know you're probably gonna explain more about him as the story progresses but if I'm 10 chaps in and i know nothing about him other than the fact that he kills, loves it just as much as putting roses on bodies which is another thing i dont get, then you're definitely doing something wrong. I dont care about his whole life story i just wanna know who he is, his train of thought, you know, the simple things. Oh and one last thing regarding the way you write twisting phrases or botching up use of vocabulary . "not allowed to open it" and "can't open it are two very different things ". Fiddling with a knife in your pocket... My point is i feel like punching you mostly coz i somehow think you're mocking me with these mistakes . The book has promise though
Reveal Spoiler Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The reason I'm giving this two stars is simple,when the MC came back to his sect after being away for ten years he didn't just go in there and told everyone he was back,no he decided to be a d#ck and pretend to be someone who knew him self. I feel like those chapters where just filler that didn't give anything to the story,it was just annoying. I would of given this at least three stars but the author decided to do this and I didn't want to read anymore of the novel after.
I like the story. Palaban po yong female lead . I need to collect stone para continues yong pag nabasa ko . Thanks to the author for a wonderful story 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
If you like horror stories, read the amazing FREE scary stories on this channel https://youtu.be/QnRXZkBBI3o Regular updates and the stories are sensational. super scary. READ READ READ READ READ READ READ READ READ READREAD READ READ READ READREAD READ READ READ READ
I really like to read and watch horror novels and movies and whatsoever so it's quite interesting to read it and imagine of whatever happens in ur own mind
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A story of an op torture loving psychopath who would make a good cult leader....with magic (Read to cp 39) The story is pretty good, but sometimes you see the author “clash” with the mc, making the mc do things that he would probably not do (then again a lot better then most with this), but usually he does not get out of “character” But I would say the worst part of it is the mc’s power is his “power ups” lack of “reason”.... I think he should have had a cost or at least “cult-like” sacrifices to gain or use the power, but that is just my opinion
I love love love it😃😄 Thank you author, the plot of the story is amazing and Zuhn is unstoppable which makes me love the story even more😆 the way you describe the story is something that makes the persons blood boil by reading it😆 Please keep up the good work and remember to take care of yourself two🤗
Reveal Spoiler Bretty goo still scarab me ti dis dey..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye was goo
Reveal Spoiler killing is just a chilplay to him. a boy at his **** who kills without batting an eye even at the court he admitt for killing 100 people and just laugh at his doing.
Reveal Spoiler Aka white rose who killed a hundred of people just for fucking fun was now captured and during his trial he admit his killings without batting an eye.He really is a devil
Reveal Spoiler Love the book and hope you keep writing and please don't drop it.😁😁😁😁😁🐱🐱🐱🐱🐱🐶🐶🐶🐶🐭🐭🐭🐭🐹🐹🐹🐹🐰🐰🐰🐰🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐯🐯🐯🐯🐯🐯🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐨🐻🐻🐻🐻🐻🐻🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐮🐮🐮🐮🐮🐗🐗🐗🐗🐗🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐴🐴🐴🐴🐴🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞
There's an interesting turn of events and even the plot of the story. . . However, it would be more wonderful if the grammar construction is not confusing and is rechecked. . .
Although it has a bit errors the plot is very interesting. If you have a tolerance for the lack of logic at certain points in the story than this is the novel for you
First of all i want to tell the author that. Please don't stop writting this novel... The best till date I love the character zuhn and liu... I think they will fall for each other. After some chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
Reveal Spoiler A psychopath story ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷 ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Bloody killer but bloody amazing killer... I dunno why I like Zuhn.. But he iz a negative hero... He doesn't look right or left when he iz on his killing spreee...
Reveal Spoiler Ruthless, evil and overpowered main character who's passion for killing never dies. Even after he does. Story development hooks you and it doesn't let go. A must read if you like a darker and more sinister take on cultivation novels. I enjoy reading this novel . Can't wait for the next chapters .
At first Zuhn was a ruthless killer, killing people for fun but after teleporting to ziom continent he has some sparks of mercy for his disciples.. But again after transporting to another world he iz same as first emotionless killer.. But still story iz outstanding
Reveal Spoiler This is a decent overall book, however the quality and clarity on everything could be a lot better. Also I absolutely love the main character. Please have him stay Ultra-Psychopath and remember that Psychopaths can feel emotions just not empathy.
When I star using webnovel this story really caught my attention not just because of its title but of course the content, this story really deserves to be read by everyone and above all it deserves to be in your library
The author here, I'm not going to say my book is amazing. For sure at the beginning, it was quite rough. Lots of plot holes, I've been going through the starting chapters and rewriting a lot of them. I've fixed chapters 1-23. 24+ is pretty smooth, there shouldn't be any plot holes. In my perspective, my book started bad and has started to become better. My release schedule is going to be 2 chapters a day. I hope everyone enjoys my first long-term novel. (Meaning I didn't quit after ten chapters)