Lovely Writing System

LV 5

I didn't plan on writing a review but I got really mad seeing the score this novel has so here we go. (`A´) - - Writing Quality - The quality is (O▽O)d . The text is well structured, it's separated into paragraphs so we don't have to struggle with a wall of text -- as compared to some "5 star" fan fictions with horrifying grammar. Stability of Updates - I usually check for updates at an interval of 2-3 days? //'cause I hate reading only one chapter and having to wait// So I can't really comment on this, but I believe that the author isn't the kind to keep us waiting unless something serious happens in rl. (＾▽＾)/ Story Development - I consider it to be not too fast and not too slow, it's steady paced, at least that's how I see it . Although there are misunderstandings between the novel's characters they aren't dragged on for long so the frustration over them doesn't built up. (´꒳`;) - - unlike some other novels that shall not be named. Character Design - First of all I gotta say I absolutely love you for not going with the usual cold, possessive and obsessive gong/seme. I had to drop some bl's just because the gong didn't do anything else other than restricting the shou's liberty and flying airplanes/batting one out/mating like bunnies all day, more times than not without the shou's consent. (ಥ﹏ಥ) Both the Nie Chang and Su Yan are likable characters. The way Su Yan acts after they get together is absolutely adorable, I like the fact that he isn't all tense around Ah Chang as opposed to how the mainstream shous are around the gong. Ah Chang actually waits for Su Yan to be ready to go to a further stage in their relationship and that's what a healthy relationship is supposed to be like. _(:3」∠)_ World Background - We're told what we need to know about the character's background, there is no useless information dump here. I don't think the world background is that important here and we don't really need to know more about it as the story is set in the modern world. I don't think we need more information about the Heaven Corporation as all that we need to know about it has been said. I'm not going to talk about the system, go read it and find out more on your own. 〜(꒪꒳꒪)/ So to finish this off, the novel is definitely worth a read and I wish there could be an option for the authors to report a review and get it removed when it doesn't give any actual information about it. - - The following text is unnecessary but I really wanted to talk about this : The only reason this has a score of 4.1 is because of three idiots, let's call them 1, 2 and 3. 1 - Rated this 1 star and questioned if the site is trying to "turn him gay"- Yes, that's how it works. That was the plan all along. ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) 2 - The novel apparently didn't have stable updates at some point and they gave it 1 star, didn't bother to delete the review afterwards. 3 - Actually accused the author of using "code words", it's called abbreviation honey (◕‿◕✿) I also gotta quote "May you all fry in hell"- - Thank you, just because you said that we will all turn into chicken nuggets and fries in hell. Yes. - - Anyway thank you author for writing this. I really enjoy reading it. 〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜

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6yr 50

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LV 5

HaelBlue

Hello there author-ge please continue to update this story as a fujoshi im liking it so much so please author-ge make the update faster so that we can reached the peak thank you aute-ge more power and spread the love of bl....

6yr 21

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LV 5

LetMeSleep

Haven't read a chap yet... but, BL story? Five stars! This is another wonderful novel by the author. Keep up the good work. I'll go read it now. 😘

6yr 17

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LV 5

YinNaga

Whelp looks like I've found my newest drug of choice. Its addicting and just like this Authers other novel it is very well written and well thought out. I love the misunderstandings it's funny ,it's cute, its deff worth a read.

6yr 13

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LV 11

Lazy_Kizu

This is a BL novel about a writer who got a system about writing *duh*. But it's main genre is BL. 😍 The protagonist is very dense about relationship or love life. And the male lead showed us the meaning of 'patience is a virtue'.

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6yr 6

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LV 12

LindaHere

Omg!!!!! I LOVE this!!!!! This is so adorable! The male lead is so adorably clueless, it makes me want to shake him sometimes! But the Gong! Omg he just about killed me inside sometimes! He’s got a good character, I loved how he was! Please let the main couple get together soon! My heart can’t take it!

6yr 6

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LV 12

DragonEmperors

A good book and excellent grammar and easily understandable and yet I have to forgot this series. I'm almost drown to the dark side of the abyss for men. Fuh... I'm still sane and straight. If I further read this, I will be corrupted. Author, I fear of this book... *click* *delete from library. * Security protocol has been completed. The breach has been repaired. "Fuh~~."

6yr 4

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LV 2

Nyunyu20

Well really love it, actually at first i think su yan personality is a little bit annoying, but i changed it. It actually so adorable, and i want a boyfriend like ah chang so awesome

4yr 3

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LV 13

Susmo

.....................................................................................................................I JUST CAN'T STOP MYSELFE FROM READING IT UNTIL I FELL ASLEEP.................. ..............WELL IT WAS 4AM AND I CAN'T HELP MYSELF TO FALL ASLEEP........................................... ....PLEASE ..PLEASE ..PLEASE MAKE IT AS FAST AS YOU CAN TO UPLOAD AS MUCH AS YOU CAN ....... ..LOVE YOU AUTHOR LOVE YOU TRANSLER LOVE YOU READERS ...OOH OH LOVE MYSELF ..................SPREAD LOVE.................. .

5yr 3

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LV 3

A6USTHEE

To be honest, i just started reading just a few days ago and I really have to read it fast but also enjoying too. I read that this will be taken down in webnovel and i have really enjoyed everything so far, especially the substories this novel has. Thank you author!

4yr 2

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LV 11

Canthink_

Great story. Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up the good work.Keep up

4yr 2

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LV 4

Abraham54

It was a lovely story and I really enjoyed it so much and I would be really glad if you can kindly work more on the updates of the chapter please

4yr 2

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LV 14

Stephanime

I’m stuck with this one. When I was filling out the rating stars I was like yeah it’s well written, updated on time, characters are well rounded, story line is interesting and the world is understandable with rules established. But after hitting chapter 150 I had a bit of a block and couldn’t go on. I still think it’s a great book and hope to return to it later but yeah, give it a go! Apparently not my cup of tea atm but maybe someone else’s 😁

4yr 2

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LV 4

NyanBeast11011

This was actually one of the first novels i read on webnovel, and oml it is amazing! I really hope many people read this novel, and continue to suport it. I really like the details and the logic in how it is written. And im a sucker for bl so what else can i say. (✪ω✪) at the least i will continue to support it in ways i can, wich might not be all amazing and stuff but i try. (Ps for those reading this review im sorry if there are any grammar fails or wrong words. English is not my first language... Ψ(￣▽￣)Ψ (◞‸◟))

5yr 2

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LV 3

petitepaddington

this is my second time reading through as i need to catch up and it’s just as adorable and addictive as i remember! full of fluff and lots of funny moments. i highly recommend it if you can tolerate a pretty dense protagonist (he’s worth it i promise).

5yr 2

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LV 5

vcry

I don't like it . .. . .............................. because yaoi . . . . . 1 hope is normal ....................... .... .. ... ........

5yr 2

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LV 5

randomsomething

Not my cup of tea, but not bad at all. Romance is great and well developed. Recomend you read it if you like the genre. Ps. Dont worry they aren't going at it like rabbits and the characters are being well developed.

6yr 2

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LV 6

crimson_carnation

This is another great story from this author! I usually prefer stories with more fantasy elements, but decided to give this a try because I like this author's writing style and story execution. And I'm so glad I did. The story itself is relaxing and slow-paced, like taking a leisurely stroll. The fluff and humor are integrated so well. Nothing seems forced or rushed, everything taking exactly the time it should. The characters are all unique with their own places in the story, each playing their part as the story unfolds. The official Shen Lu is like every BL lover as she subtly guides our protagonists towards each other. Our MC Su Yan is denser than a black hole, hilariously missing or explaining away all of the ML's attempts at wooing him. And then there's the ML himself, Nie Chang, who has been pursuing the MC since their school days, only for the MC to never notice his subtle or overt signs of infatuation. The system also plays a central part in the romance by issuing BL-related tasks and Su Yan tries hard to interpret it in a straight way as the system works harder to turn him bent. It was truly so satisfying to see Su Yan and Nie Chang get together and see them interact with each other as lovers. They are so sweet, yet funny, when together. They support and care for each other so wholeheartedly, without any of that wishy-washy nonsense that most other pairs get stuck into. As slow as the romance was in building, I truly don't think it could have been put together in a better way. To summarize: This is a great romantic story, with a system that tries to push the main couple together, quirky, well-constructed characters that add flavor to the story, and interactions that are sweet, funny and fluffy. It's truly worth a read.