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I simply love how the dialogue, and explanations are written. Wonderfully written conversation like the one's in this novel are a major guilty pleasure for me. Unlike the Evolving from nothing which bore the hell out of me everytime I read the dialogue; this novel thankfully has better, thought out one's.
This is one of the best if not best original novels I have read to date and I'm not just talking about liking the cultivation and superpower, it's the depth and effort that have been put into the novel. To date this novel is one of the most concrete and hope it continues for a long time.
Very amazing novel. the pace is a little slower compared to most novels but perfectly fine in my opinion. its a shame i cant vote more than 3 times to upvote this novel. and the fact that its only on chapter 70+ may put other off to it for now. overall, this store can have a long shelf life, i wouldnt mind if you go premium. if u release 100 chapters premium. ill buy 100 chapters worth of crystals. thats how much i think this novel is worth.
BEST ORIGINAL STORY I'VE READ. Great plot, nice world backround, likeable mc, and great pace of the story. Wish more chapters though. MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel worth a read, hope the author didn't drop this. I like the story background and the explanation of the system is so well written.
I really like this story. I typically like stories that take place in modern time with fantasy elements to it. So this one is right up my alley. I love the characters and I hope to see them grow into even better characters!
New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already! The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging. I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable! Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing! As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!
This Godly existence is now opening his malevolent dormant eyes to see flow of the fate again and shall deem this piece of work worthy of his Hollyness.
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This is a surprisingly good story for this website. Side characters have their own personalities and the MC is alright if a little wasteful of his abilities. Setting is well thought out so far, If this story can keep its momentum it will definitely remain one of the best on web novel.
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This is definitely one of the better stories I've been following here on webnovel. I've read up to chapter 66, and I feel this has given me a good enough sample to write a review. TL;DR (Too long; didn't read): At first I thought "Oh, it's yet another cultivation story." Anything with the word "cultivation" in the title is usually going to have something along the lines of meditation, martial arts, medicines that help you sweat out the impurities of your body, etc. Yet, this story is different as it puts cultivation into a more modern context. I highly recommend it. Writing quality: Grammar and spelling are excellent, and I can't remember anything in the story that sticks out as having any issues. Updates: I'd love to see more updates! This is the only point that I gave 4 stars instead of 5. I'm getting ready to read the story again from the beginning because I like the story so much. I'm sure with the foreknowledge I have there will be some things I've missed I will pick up this second time around. Maybe someone who knows the author can chain them to the hamster wheel and crack the whip to get them to produce more. =) Story Development: Everything seems to happen at a good pace. It is not too fast and not too slow. There is the occasional viewpoint of another person, but it adds to the story and is not just filler text. Even better, it feels like the alternate viewpoints help set the stage for events that will happen later on in the story. There are some unexpected twists (especially at the beginning) that keep a reader interested and wondering how the characters will respond and react to the world around them. Character Design: The characters are believable and consistent. You can understand why they do what they do. Some of the choices a character makes may seem obvious (if A happens then do B). Yet the characters struggle with some of the more complex decisions. They try their best, and you don't know if they will succeed. This isn't some "wish fulfillment" story where you know everything will work out as expected in the end. World Background: What happens to the main character is something unique to get the story going. A series of coincidences that bounces him around like rolling a d20 on a tabletop. His number comes up and he is placed in the right spot where he can do the most for himself and his family. He is the first of his kind in the modern world, and the story describes his struggles within that setting.
I love this book it is addictive and interesting and is super underaited I recommend this to anyone looking for something unique or addictive I hope the author does not dropp this or get bored of writing this the author could add in new things to make it less borring like him conquering planets with his powers or with the help of others or another idea is adding kingdom building elements or going to fictional worlds or sci-fi worlds I hope the author adds in those things and I hope the author makes a 1000+ chapters
I have read up to the end of book 1 and will be dropping this book. The author and the world have great potential but there were two things that killed it for me personally. The first was that the details of this novel just seem subtly wrong. A good example of what I mean is the response to a comet coming near earth. This happens semi-regularly in the real world and the various responses people have to it (from cults proclaiming the end of days to nothing at all) are fairly well known. In this world though, every world leader gives an IDENTICAL speech at exactly the same time to reassure all citizens of their countries. Everyone in the world stops working and hides in their house with emergency food for days before the comet comes. After the comet flies by the planet, there is worldwide rioting for days. This is insane. Why??? There are a lot of oddities like this in the novel that stand out and were regularly breaking my immersion in the story. The other issue is the tone. This book is about teenagers in high school (one of whom has super powers). Great. But our super hero straight up permanently disables his fellow students because he doesn't like them. His principal murders a man for threatening a student (even when the man has no way to carry out such a threat). The good guys in this novel are violent and dark. That is the GOOD guys. In a novel about teenage super heroes. It reminds me of books like the meta world chronicles over at royal road and that is not a good thing. It feels like if I was reading the first Harry Potter book and Harry was permanently cursing kids in Slitherin because of fights at school and Dumbledore murdered Harry's muggle family for being pricks. It isn't that this is impossible just a really jarring tone in that kind of book. That said I really liked the original take on reincarnating. Selling music, videogames, Youtube channels, etc. were all great ideas. The cultivation system was well done. The characters were fairly well developed and change over time which is great. The writing is excellent with few to no noticeable grammatical or spelling issues. I definitely think the author is talented and is doing a great job for a first novel.
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A realistic story about a normal guy who reincarnates to a normal parallel world. The approach is refreshing as book 1 takes us on a journey where the MC he is discovering the cultivation aspects and making terms with the parallel world. Not much in terms of fighting in book 1 however the foreshadowing suggest that people will develop super powers that will lead to a lot interesting confrontations
Замечательный роман. Оригинальная история, интересное развитие сюжета и главного героя. Печалит лишь то что, глав очень мало и приходится долго ждать продолжения данного произведения
Good Story. Please give us more chapters. From now on two stones are 4 u. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the 1st book and how the author reads our (the readers) comments and makes changes to the story to make it even better. I like that the story is on the slow-side 'cause many novels introduce too many new characters and plot-twists so as to get the story more interesting but forget to flesh out the choices the characters make and overall the world around them. The MC as of now is still not OP as this is not one of the novels where MC is instantly given enormous powers. The MC has to train bit by bit to get more powerful but still it's enough so that the MC is not helpless against normal mobs who also get nicely fleshed out and actually have a reason for being there and making the important characters seem more alive. For you other readers out there I say that this novel has one of the best built worlds of the novels I have read in QI and I deeply recommend reading this and adding it to your libraries. For the author I say that I enjoyed deeply the book 1 and can't wait to find out what happens in book 2.
The synopsis give me vibes of everyone else is a returnee so I will definitely save this for future reading. =) .................................................................................................................
Thx for the story, I hope u will reach top 10. 140 characters? Why? J3vekdodbdkeoendkfvfoe zoavdodbsbzbdeiavebdldotvebsnsozoalabsbbskfiflfldndndnd t beozpama
This is a pretty well written and enjoyable book. I’ve read several “system” novels and this one is probably in my top 5 just because of the realistic dialogue between the protagonist and the system. There’s a little bit of questionable character development regarding certain side characters but nothing that takes away from the content. Author also does well with handling properly given criticism and communicates well at the moment. (10/2/18) Will update if necessary.
Holy **** this story is good. Character development, reasonable and thoughtful romance, a clear goal for the mc, and even fantasy settings and a system? If this isn’t a good ass story, flip me over and slam a rock on my ass. Bet. Also the technical side of the story is good. Haven’t seen grammar mistakes, lengthy chapters, and thoughtful descriptions.
Wow, this was fantastic. Based on the summary and my preconceptions about the quality of most webnovels, I thought this novel would be a jumbled mess of poorly spelled words and unplanned story but it proved me wrong. Love the story, love the pacing, keep up the great work.
Very nice read. Interesting story, and some original ideas about mc raising funds. Would be nice to hear about his first try to raise funds in the future.
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MC using a innocent girl to get another girl is some what discouraging when she is depending and trust him. story is good a little slow but it is good in a way.
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Me ha gustado mucho esta novela, solo soy de leerlas y no comentó sobre ellas, pero con solo leer el capitulo 32, me pareció un momento único, continúa con ello, apoyando al 100% desde Perú :'3
Mc way of talking is annoying.. In other novels mc are ass kissers.. In this novel mc is too much questioning.. His name should be Mr. Question. And mc is too slow minded.
It's really well thought out and written, the pacing for each chapter is nice and it's not a info dump like some novels with a system. I wish you luck and hope you update stably.
I loooooooove it its so good omg its the best there is no better story this is amazing author amazing yyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Hi im a reader from Turkey. its good story better than others that i read but its slow :D update more pls. and comment shold not be less than 140 ......
I simply love how the dialogue, and explanations are written. Wonderfully written conversation like the one's in this novel are a major guilty pleasure for me. Unlike the Evolving from nothing which bore the hell out of me everytime I read the dialogue; this novel thankfully has better, thought out one's.
This is one of the best if not best original novels I have read to date and I'm not just talking about liking the cultivation and superpower, it's the depth and effort that have been put into the novel. To date this novel is one of the most concrete and hope it continues for a long time.
Very amazing novel. the pace is a little slower compared to most novels but perfectly fine in my opinion. its a shame i cant vote more than 3 times to upvote this novel. and the fact that its only on chapter 70+ may put other off to it for now. overall, this store can have a long shelf life, i wouldnt mind if you go premium. if u release 100 chapters premium. ill buy 100 chapters worth of crystals. thats how much i think this novel is worth.
BEST ORIGINAL STORY I'VE READ. Great plot, nice world backround, likeable mc, and great pace of the story. Wish more chapters though. MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel worth a read, hope the author didn't drop this. I like the story background and the explanation of the system is so well written.
I really like this story. I typically like stories that take place in modern time with fantasy elements to it. So this one is right up my alley. I love the characters and I hope to see them grow into even better characters!
New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already! The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging. I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable! Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing! As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!
This Godly existence is now opening his malevolent dormant eyes to see flow of the fate again and shall deem this piece of work worthy of his Hollyness.
Reveal Spoiler This is a surprisingly good story for this website. Side characters have their own personalities and the MC is alright if a little wasteful of his abilities. Setting is well thought out so far, If this story can keep its momentum it will definitely remain one of the best on web novel.
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Reveal Spoiler This is definitely one of the better stories I've been following here on webnovel. I've read up to chapter 66, and I feel this has given me a good enough sample to write a review. TL;DR (Too long; didn't read): At first I thought "Oh, it's yet another cultivation story." Anything with the word "cultivation" in the title is usually going to have something along the lines of meditation, martial arts, medicines that help you sweat out the impurities of your body, etc. Yet, this story is different as it puts cultivation into a more modern context. I highly recommend it. Writing quality: Grammar and spelling are excellent, and I can't remember anything in the story that sticks out as having any issues. Updates: I'd love to see more updates! This is the only point that I gave 4 stars instead of 5. I'm getting ready to read the story again from the beginning because I like the story so much. I'm sure with the foreknowledge I have there will be some things I've missed I will pick up this second time around. Maybe someone who knows the author can chain them to the hamster wheel and crack the whip to get them to produce more. =) Story Development: Everything seems to happen at a good pace. It is not too fast and not too slow. There is the occasional viewpoint of another person, but it adds to the story and is not just filler text. Even better, it feels like the alternate viewpoints help set the stage for events that will happen later on in the story. There are some unexpected twists (especially at the beginning) that keep a reader interested and wondering how the characters will respond and react to the world around them. Character Design: The characters are believable and consistent. You can understand why they do what they do. Some of the choices a character makes may seem obvious (if A happens then do B). Yet the characters struggle with some of the more complex decisions. They try their best, and you don't know if they will succeed. This isn't some "wish fulfillment" story where you know everything will work out as expected in the end. World Background: What happens to the main character is something unique to get the story going. A series of coincidences that bounces him around like rolling a d20 on a tabletop. His number comes up and he is placed in the right spot where he can do the most for himself and his family. He is the first of his kind in the modern world, and the story describes his struggles within that setting.
I love this book it is addictive and interesting and is super underaited I recommend this to anyone looking for something unique or addictive I hope the author does not dropp this or get bored of writing this the author could add in new things to make it less borring like him conquering planets with his powers or with the help of others or another idea is adding kingdom building elements or going to fictional worlds or sci-fi worlds I hope the author adds in those things and I hope the author makes a 1000+ chapters
I have read up to the end of book 1 and will be dropping this book. The author and the world have great potential but there were two things that killed it for me personally. The first was that the details of this novel just seem subtly wrong. A good example of what I mean is the response to a comet coming near earth. This happens semi-regularly in the real world and the various responses people have to it (from cults proclaiming the end of days to nothing at all) are fairly well known. In this world though, every world leader gives an IDENTICAL speech at exactly the same time to reassure all citizens of their countries. Everyone in the world stops working and hides in their house with emergency food for days before the comet comes. After the comet flies by the planet, there is worldwide rioting for days. This is insane. Why??? There are a lot of oddities like this in the novel that stand out and were regularly breaking my immersion in the story. The other issue is the tone. This book is about teenagers in high school (one of whom has super powers). Great. But our super hero straight up permanently disables his fellow students because he doesn't like them. His principal murders a man for threatening a student (even when the man has no way to carry out such a threat). The good guys in this novel are violent and dark. That is the GOOD guys. In a novel about teenage super heroes. It reminds me of books like the meta world chronicles over at royal road and that is not a good thing. It feels like if I was reading the first Harry Potter book and Harry was permanently cursing kids in Slitherin because of fights at school and Dumbledore murdered Harry's muggle family for being pricks. It isn't that this is impossible just a really jarring tone in that kind of book. That said I really liked the original take on reincarnating. Selling music, videogames, Youtube channels, etc. were all great ideas. The cultivation system was well done. The characters were fairly well developed and change over time which is great. The writing is excellent with few to no noticeable grammatical or spelling issues. I definitely think the author is talented and is doing a great job for a first novel.
Reveal Spoiler A realistic story about a normal guy who reincarnates to a normal parallel world. The approach is refreshing as book 1 takes us on a journey where the MC he is discovering the cultivation aspects and making terms with the parallel world. Not much in terms of fighting in book 1 however the foreshadowing suggest that people will develop super powers that will lead to a lot interesting confrontations
Замечательный роман. Оригинальная история, интересное развитие сюжета и главного героя. Печалит лишь то что, глав очень мало и приходится долго ждать продолжения данного произведения
Good Story. Please give us more chapters. From now on two stones are 4 u. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the 1st book and how the author reads our (the readers) comments and makes changes to the story to make it even better. I like that the story is on the slow-side 'cause many novels introduce too many new characters and plot-twists so as to get the story more interesting but forget to flesh out the choices the characters make and overall the world around them. The MC as of now is still not OP as this is not one of the novels where MC is instantly given enormous powers. The MC has to train bit by bit to get more powerful but still it's enough so that the MC is not helpless against normal mobs who also get nicely fleshed out and actually have a reason for being there and making the important characters seem more alive. For you other readers out there I say that this novel has one of the best built worlds of the novels I have read in QI and I deeply recommend reading this and adding it to your libraries. For the author I say that I enjoyed deeply the book 1 and can't wait to find out what happens in book 2.
The synopsis give me vibes of everyone else is a returnee so I will definitely save this for future reading. =) .................................................................................................................
Thx for the story, I hope u will reach top 10. 140 characters? Why? J3vekdodbdkeoendkfvfoe zoavdodbsbzbdeiavebdldotvebsnsozoalabsbbskfiflfldndndnd t beozpama
This is a pretty well written and enjoyable book. I’ve read several “system” novels and this one is probably in my top 5 just because of the realistic dialogue between the protagonist and the system. There’s a little bit of questionable character development regarding certain side characters but nothing that takes away from the content. Author also does well with handling properly given criticism and communicates well at the moment. (10/2/18) Will update if necessary.
Holy **** this story is good. Character development, reasonable and thoughtful romance, a clear goal for the mc, and even fantasy settings and a system? If this isn’t a good ass story, flip me over and slam a rock on my ass. Bet. Also the technical side of the story is good. Haven’t seen grammar mistakes, lengthy chapters, and thoughtful descriptions.
Wow, this was fantastic. Based on the summary and my preconceptions about the quality of most webnovels, I thought this novel would be a jumbled mess of poorly spelled words and unplanned story but it proved me wrong. Love the story, love the pacing, keep up the great work.
Very nice read. Interesting story, and some original ideas about mc raising funds. Would be nice to hear about his first try to raise funds in the future.
Reveal Spoiler MC using a innocent girl to get another girl is some what discouraging when she is depending and trust him. story is good a little slow but it is good in a way.
Reveal Spoiler Me ha gustado mucho esta novela, solo soy de leerlas y no comentó sobre ellas, pero con solo leer el capitulo 32, me pareció un momento único, continúa con ello, apoyando al 100% desde Perú :'3
Mc way of talking is annoying.. In other novels mc are ass kissers.. In this novel mc is too much questioning.. His name should be Mr. Question. And mc is too slow minded.
It's really well thought out and written, the pacing for each chapter is nice and it's not a info dump like some novels with a system. I wish you luck and hope you update stably.
I loooooooove it its so good omg its the best there is no better story this is amazing author amazing yyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Hi im a reader from Turkey. its good story better than others that i read but its slow :D update more pls. and comment shold not be less than 140 ......