:)
But then Li Yusong added, "With your skills, even if you tear apart Soto City, you'll be able to handle it."
Douluo Dalu: My Soul Skills Made Tang San Cry
Anime & Comics · Senatus
:( it started off good, but in the last few chapters, there have been some pronoun issues. plz edit your chapters. i dont want to drop it this, i enjoy it. however, i will if this continues
i hate this pov so much. there is birth control, pulling out, morning after pills, birth control, not having sex on dangerous days, etc. baby killing shouldn't be considered the go for birth control
"Why?" I wanted to ask, though my mouth could only form incoherent sounds. "Why bring me into this world if you didn't want me?"
Douluo Dalu: The Abandoned Child
Book&Literature · Zentruz
agreed, i just listened to the song for the first time. it wasnt good
{BGM: "If I Ever Fall in Love (Acapella Version)" -- Shai}
Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029
yea, this novel started off well, but there has been a couple of issues these past few chapters. i hope things tighten up
[Itachi used his Mangekyō Sharingan's technique: Amaterasu, and unexpectedly killed the tailed beast transformed Fourth Mizukage, successfully escaping from the Hidden Mist Village.]
Naruto's Review : First Viewer is Senju Tobirama?
Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
shi is a couple of years older than itachi. they shouldnt have been in school together
[Coincidentally, they were best friends, and during their time in school, the two would quietly spend time together… well, mostly just chatting.]
Naruto's Review : First Viewer is Senju Tobirama?
Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
pfft, im tired of bread so everything i suggest is bread
'If she's tired of this, I'll make something special for her next time,' he thought. 'Steamed buns, dumplings, pancakes, fried dough sticks—anything but bread and milk.'
People are writing diaries in Douluo, Bibi Dong is crazy about it
Anime & Comics · Taichu
u better not, his path might be the worst possible path. its needs to add 2 attributes, posion and durability, which it doesnt possess. there is a reason ts nvr used his beginning skills later on + he only won his early fights thanks to his throwning techs or bs like fire immunity due to herbs he found. it almost ruined his first ms
"What kind of spirit beast should I aim for? Tang San's path is worth observing, but I can't follow it exactly. After all, the academy teachers definitely wouldn't help me catch a four-hundred-year-old Mandala Snake."
Douluo: I achieve godhood through System
Anime & Comics · Un1que
fair
(Note: In the original text, one gold spirit coin = ten silver = one hundred copper. This seems like an author's oversight, as otherwise, ten days' work sweeping would earn a gold coin at the academy.)
Douluo: I achieve godhood through System
Anime & Comics · Un1que
please use grammarly. You randomly use I in these last two chapters, you randomly switched tenses, and a lot of the verb choices were off. For example, "was opened" instead of just "opened". Also, it isn't president. He is the guild master. These last two chapters were almost unreadbale. A simple pass into grammarly would fix most of these issues. I really like this idea, I dont want to have to drop it due to easily fixable grammar mistakes.
The Black-Winged Demon of Fairy Tail
Anime & Comics · IA_Extra13