Man, I wish I can write like you. The story is fun with a lot of twist. I had fun reading this along with a pint of comedy. Get this man some award!😆
AHAHAHAHAHAHA THE ENDING!!!😂😂
I mean, I didn't expect that scene to be that long😂 But the story in itself is enticing and fun, interesting plot with outstanding writing style. The mother can go to hell though☺️
Good plot overall but might need a little bit of touch-up for the kingdoms descriptions. I like how the story flows. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]
It's a really nice idea and I love mini mark already😂 He got my love from now on! It'll be more epic if you can elaborate more on the scenes like more description how the character feels, how they expressed their grief like contorting their face hideously or something 😂. But overall, it's a nice read.
The reading journey was really enticing with twists and turns every corner! I had fun and didn't even realize how time had flown. It's a really interesting plot[img=recommend]
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original Living *Obey Me Fan Fiction*
M/n l/n, a boy who lost everything... * * * At least, that's what he thought. He decided that he can't take it anymore and wanted to end it. But the fate has something else in store for him. What will he do when he find himself in a foreign place full of demon? Who else will he meet there? The characters from the game Obey Me! belongs to the original author or creator. I only own the storyline that I created.19 Chs 18 收藏
Oh, there will be M/n X Demons😏
Living *Obey Me Fan Fiction*
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