The anti-hero

LV 14

Xaact

Writing quality is very bad, think teh author need to relearn his/her english. Character and world development is not well tought everything is rigged so the hero “fell” its not believable nor logical.

LV 6

Armand_Targaryen

I loved this novel, thank you translator friend, please publish more chapters _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 5

Leonardo

O novel e muito foda eu gostei muito das missoes e principalmente do personagem peço que o autor continue e novel pois e muito foda, um dos melhores novel que ja li

LV 12

Shadow_Kil

Grammar is bad the story is ok at first but then he goes to another world for a month gets captured and tortured get rescued by some random old man that old man dies he goes back to his world and nothing changes the world development sucks just writing random ****

LV 5

SeaVen

The GRAMMAR has full of errors ! Its hard to re think your meaning in every sentence because of grammar ! What is your age author ? Is it 13 yrs old?

LV 5

Precheur

Well despite the not so good grammar, it's quite nice to read, so i give you 5 to motivate you to continue to write. Keep going, and correct yourself when you have time, after all it's just a jet 1

LV 6

CZ2128_Delta

please fix your chapters before posting it..the grammar is bad.. it needs a lot of work.. you should find a good editor........................................................................

LV 6

Normanbatez

I love system novels!! Character has a lot of room to improve and I like that fact that he’s open about things that are going around him, So far so good, hopefully it keeps its momentum.

LV 4

READERAkuma

I dont recommend this ****, at the begging its ok, but the more you read the more f this **** becomes, so to not f you mind, i will sugest you to not read this bull****,, at the end! TAKE CARE OF YOUR BRAIN AND F THIS

LV 6

Lv99

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LV 14

Skepparn

Unbearably weak mc and truly trashy worldbuilding but works if you've got nothing else to read and wanna see a weak mc getting stronger and killing lots of ppl as revenge

LV 5

Pripriri

SO. BAD....... THE TITLE IS ANTI HERO BUT.WHY IS THIS. MC SAVING PEOPLE.?? AND HE CANT EVEN KEEP HIS SECRET FOR. HIMSELF.... HAIXT.. CLICK BAIT TITLE.. DONT READ GUYS YOU WILL JUST BE DISSAPOINTED.. TITLE.IS BADASS BUT THE TRUTH IS MC HAVE HERO. COMPLEX...

LV 14

Tiktark

I love this novel, i hope you keep working on this project, im looking forward to more chapters. ........................................

LV 13

N_addictOoO

Great novel tbh. Only concern is the grammar, there are some chapters that have almost zero grammar mistakes but there is also chapters that are practically unreadable. Though, the author has shown improvement in his most recent chapters. I would recommend that the author picks up an editor or at least use an online grammar checker like grammarly. Thanks for the this novel. Really enjoying it. I hope it keeps improving.

LV 4

Kira_ksa

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