Long Live Ye Clan Second Young Master

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Skepparn

Author is deleting reviews, he trashed the novel at ch26 when he literally said 'gladly' when op guy from higher realm told him he'd come for his family at his doorstep, **** you author

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Joary

Is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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BIankInk

Loved it please keep on writing the story I hope you keep on writing Oh umm still not finished with the 140 character limit😅 Nothing more to write other than hoping for higher amount of updates

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abc_abc_2557

MC's parents grandparents and all people blamed and bullied the MC when he beat up Nie Lie. They know that Nie Lie provoked him first saying he was not worthy of ning er and he was not even killed. MC was house arrested while Nie Lie was invited to the city lord mansion without punishment. what the heck. Literally everyone forgot that MC just minding his own business then gets provoked by nie li and friends. them he was treated as the villain. mc's family was not even mad that nie li said he was going to kill MC 🤮 After fighting off the dark guild MC wanted to go to adventure and ziyun and ning er wanted to come. he said yes but still left then went to MCU(marvel cinematic universe). Living them with Nie Li the hundred year old pedo. 🤮 dropped

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RoiRed

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

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LittleGluttonSlime

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gingertabby

Trash............................................................. ........................... ..........first 10 chapter are good but sooner it becomes ****. Pathetic.

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chghaith

i liked the idea and would absoulutly love to read more so by all means continue ( just wanted to say i made my day reading the currient chaps and thnx )

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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DaoistGsSe3J

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Yuri_Alpha

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Ballad

I mean it's ok it's a bit random and I dislike Nie Li as a character especially Mc since he's sister is the main girl that Li is obsessed with

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arie_codet

The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome? The first and most impartant is why i am so handsome?

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Nathanielornsby

I LOVE THIS STORY BUT I AM SO MAD BECAUSE THE UPDATES ARE BARELY EXCITANT!?!? I hope you haven't dropped this story because I and a lot of others do too

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Maki_Uzu

Calidad de la escritura 3/5 Estabilidad de actualizaciones 1/5 Desarrollo de historia 3/5 Diseño de personaje 3/5 Fondo mundial 3/5. Vi mejores Fanfic.

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SightlessShinobi

Didn’t read anything yet but wanted to comment about tang SAN being on the cover, kinda sad it isn’t about soul land but kinda happy cuz tdg, hope this FanFiction is good