Apathetic_Reviewer

Everything was great but the constant intervinig of the author, every chapter there has to be some irrelevant story that has nothing to do with the novel, i'm still annoyed at the whole recipe monologue Also there irreleavnt chapters involved that would announce something or would as us to decide basic things, as one point i assumed he was asking as to write the novel for him/her, but apart from that everything was great, the character personality, the side characters, the way he approached problem etc

Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!! now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)

you say that but there's a romance tag...it's not adding up. I haven't read it due to the tag but if there isn't romance lmk...thanks

Quick review summary, i was expecting a villain when I saw the villain tag...he's not...at best a kind anti-hero, first thing that annoyed me...if you want to portray him as a villain, why give him such a massive weakness as family and try to call it his 'strength'...everything else was aight, but if you're looking for a power-hungry mc that would do everything and anything for power (as was said in the first couple chapter of this novel) don't read this

Absol amazing, pragmatic mc, he knows the dangers of this world so chooses to get as strong as possible at the beginning using…let’s say necessary actions. Towards the ends it shows he is logical and not unnecessarily emotional as he knows when to act and when to back off, when to attack and when to submit He hides his time well and waits for an opportunity to get what he wants From me personally, amazing since I hate novels with emotional and stupid then they get saved by plot armor