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摘要
The world of villains and heroes. Something right out of comic books. But for these people, it's a reality. And it's nowhere near as fun as the comics make it seem.
Tag along with Jokara, an enigma even in his own world, as he tries to discover some kind of meaning and drive for himself.
Disclaimer: Jokara will become a hero. But at the same time, his actions will often be very questionable for a hero, as well as a villain.
(This is my first story. In my opinion, it's really not that good, and I want to get much better. Please keep that in mind as you read it. I would seriously appreciate constructive criticism, but please don't be a dick about it.)
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the story had a great beginning but my only problem is the fact that for one,the Mc quirk hurts him whenever he uses it while other people can get hurt by their quirks it is only when the over use them and the author said he wanted the mc to work for his place in the world he is 8 and not only that he has the mc as an 8 year old in school with the main cast as 14 so that makes no sense because it should have been that he had a few years to train his terrible quirk. he is almost worse then deku in season 1 it had potential but the author nerfed him bad to "not make it easy" well you did a great job of that I mean he is an 8 year old kid rises in the wild with no real clue to the outside world and he has quirk that rips him apart every time he uses it and he is,once again, an 8 year old in highschool with older kids who,with the exception of deku, have trained their quirks so they don't hurt themselves. so my biggest problem is it feels like he nerfed the mc too much to the point it will just be him half dead half the time.
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This story is okay if you want to read something cool while shutting your brain down. Now, if you want a story to properly engage with, character growth, interesting narratives, etc...then don't bother, look elsewhere.
Well this shit is fire i like the mc personality a lot it makes thing pretty instreting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Honestly story is great but problem is u waste chapter and make story lose its unique way. I like it but don't like waste chapter. Use notice in author comment or beginner of chapter
Everything was great but the constant intervinig of the author, every chapter there has to be some irrelevant story that has nothing to do with the novel, i'm still annoyed at the whole recipe monologue Also there irreleavnt chapters involved that would announce something or would as us to decide basic things, as one point i assumed he was asking as to write the novel for him/her, but apart from that everything was great, the character personality, the side characters, the way he approached problem etc
Wow … This. Was. An. Awesome. Book! Any ways thanks for writing it author. Even if the last chapter was like an epilogue to wrap it up fast, you did it!
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Amazingly written fanfic. MC is ruthless and doesn't care about others' opion of him. He will do what he feels is right because he has the power to be like that. Great job!!
Its a good fan fic I like it ....................................................................................................................................................................................
It's goodㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Good fanfic! I alway liked Kimimaro and I think it’s the first novel I see with him.
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I this story so yeah I hate this system where you have to be at a certain character limit God this is dumb
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well I think it's too soon to say this is a great novel but definitely has potential I love the underrated power you don't see it often and my hero academia fanfics always fun can't wait to read some more
Ey homie i really like it so Far Update soon! The Concept is really good too! //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆○○○ - the mc has some godly plot armor. for a very strick world, he was able to commit murder (massacre), and was able to get away with it (with the most lamest excuse). and the response of the students and teachers(the school) be like: me we don't care. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆○○○ - character Design is good. - his behaviour and personality sucks. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○