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HIDDEN GEM ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
WoW just WoW.. The idea behind this story is very well brought, like the background and plot alike.. And I also like the story so far and its interesting to know where his limit is and what's his limit.. And to also know who will be his allies or enemies.. Especially his Waifu or Waifus.. So I will stick to the story and find out, what's in store for me...
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (1st Review) I like it. Maybe you will. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The characters personality, skills, power , and intelligence doesn’t even match up on the background you gave him. Add to the fact that you severely NERF him. The beggining chapters could be compiled as an entire chapter. Too much info dump at the beginning. The MC could have learn some of those things on his journey. The grammar is superb and the writing is good. The only real problem is how you represent your MC. Think of how a real battle hardened assassin would act. His background is a huge joke.
HIDDEN GEM ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
WoW just WoW.. The idea behind this story is very well brought, like the background and plot alike.. And I also like the story so far and its interesting to know where his limit is and what's his limit.. And to also know who will be his allies or enemies.. Especially his Waifu or Waifus.. So I will stick to the story and find out, what's in store for me...
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (1st Review) I like it. Maybe you will. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The characters personality, skills, power , and intelligence doesn’t even match up on the background you gave him. Add to the fact that you severely NERF him. The beggining chapters could be compiled as an entire chapter. Too much info dump at the beginning. The MC could have learn some of those things on his journey. The grammar is superb and the writing is good. The only real problem is how you represent your MC. Think of how a real battle hardened assassin would act. His background is a huge joke.