/ Eastern / Across the Realms
Synopsis
A child blessed by the Astral.
An unprecedented destiny.
Watch his path, as he marches up the stairway of Heaven.
The March of a Sovereign.
[Adventure, Wuxia, Martial Arts, Fantasy]
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Write a reviewEnjoyable read. Despite having a xianxia touch, it has its own originality. The characters are not forced and events are very well defined. It has a unique design and a good plot. Hope the quality remains the same till the end.
I love the story so far, the only problem right now is that the chapter order is messed up... The editing is really good, and the story is something quite different and unique, I look forward to new updates thanks for the book!
I think the story is great, with good characters and I really like where it's going, inside info on that :) It also has good grammar. I really like Astrallis and his duality and I also like the potential love interests
Hi guys, first review really enjoyed this read but read it all so i have no clue about update frequency loved the setting loved the family (the grandmother most of all) really hope he goes to other world that are not high tier like the one he is in now
well, actually i read this novel because the "parental guidance" suggestion tag. #lol Nevermind, lets get to the point. The novel itself pretty good. First 11 Chapter not so rush. Its smooth (i gve 5 rate for writng quality) I cant say much about this novel for now, cuz thre is only 11 chapters. But so far so good. Keep your hard work writer
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So far I am enjoying this read. It's a combination of some of the novels I have read so far. Hopefully there will be consistency on the updates
I think this is one of the best books among the original novels. Keep it up!!! I hope u do not drop this novel. UpdatesUpdates UpdatesUpdates UpdatesUpdates UpdatesUpdates
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In my opinion, it's never good to start with explaining the backstory first off. It dissuades from the MC's POV at inception, whereas it could of been implemented as filler after the MC's POV manifests itself. A better introduction (imo) especially since it seems to follow the Eastern style, would of been to start off at chapter 4 more so with a few tweaks. Also I feel that at certain parts of the story you are either explaining things jussttt right or too much. Which doesn't detract from the story per se, but it is noticeable and something to be worked on. But even saying that, when you do get it right it seems so unforced and in a way I get lost in the words, much like most of the other high rated stories on this website. The story development on the other hand has been truthfully one of the best I've seen, I like the pacing of the opening chapters and leads me to believe you are quite meticulous in nature, hmmmm. Another fault in my opinion but it's pretty inconsequential is a somewhat inconsistency in word count. The humor in this piece is A1, and I find myself smiling at some rather hilarious points !!!!!!!! Very funny piece and I can't help but appreciate it's unique funny nature. C'mere Boi
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