In my defense, that was my first time writing that kind of scene. I am just bad in writing anything action in general. But I think I improved in the later chapters. When I am done writing the whole novel, I will go back to edit the chapters. So please, pardon me
Moments later, her concentration was broken by the sound of flesh hitting flesh. She looked up and saw a small, petite girl surrounded by a group of girls.
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Urban · marveya
Girl don't attack the girl being cheated with ,attack the one who cheatedddd. break his freaking head with a bottle or sumtin
Rivana yanked her hands away, her eyes blazing. Without hesitation, she slapped Rubina, hard. The blind woman stumbled back in shock, only to be caught by Viktor, who rushed forward to support her and glared at Rivana.
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It was used in ancient China to determine paternity. Though it was quite inaccurate in some cases.
The emperor looked at the bowl of water, his expression calm. He then turned to Xi Ming, his face softening into a rare smile. "You are my son," he declared. "From today onwards, you are a prince of the Xi Dynasty."
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Thank you
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CuteYe6666: Hahaha, real funny . I'm pretty sure you're done reading. Who do you want to deceive? This great elder cannot be deceived. I know my fellow slackers, and you aren't one of them.
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You are welcome ❤. Sorry for the late update, been quite busy lately.
All my characters were made that way for a reason and some of them including the main character will go through character development. But I am glad you at least gave it a chance. Thank you✨
you are welcome
😂that's what I thought about to when writing the scene
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Your comment wasn't harsh, it was even a bit funny to me. I also saw it as a form of constructive criticism. I am happy that you find my novel good.
Moments later, her concentration was broken by the sound of flesh hitting flesh. She looked up and saw a small, petite girl surrounded by a group of girls.
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Urban · marveya