RinTheDragonGirl

RinTheDragonGirl

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2021-01-28 加入 Australia
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RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Replied to TheArcher7

I kinda feel like it makes sense tho, he’s exauhsted and thinking nonsense

'That was a hell of a luck!' He thought, mocking himself. 'Changing a bit the story, I can finally say that I took an arrow to the knee in a fierce battle!'

Crimson Apocalypse

Crimson Apocalypse

Fantasy · Syal

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

The best way for a marksman is to let all your breath out slowly and fire just after you fully exhale as your heart rate is lower for a moment

''Draw a deep breath and exhale only half of it. Then hold your breath as you squeeze the trigger.''

White Online

White Online

Games · Alekzi

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

I can’t hear cupcake without thinking about edp445

Shortly afterward, he arrived in the armory and noticed the gloomy old man sitting on his desk. Looking as irritated as ever, like someone had stolen his favorite cupcake.

White Online

White Online

Games · Alekzi

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

How stupid, I assume you can upgrade your headset, cause I mean why would that be stopped, so just buy a cheap one get to a good level buy a better one and money saved

He bought another Gold Ranked Helmet because people kept saying that every rank has a huge difference.

White Online

White Online

Games · Alekzi

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Posted

This is a hidden gem especially if you like darker novels, the mc is somewhat op but he still runs into problems a lot. I like how the author handled him existing for so long by making him just box everything away. His morals are non existent after spending so long in torturous pain but I would like there to be moments where he questions what he’ s, maybe if he commits mass murder for little to no reason. My suggestion for the author to increase readers is to change the synopsis, its really long and to be honest I only read through like half or less, it doesn’t tell you what the story is about at all. If you wish to keep the poems In it I would suggest putting them beneath a reagular synopsis, when I first saw this novel I was going to not read it because of the synopsis but I’m I gave it a chance.

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Replied to Javier_Deltoro

Well I mean, what if people who bullied him or whatever happened saw him in game and decided to make him unable to play, or because other players would do more unsavoury things If the game doesn’t stop it

'It seems a mask is needed...' Isaac started walking faster, quickly arriving at a nearby Merchant Store.

White Online

White Online

Games · Alekzi

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

I don’t think chandeliers give a cozy feeling

A chandelier hung from the ceiling, giving the room a cozy feeling.

White Online

White Online

Games · Alekzi

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

Molds really, using a mold to forge weapons is so stupid

"I am going to need some molds of weapons preferably short swords" I replied.

To Sleep In The Sea Of Time

To Sleep In The Sea Of Time

Fantasy · man_of_culture3030

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Commented

Why does he still scream for help multiple times earlier then when no one’s ever helped

RinTheDragonGirl
RinTheDragonGirl
2 years ago
Replied to RinTheDragonGirl

I can’t remember if that’s the name of the butler in garden of the abyss. ‘can’t edit and forgot the webnovels name ‘

"Yes, thank you for your concern, Baldwin." Harald responds coolly.

A Demon's Ascent

A Demon's Ascent

Fantasy · DemonicAscent

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