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Thought and time go into every chapter, at lest that's what I can tell, it only gets better as you read. Why are you wasting time reading my review, read it!
This. Is. Fucking. Gold. I love the story and character progression so far. It's also nice to see an author who is so keen to interact with their readers and shows a willingness to take on constructive criticism and the ideas of others. Keep up the great work BlackInk and get well soon! 5/5 All the way, if you are looking for a story with characters you can grow attached to this is something for you!
Love it. Great.......................................... Oh come on 140 thingy,,,, gigidfgjzgcgzffjxgdg just gibbirish.... Hfhghgdkfufkyufgdyydycyj jdyj gjc fhhxc xhxhc gxg
I hope his mom wont die if that happen it will be a path vengeance i dont like that......... And this 140 word thingy i hope they change this as well....
I have loved reading ever since i could remember. Unfortunately in ths last few years i haven't been able to feel the same thrill and excitement i use to feel when i read a book. This book has brought that back. I don't know why and i don't know how but ot does it for me. For the first time in a long time a book is giving me this feeling. So thank you for writing this and take your time. You don't have to rush it, and keep doing what you're doing.
One of the best chapter so far, by the novelist. Would the author please share his thought process behind each chapter, because they have complete different tone then the previous chapter. It is so for all the chapters till now.
Not enough chapter releases. Only like 1 chapter a week. So you start to forget about the novel until your notified that it wasent dropped. Anyway we can get more chapters?? Other then that. It's a great novel +10
An amazing read in all honesty. It has a flavour that most novels here lack which makes you want more. It has a series of expected suspense which leaves you with some good unexpected surprises. Look forward for more...
Awesome story and a well done MC just add some dramatic scenes and also make sure that at least a war arc or somthing with Russia and it will be the best story continue the awesome novel 👍👍👍👍👍I the lion sin of pride declare this novel as my number 1 ☝️☝️☝️☝️
It's not great. It's amazing!!! And addicting. I wish I'd tried it sooner. The title and old cover put me off for a few months, but it's so much more than just cultivation. I loved it so much that I read everything in 1 day. Keep up the fantastic work, Author!! :D
A very intriguing story that slowly pools you in, with a good world build and a mc that does not really become op straight away. Looking forward to the rest of the story and see the mc grow
The story has a good storyline the plots are quite similar to other work buts that's often the case since too much deviation is either great or just worst.
I don't mind late arrival of chapter but we need bonus after your exam is over And story is getting little lag as the starting it was fast paced and each chapter it will only discuss about tiny part of a topic and top of all the chapters arriving lately as it will ruin the mood of story by readers forgetting earlier chapter's.
One of three books I read currently on Webnovel and **** is this good. All the characters really make this novel in my opinion added with the past life knowledge he has at hand, it’s just awesome to read every new chapter. Also love the small stuff such as the Russian incorporations and when they dealt with that robber since you brought the characters feelings out in those chapters. Overall just an awesome read.
Everything is good so far, the only thing that's a turn off is that he supposedly gets killing intent just from imagination, and that worldwide people are panicked about an meteorite getting close to earth. Maybe I will keep thinking of k i l l ing bugs, and I will get a killer intent? My worries so far are human like system and harems. Overall the story is great with interactions between characters.
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Please can you update more, this much is not enough to make me tell its worth but as an ******* reader who has read for many years I am cretain that this one of the best webnovels I have read. Thank yuo
To balance out the trolls. But on a serious note, read this. It's good and the updates have been really constant, what more can you ask for?
I have to admit that when i started reading this novel i was not expecting it to be this good, honestly i don't understand why it is so low in the power ranking, the story is good, the characters are well built and the background story is well studied; the biggest problem is that the story is too slow, i mean the real story starts around chapter 80, not that it's bad but it's just not the way i like it. I woud definitely recommend this story to anyone that is into game like systems and superpowers.
I love this novel , when i read i even forget that it is original work it even better than most the translated novel , the author did a great job here and even try to improve everytime and go back to the chapter to correct and make things better and more believable which most author don't care enough to do , this is the best work i see in the original and i really think the author is fit to be a pro writer and i see how much work is put here and for that u have my respect.
...Been reading a lot and this one is truly promising.! ........ ....... ....... Great novel. ...... ...... ...... ...... ..... ..... ......................
I'd like to point out that I almost dropped this story at chapter 2. I was really disappointed by the main character's lack of desire to live even in the face of a miracle. It was clear that the author intended to have the mc's willpower develop over time, but I wasn't sure their would ever be another point where the mc's will could be tested to the same extent. System holders are typically op and rarely end up in truly hopeless situations. This story does a remarkable job of giving the mc dramatic character defining moments that illustrate his character development while moving the plot forward. And while the antagonists so far have been somewhat flat (They were all minor antagonists), the supporting cast is well developed and the plot is engaging and hard to predict. I really can't think of a truly similar fic to compare this to, which is rare considering the amount of system fics I've read and the amount of commonalities they tend to share. The moneymaking subplot is unrealistically successful but not to a distracting extent. This subplot is also used to develop relationships between the mc and his friends who are clearly meant to be an important part of the story.
The Harem must be fed............................. that is all...................... 😂😂😂 Oh....... Right....... Great story bruh....... 😂😂😂
I really love the plot of this novel as well as the progession. It is not fast nor slow and the details were just right for me. No info overload but generally covers all the important areas that need explanation. Great job Author!
Ok l wrote a review before when l was at 10 chapters and disliked it but gave it another chance and oh boi I'm really enjoying the story now. The story in my opinion has many ups and downs l feel the execution of the beginning of the story could've been better but overall the author gets better in their writing so all imma say is give this story a chance and don't read it at 11pm my brain was probably fried and too tired and that's probably why l wasn't enjoying the story😁keep up the good work author
One of kind novel so far. Trust me, worth reading it. And why the heck I need to write 140 characters. Really? So how is weather today? Good? Somehow I feel pity for people who want to write short and ****** but powerful review. Yet they are forced to write an essay instead.
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Trust me guys this is a very good novel that follows the lone cultivator in a modern world trope but executes it well and brings intressting twist to the trope
The author, you learn Russian? Or are you our spy on this site? I'm the Russian translator of your book. Thank you sincerely for Chapter two. That was a lot of fun.)
I don't know why I haven't done this earlier but five starts all around, just think of it as a cultivation novel that is not dog**** and extremely repetitive. With good character writing and fantastic use of human emotion, the characters are real and think logically enough for them to not point a gun at themselves whilst inspecting it. Thank you author san for this gift to the world, I was starting to get jaded from all the horrible cultivation novels presently.
When i read this novel, i got the feeling of freshness maybe due to different cultural background rather than your typical chinese novel. Although the premise is nothing new, the author delivered it in very interesting way. Of course this novel is not perfect but author always wiling to interact with his reader and improve his work. I rated this novel 5/5 because this novel is heavily underrated and deserve more recognition. And lastly some words from some great person: It's okay to take pride in your work, but don't be conceited, never afraid to confront your problem, learn from your mistake, because there is always some room for improvement!
Thought and time go into every chapter, at lest that's what I can tell, it only gets better as you read. Why are you wasting time reading my review, read it!
This. Is. Fucking. Gold. I love the story and character progression so far. It's also nice to see an author who is so keen to interact with their readers and shows a willingness to take on constructive criticism and the ideas of others. Keep up the great work BlackInk and get well soon! 5/5 All the way, if you are looking for a story with characters you can grow attached to this is something for you!
Love it. Great.......................................... Oh come on 140 thingy,,,, gigidfgjzgcgzffjxgdg just gibbirish.... Hfhghgdkfufkyufgdyydycyj jdyj gjc fhhxc xhxhc gxg
I hope his mom wont die if that happen it will be a path vengeance i dont like that......... And this 140 word thingy i hope they change this as well....
I have loved reading ever since i could remember. Unfortunately in ths last few years i haven't been able to feel the same thrill and excitement i use to feel when i read a book. This book has brought that back. I don't know why and i don't know how but ot does it for me. For the first time in a long time a book is giving me this feeling. So thank you for writing this and take your time. You don't have to rush it, and keep doing what you're doing.
One of the best chapter so far, by the novelist. Would the author please share his thought process behind each chapter, because they have complete different tone then the previous chapter. It is so for all the chapters till now.
Not enough chapter releases. Only like 1 chapter a week. So you start to forget about the novel until your notified that it wasent dropped. Anyway we can get more chapters?? Other then that. It's a great novel +10
An amazing read in all honesty. It has a flavour that most novels here lack which makes you want more. It has a series of expected suspense which leaves you with some good unexpected surprises. Look forward for more...
Awesome story and a well done MC just add some dramatic scenes and also make sure that at least a war arc or somthing with Russia and it will be the best story continue the awesome novel 👍👍👍👍👍I the lion sin of pride declare this novel as my number 1 ☝️☝️☝️☝️
It's not great. It's amazing!!! And addicting. I wish I'd tried it sooner. The title and old cover put me off for a few months, but it's so much more than just cultivation. I loved it so much that I read everything in 1 day. Keep up the fantastic work, Author!! :D
A very intriguing story that slowly pools you in, with a good world build and a mc that does not really become op straight away. Looking forward to the rest of the story and see the mc grow
The story has a good storyline the plots are quite similar to other work buts that's often the case since too much deviation is either great or just worst.
I don't mind late arrival of chapter but we need bonus after your exam is over And story is getting little lag as the starting it was fast paced and each chapter it will only discuss about tiny part of a topic and top of all the chapters arriving lately as it will ruin the mood of story by readers forgetting earlier chapter's.
One of three books I read currently on Webnovel and **** is this good. All the characters really make this novel in my opinion added with the past life knowledge he has at hand, it’s just awesome to read every new chapter. Also love the small stuff such as the Russian incorporations and when they dealt with that robber since you brought the characters feelings out in those chapters. Overall just an awesome read.
Everything is good so far, the only thing that's a turn off is that he supposedly gets killing intent just from imagination, and that worldwide people are panicked about an meteorite getting close to earth. Maybe I will keep thinking of k i l l ing bugs, and I will get a killer intent? My worries so far are human like system and harems. Overall the story is great with interactions between characters.
Reveal Spoiler Please can you update more, this much is not enough to make me tell its worth but as an ******* reader who has read for many years I am cretain that this one of the best webnovels I have read. Thank yuo
To balance out the trolls. But on a serious note, read this. It's good and the updates have been really constant, what more can you ask for?
I have to admit that when i started reading this novel i was not expecting it to be this good, honestly i don't understand why it is so low in the power ranking, the story is good, the characters are well built and the background story is well studied; the biggest problem is that the story is too slow, i mean the real story starts around chapter 80, not that it's bad but it's just not the way i like it. I woud definitely recommend this story to anyone that is into game like systems and superpowers.
I love this novel , when i read i even forget that it is original work it even better than most the translated novel , the author did a great job here and even try to improve everytime and go back to the chapter to correct and make things better and more believable which most author don't care enough to do , this is the best work i see in the original and i really think the author is fit to be a pro writer and i see how much work is put here and for that u have my respect.
...Been reading a lot and this one is truly promising.! ........ ....... ....... Great novel. ...... ...... ...... ...... ..... ..... ......................
I'd like to point out that I almost dropped this story at chapter 2. I was really disappointed by the main character's lack of desire to live even in the face of a miracle. It was clear that the author intended to have the mc's willpower develop over time, but I wasn't sure their would ever be another point where the mc's will could be tested to the same extent. System holders are typically op and rarely end up in truly hopeless situations. This story does a remarkable job of giving the mc dramatic character defining moments that illustrate his character development while moving the plot forward. And while the antagonists so far have been somewhat flat (They were all minor antagonists), the supporting cast is well developed and the plot is engaging and hard to predict. I really can't think of a truly similar fic to compare this to, which is rare considering the amount of system fics I've read and the amount of commonalities they tend to share. The moneymaking subplot is unrealistically successful but not to a distracting extent. This subplot is also used to develop relationships between the mc and his friends who are clearly meant to be an important part of the story.
The Harem must be fed............................. that is all...................... 😂😂😂 Oh....... Right....... Great story bruh....... 😂😂😂
I really love the plot of this novel as well as the progession. It is not fast nor slow and the details were just right for me. No info overload but generally covers all the important areas that need explanation. Great job Author!
Ok l wrote a review before when l was at 10 chapters and disliked it but gave it another chance and oh boi I'm really enjoying the story now. The story in my opinion has many ups and downs l feel the execution of the beginning of the story could've been better but overall the author gets better in their writing so all imma say is give this story a chance and don't read it at 11pm my brain was probably fried and too tired and that's probably why l wasn't enjoying the story😁keep up the good work author
One of kind novel so far. Trust me, worth reading it. And why the heck I need to write 140 characters. Really? So how is weather today? Good? Somehow I feel pity for people who want to write short and ****** but powerful review. Yet they are forced to write an essay instead.
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Trust me guys this is a very good novel that follows the lone cultivator in a modern world trope but executes it well and brings intressting twist to the trope
The author, you learn Russian? Or are you our spy on this site? I'm the Russian translator of your book. Thank you sincerely for Chapter two. That was a lot of fun.)
I don't know why I haven't done this earlier but five starts all around, just think of it as a cultivation novel that is not dog**** and extremely repetitive. With good character writing and fantastic use of human emotion, the characters are real and think logically enough for them to not point a gun at themselves whilst inspecting it. Thank you author san for this gift to the world, I was starting to get jaded from all the horrible cultivation novels presently.
When i read this novel, i got the feeling of freshness maybe due to different cultural background rather than your typical chinese novel. Although the premise is nothing new, the author delivered it in very interesting way. Of course this novel is not perfect but author always wiling to interact with his reader and improve his work. I rated this novel 5/5 because this novel is heavily underrated and deserve more recognition. And lastly some words from some great person: It's okay to take pride in your work, but don't be conceited, never afraid to confront your problem, learn from your mistake, because there is always some room for improvement!