(Dropped) Spirit Trident Douluo

LV 5

Six_Path

This a a great story, and for everybody whose looking for good Douluo Dalu (3) fanfiction, this might be just what you are looking for. For everyone out there, whose liked Sheng Feilong and Dragon King of Apocalypse, will for sure like this one too. The story pace is a little fast, but it's still withing reasonable limits. Great character and background development. For people who are thinking that I am exaggerating this story and making it seem better than it actually is, I would recommend you to read the story first and criticize me after. Any other people who are thinking that I am advertising this story for the author are in a sense absolutely right. The reason for this is so more people could read a great story like this one and to not let it be buried beneath the sand any longer.

LV 4

Lowland_

Great start so far. The author said that he has lots of story still planned so there are heaps of chapters to go before there is even a chance of it being dropped. It is a really good read. However there isn't much in the way of location description. The author relies of the readers having read the novel Douluo Dalu for some background information which I think is fair for a fan-fiction. Looking forward to what future has in store for Alex

LV 5

Blue_Sovereign

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LV 4

Daoofmilk

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LV 5

MrFlyingBoat

Thanks for the chapter, we need more bro.. Your story is too good, can you thinking about this.. Douluo dalu is the best novel ever, and then you write some fanfic this !!! I like this .. And this storyy !!! Tooo goood !!! Please dont be dropped

LV 5

charn

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LV 5

TheMothMan

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LV 5

charn

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LV 5

HeavenlySun

Good background, great development, but need a fix on that picture of yours. Everything else is pretty good, keep up the good work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 6

Subzero7

This potential to be one of the best douluo dalu fanfiction if the author doesn't just make the mc op to quickly. It worth reading and is enjoyable.

LV 7

starking

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LV 7

starking

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LV 4

paijontorj

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LV 5

SleepyNoodles

I have to say this is pretty good so far. The wishes and abilities are reasonable so far. The grammar is okay and nothing feels wrong. The only reason I gave this a 4 star is because of the other two reviews saying you may drop this so I'm not sure. But hopping you continue this story cause this is pretty good.