"Want some hot buns? I still have a few of my honeyed special buns, want a try?" The owner of the storefront he stopped at excitedly called him and Itachi agreed to have some and paid with a copper coin before moving along.
Anime & Comics · QuackVader
To the point that I have read so far it has been an entertaining read. I may be slightly biased because I love reading books with a real life war segment like a ww2 arc and this story did well in that regard. It's also refreshing to see a story where after 15 chapters the MC is not the secret king of the world, spoon-feeding the cast characters (like captain America) the solutions to every problem. Obviously the story has some negatives like all stories do, but I believe it will be smoothed out in further chapters and I look forward to the future of the story! Also a major plus to me that Peggy Carter stays with Captain America as it feels weird otherwise :p
instead of adding the lukewarm water you could add marinara sauce
The story just felt like a recap of the story of whatever world the MC was in at that particular moment and lacked any character structure, originality, and world building/back story.
Or the whole paragraph could be reduced to "he awoke under a tree as he recalled his last moments on his private jet"
As he recalls the last thing he recalled, Greg had awoken behind a tree. After his private jet crashed in his former planet, he died and spent some time in a dark abyss until waking up here under this tree.
War · Dr_Dred
The epic of leviathan
Author deadass just looked up how many females are in "_______" series and makes that the harem lol
Cross swept his leg out, hitting Gogros in the chin and sending him flying into the surrounding pillars as he spat out some blood, hopping to his feet and saying "Oi... Ugly ass whatever you are, I'll rip out each of you eyes if you look at my wife again, do you believe it?"
Movies · Monkey_Godking
Loved the premise of the story and was very exited to read as the Greek mythology lore is some of my favorite. I don't even mind that the basis of the novel is a massive harem, but what did bother me was the inter character dialog and how easy it was for him to pick up the women. There is little to no romance involved in the story and most inter harem disputes go like this: "I don't like ...." "but you are beatiful" "ok, I forgive you and you are always right" It is very one dimensional and gives the characters a plastic, synthetic feeling. Another blaring issue is the writing quality as the grammar and spelling leaves much to be desired. All in all, I would recommend giving it a try and if these issues don't bother you at all then all power to you.
Ch46. Promotion!
In Naruto: Reborn with Talent
Anime & Comics · KasiCair