Onkit_Pal

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2020-07-09 加入 India
徽章 6

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Onkit_Pal
1 years ago
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Over all, author I like to have you how you can do new things and your story and how is the developed the world Good, it's Pretty good Novice keep going it

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Onkit_Pal
2 years ago
Posted

Good novel....... Story is also Better than other Fanfic novels also who story going it's Good, i hope author don't drop story also continue to up loud chapters daily

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Onkit_Pal
2 years ago
Posted

Update the chapter and author It's good novel........Specially Mc character Development and Story...ok I wait for your Updates so please hurry up

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Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
Posted

Wow......... Wow this going beyond my imagination such good good story author best of luck please continue like this.............you have good creativity

Onkit_Pal
Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
Posted

Good continue also try improve writing please, story is good..................go.. Go keep....going👍 ha.... Ha.... Ha.... Ha... Ha.. Ha....

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Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
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🙂🙂Author It's good novel try update please you should continue story development is also very good, i check every day if updated new chapter...............

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Onkit_Pal
Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
Posted

I hope you continue your work, Good story I like your work 😊, I already read all your novel. Can also write novel on seven deadly sins please 🙏🙏

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Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
Replied to Onkit_Pal

I read it many fan pic also many novels so now many mistakes you did. Tray to learn from it please. Thanks you well improve👍😊

Onkit_Pal
Onkit_Pal
3 years ago
Replied to Onkit_Pal

Boss each paragraph in story is important step by step make good story but you already wrote something not understandable,

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