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This novel was pretty good, although a bit short. Still, I think it's worth reading! However, for a man so used to killing it seems he is not as bloodthirsty as in his previous circumstance
I don't really have much bad to say about this. The writing quality is amazing. If I had one complaint, it's that the author stretches out each part of the story for WAAAAY too long. Like seriously, two fights and it's taken 50 chapters...
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Not bad. This is one of my favorite light novels I have read. Stories great. Quality is very good. Plot is a bit different than what most novel out there.
A great story, the character are well written and the writing style is perfect for this novel I highly recommend this book for anyone who loves to get sucked in to a fantasy world and encounter lots of new things
This is a good story so far. I hope the MC continues to get good quests and never gets asked by the system to do an evil quest. I will continue to read this series as long as the author continues to write it.
Fucking so....... So...... Slow story line. I read 50 chapters he is not even level 2 not intersting... It was nice only till 5th chapter....................,.............. .......................
Can't give more than this. It's been many months since a new chapter was posted. More characters needed for Qidian hmmm...................................
First time writing a review *chuckle* cos i never reached the end. I just love this book the only thing that really don't like is that there is too detailed. A bit 2 detailed for me. I'll read this 2 da end cos i like it. Well that just my opinion. Whats urz bud? it wont take long 4 u 2 reach da end took me less then a day 101 chapter that is
Good story but he gives too much details,but I still like it,If only he uploaded more chapters. Rotten Fruit Black bugs have long since chewed through my flesh. I lie on a bed of moss so cold it stings just letting the rot set in deeper. Waiting for the rot to pierce my core, and decompose my prison. My imprisoned soul will then, wearing a pea-green vest, leap out grinning from ear to ear.
the movie is great. the character development is quite okay but my problem is the UPDATE!!! what happened? are you still alive? don't let your readers hanging šš
Here's Ur 5star. Ur welcome ..... Damn u 140 character. .......x..d.d.d.d.d.s..ss..d.s.d.s.d.d..s.s.s.s.s.s.s..s ..f.f.s..d.d.d..d.d.d.d...d.d..d.d.d.d...
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It's a good story, the question is... Am I ready for more action? I need a sugar candy of very well stories and now, I'll wait for it. My chapters' so low, where is my delicious story for reading?
Probably dead now. All the good original novels just die out after sometime. Like The book of the universe. The author isnāt even putting up a notice or anything.
Did the novel die? There haven't been any updates for a few weeks now :/ Ireally like the novel and I was looking forward to how he was going to do in "the outside" after he left the training area, but I guess we may never find out what will happen :(
Nice story. Gore but funny. I read till chapter 77 so I cant say much. But his encounter with wolf king is exciting although a anticlimatic funny. Lol
I am very biased when reviewing this because it's one of if not my favourite novel on this site. Since this review has to be 140 characters my only problem is the rate of release for the chapters is a bit slow.
Just a suggestion: We haven't seen his states in quite awhile so other than knowing vaguely that he got a power boost that's about all we have to go on. No need for a full rundown of skills every time, but seeing his basic stat progression helps readers see his progress as the story progresses.
good+++++very good series, thanks for writing this series, but seriously do not kill with the wait to continue please, anything waiting for the continuation, and what happened with the zombie monster challenge of poison? did not acquire the exp?
Ive been waiting for the update....shocks..this sucks.. I totally like your the story. ?..... .....?.?.?...sshsjsjwnhshdvdjajnshshsbsbshbdbdhshajakkahshdhdbdbsbdbndÄjjjdjjsjsjsjjsjsjsjjsjsjsnsmnsnsnnsnsnsnnsndbsnjsnsnsnnsnsnsnnshd tx yyctcf be hrbrbdbdbxhtcdbbrbdhd. Egdyxgvdb eh d
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Enjoyed this book. Good plot and story line. Would like to see more. Over all characters are very likable with good back ground (not to much) story line was well written. Couple of inconsistencies but nothing major. Story progression was good. Made you want to turn the next page and find out what happened next.
A hitman is someone paid to kill but the mc seems to kill for fun, training, then payment..given his background in the mafia where he worked his way up and the training given to him by his family his actions in the new world goes from smart (training new skills, learning basic information from codex, fighting weak easy to kill rabbits and learning the limits of his current body) to dumb (fighting a wolf pack when all his fighting instincts tell him he could be killed ..only to survive due to plot armor since author forgot that spells need to be spoken and people need to breath yet he kept using 'blink' while running up a tree as if his low stats gave him greater lung capacity then 2 high level elite wolfs). then plot armor gave him a means to boost stats to the heavens and earn exp and skills and knowledge just by extracting an item from anything dead making it so at a low level he can jump ranks to kill 30+ levels things with just his stats and stolen skills..all the while he forgets he had crafting skills so he went around nude even when he got plenty of furs and leather to use for clothing crafting and plenty of wood around plus bones to use to make bone weapons, arrows, bow, ect.. the system, stats, skills , world building (if i close one eye to the dumb rabbit that befriends the strange hairless being in a forest that should not have such a creature and ask/leads it back to its race safe haven) , and story potential but then over powered plot armor killed what could have been a long arc of training and survival struggling after his 7 day damage reduction and fast healing ended letting him truly enjoy the harsh and harder fights (even as he curses his current weaker body due to what he had but lost for the current chance) that his persona seemed to indicate due to him getting bored of being the strongest on his world thus took the chance and went to this world (which due to plot armor he would end up as even faster then in his old world where he train to get there but now he just needs to eat some sparks from powerful beings and gain stats and skills)..then there was his avoidance to the poison plants that with the blessing he had could have been eaten to gain resistance among other things he could have trained which includes his crafting skills trying to learn combat skills and basic magics of other elements (since all he needed was a good image and repeating action from what the codex said and then he should have been able to make things like a elemental manipulation for earth and water so not to have to leave far from his safe zone while hunting small amounts of rabbits and working his way to larger stronger monsters)
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Good work, keep it up! Don't be disappointed by negative comments, or pace of novel , you're doing a fine job. There are many sham systems out here, which in the end were old men hidden under disguise of system, and helping the MC time to time, bro don't do that, that's ****, pure ****... As any logical, rational person will doubt such system(there's a novel in which MC on further increasing power dissolves the system as he doubts its reason) creating a flaw most novels, you've corrected it here... That's cool... Keep em releasin
Oh God 100 chapters holy **** my brother 5/5/5/5/5 ratings and 0/10=10/10 fk yah mother ****eds and ****q I'm saying lol 140 words so kfidkijdofmormfdmf
I stopped reading three books before this one. They had an interesting idea and I wanted to like them. I did not. This one I read in one go. It is well written, the story is interesting and I want more of it. The beginning is different than the rest, so don't be afraid of the real book because of the weird way of writing at the start of the book. This is fun to read. I like overpowered. And NO harem! Yeah! Not even some stupid other person who follows him forever. He is alone most of the time and and he is cool! 2xYeah! About the stars... first I though, this is a much better system than many others, if I don't know about one category, I don't have to give stars. This is not true :-( You have to give stars for every category. So I gave 4 stars for "Stability of Updates" but I have no idea and don't care about it. I read it in one go until the leaving of the first area. So how would I know?
First time giving a 5 star review.... please release more chapters............................................................................
Ok bro. I just finished reading first 72ch. Italiano?? :) good for you. I wish to see the end of this novel, but i really think you will never finish. Why? --- the pace of the novel is at š speed. Very, very slow. --- in first 70ch nothing much happened. In this style, he will finish the first planet in....1000ch? --- the story will take place on 9 planets, so , we should expect about 9000ch ? U're ambitiously, i like it. But try to stay true. --- the problem is that you give too much details , for everything, and you have many "empty" chapters. This is what u need to work off. The novel has a unique flavor, and i like it very much. I love the MC, the world, the monsters. Probably, like many others, you dream to be a good author. But it is not easy. And all of them started with short novels, 400-500-700ch. This is what you need to look for, the end goal, to finish this story. If you can not finish it, you will go to the other side, the side where are a lot of authors who gone in hiatus, and almost nobody will read another novel of them. Back to topic, is a good story, a nice flavor, finally i see the diference between 10 Int and 1000 Int. Not just another stat thrown there. Ok. Make a plan for the novel. A plan where you actually see the final product. Try to limit the details, the explanations , i think everyone knows what the **** is "heal" and "blink". It is not the first time when we see it.Don't try to make a long novel. U need a fan base. Fan base are made with finished novels. I hope you will read this š . I really like your work. Sorry for my english, but i hope that u got my message. āš»
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Hahaha one of the best novels I have ever read. I sincerely hope that the author will complete this story and let us see its ending. Keep up the good work.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This novel was pretty good, although a bit short. Still, I think it's worth reading! However, for a man so used to killing it seems he is not as bloodthirsty as in his previous circumstance
I don't really have much bad to say about this. The writing quality is amazing. If I had one complaint, it's that the author stretches out each part of the story for WAAAAY too long. Like seriously, two fights and it's taken 50 chapters...
Jzjsjsjkdkxkdkdkdkdkdjdjdjdjdjdjjdndndndnxjxjdjndjdjdjdjdjdjxjxjdjjdjdbhbjbbbhhchhghkj+jnnjbnjjjjbhhjjjnjjjjhhhgghhhjjjjjhvvvhhvvbjnvbhvfghhhhhhhgghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjiii
Not bad. This is one of my favorite light novels I have read. Stories great. Quality is very good. Plot is a bit different than what most novel out there.
A great story, the character are well written and the writing style is perfect for this novel I highly recommend this book for anyone who loves to get sucked in to a fantasy world and encounter lots of new things
This is a good story so far. I hope the MC continues to get good quests and never gets asked by the system to do an evil quest. I will continue to read this series as long as the author continues to write it.
Fucking so....... So...... Slow story line. I read 50 chapters he is not even level 2 not intersting... It was nice only till 5th chapter....................,.............. .......................
Can't give more than this. It's been many months since a new chapter was posted. More characters needed for Qidian hmmm...................................
First time writing a review *chuckle* cos i never reached the end. I just love this book the only thing that really don't like is that there is too detailed. A bit 2 detailed for me. I'll read this 2 da end cos i like it. Well that just my opinion. Whats urz bud? it wont take long 4 u 2 reach da end took me less then a day 101 chapter that is
Good story but he gives too much details,but I still like it,If only he uploaded more chapters. Rotten Fruit Black bugs have long since chewed through my flesh. I lie on a bed of moss so cold it stings just letting the rot set in deeper. Waiting for the rot to pierce my core, and decompose my prison. My imprisoned soul will then, wearing a pea-green vest, leap out grinning from ear to ear.
the movie is great. the character development is quite okay but my problem is the UPDATE!!! what happened? are you still alive? don't let your readers hanging šš
Here's Ur 5star. Ur welcome ..... Damn u 140 character. .......x..d.d.d.d.d.s..ss..d.s.d.s.d.d..s.s.s.s.s.s.s..s ..f.f.s..d.d.d..d.d.d.d...d.d..d.d.d.d...
Reveal Spoiler It's a good story, the question is... Am I ready for more action? I need a sugar candy of very well stories and now, I'll wait for it. My chapters' so low, where is my delicious story for reading?
Probably dead now. All the good original novels just die out after sometime. Like The book of the universe. The author isnāt even putting up a notice or anything.
Did the novel die? There haven't been any updates for a few weeks now :/ Ireally like the novel and I was looking forward to how he was going to do in "the outside" after he left the training area, but I guess we may never find out what will happen :(
Nice story. Gore but funny. I read till chapter 77 so I cant say much. But his encounter with wolf king is exciting although a anticlimatic funny. Lol
I am very biased when reviewing this because it's one of if not my favourite novel on this site. Since this review has to be 140 characters my only problem is the rate of release for the chapters is a bit slow.
Just a suggestion: We haven't seen his states in quite awhile so other than knowing vaguely that he got a power boost that's about all we have to go on. No need for a full rundown of skills every time, but seeing his basic stat progression helps readers see his progress as the story progresses.
good+++++very good series, thanks for writing this series, but seriously do not kill with the wait to continue please, anything waiting for the continuation, and what happened with the zombie monster challenge of poison? did not acquire the exp?
Ive been waiting for the update....shocks..this sucks.. I totally like your the story. ?..... .....?.?.?...sshsjsjwnhshdvdjajnshshsbsbshbdbdhshajakkahshdhdbdbsbdbndÄjjjdjjsjsjsjjsjsjsjjsjsjsnsmnsnsnnsnsnsnnsndbsnjsnsnsnnsnsnsnnshd tx yyctcf be hrbrbdbdbxhtcdbbrbdhd. Egdyxgvdb eh d
Reveal Spoiler Enjoyed this book. Good plot and story line. Would like to see more. Over all characters are very likable with good back ground (not to much) story line was well written. Couple of inconsistencies but nothing major. Story progression was good. Made you want to turn the next page and find out what happened next.
A hitman is someone paid to kill but the mc seems to kill for fun, training, then payment..given his background in the mafia where he worked his way up and the training given to him by his family his actions in the new world goes from smart (training new skills, learning basic information from codex, fighting weak easy to kill rabbits and learning the limits of his current body) to dumb (fighting a wolf pack when all his fighting instincts tell him he could be killed ..only to survive due to plot armor since author forgot that spells need to be spoken and people need to breath yet he kept using 'blink' while running up a tree as if his low stats gave him greater lung capacity then 2 high level elite wolfs). then plot armor gave him a means to boost stats to the heavens and earn exp and skills and knowledge just by extracting an item from anything dead making it so at a low level he can jump ranks to kill 30+ levels things with just his stats and stolen skills..all the while he forgets he had crafting skills so he went around nude even when he got plenty of furs and leather to use for clothing crafting and plenty of wood around plus bones to use to make bone weapons, arrows, bow, ect.. the system, stats, skills , world building (if i close one eye to the dumb rabbit that befriends the strange hairless being in a forest that should not have such a creature and ask/leads it back to its race safe haven) , and story potential but then over powered plot armor killed what could have been a long arc of training and survival struggling after his 7 day damage reduction and fast healing ended letting him truly enjoy the harsh and harder fights (even as he curses his current weaker body due to what he had but lost for the current chance) that his persona seemed to indicate due to him getting bored of being the strongest on his world thus took the chance and went to this world (which due to plot armor he would end up as even faster then in his old world where he train to get there but now he just needs to eat some sparks from powerful beings and gain stats and skills)..then there was his avoidance to the poison plants that with the blessing he had could have been eaten to gain resistance among other things he could have trained which includes his crafting skills trying to learn combat skills and basic magics of other elements (since all he needed was a good image and repeating action from what the codex said and then he should have been able to make things like a elemental manipulation for earth and water so not to have to leave far from his safe zone while hunting small amounts of rabbits and working his way to larger stronger monsters)
Reveal Spoiler Good work, keep it up! Don't be disappointed by negative comments, or pace of novel , you're doing a fine job. There are many sham systems out here, which in the end were old men hidden under disguise of system, and helping the MC time to time, bro don't do that, that's ****, pure ****... As any logical, rational person will doubt such system(there's a novel in which MC on further increasing power dissolves the system as he doubts its reason) creating a flaw most novels, you've corrected it here... That's cool... Keep em releasin
Oh God 100 chapters holy **** my brother 5/5/5/5/5 ratings and 0/10=10/10 fk yah mother ****eds and ****q I'm saying lol 140 words so kfidkijdofmormfdmf
I stopped reading three books before this one. They had an interesting idea and I wanted to like them. I did not. This one I read in one go. It is well written, the story is interesting and I want more of it. The beginning is different than the rest, so don't be afraid of the real book because of the weird way of writing at the start of the book. This is fun to read. I like overpowered. And NO harem! Yeah! Not even some stupid other person who follows him forever. He is alone most of the time and and he is cool! 2xYeah! About the stars... first I though, this is a much better system than many others, if I don't know about one category, I don't have to give stars. This is not true :-( You have to give stars for every category. So I gave 4 stars for "Stability of Updates" but I have no idea and don't care about it. I read it in one go until the leaving of the first area. So how would I know?
First time giving a 5 star review.... please release more chapters............................................................................
Ok bro. I just finished reading first 72ch. Italiano?? :) good for you. I wish to see the end of this novel, but i really think you will never finish. Why? --- the pace of the novel is at š speed. Very, very slow. --- in first 70ch nothing much happened. In this style, he will finish the first planet in....1000ch? --- the story will take place on 9 planets, so , we should expect about 9000ch ? U're ambitiously, i like it. But try to stay true. --- the problem is that you give too much details , for everything, and you have many "empty" chapters. This is what u need to work off. The novel has a unique flavor, and i like it very much. I love the MC, the world, the monsters. Probably, like many others, you dream to be a good author. But it is not easy. And all of them started with short novels, 400-500-700ch. This is what you need to look for, the end goal, to finish this story. If you can not finish it, you will go to the other side, the side where are a lot of authors who gone in hiatus, and almost nobody will read another novel of them. Back to topic, is a good story, a nice flavor, finally i see the diference between 10 Int and 1000 Int. Not just another stat thrown there. Ok. Make a plan for the novel. A plan where you actually see the final product. Try to limit the details, the explanations , i think everyone knows what the **** is "heal" and "blink". It is not the first time when we see it.Don't try to make a long novel. U need a fan base. Fan base are made with finished novels. I hope you will read this š . I really like your work. Sorry for my english, but i hope that u got my message. āš»
Reveal Spoiler Hahaha one of the best novels I have ever read. I sincerely hope that the author will complete this story and let us see its ending. Keep up the good work.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.