huh?
M'gann just stood there taken aback and flew away crying. "Ugh, I'm such a screw up." I went after M'gann to apologize when SuperBoy stopped me. "I think you've apologized enough just go somewhere else that's not around her or me right now." "I understand Connor but let me explain." "Get out now!." Connor said protectively and slightly irritated.
Young Justice: Red-Eclipse
Anime & Comics · Knight_Hawke
lol I know Jedi aren't bumped up this fast unless its a special case, times of war, or they are just prodigy/genius.
"As of today the Jedi Council hereby grants Zarik the rank of Jedi Master and as a gift the republic and the chancellor has deemed him worthy of having his own clone legion aswell as his own starfighter and Capital Ship." Master Skywalker finished the speech. "Wait, what?" "Bu-But how and why?" "I'll tell you about it all later." Master Windu whispered to me.
Zarik:The First Silver Jedi
Sci-fi · Knight_Hawke
I appreciate it
ight
I fixed it
while I could have it's clear their going to introduce Starfire and raven at some point
I've made it so each character has their own unique dialogue and their own way of speaking and being able to tell who's talking and who's replying instead of doing your cliche of saying something and who's replying back only time I do is if it's sentence cut off by an interruption or just plain old thinking. There are small time jumps in the first few chapters because I'm keeping most of the young justice team and adventures the same. I'm not steering from the original vision just introducing a new antagonist and MCs who are not part of the Young justice universe but help shape them into better versions of themselves on both sides. yes I agree the Grammer needs work. I hope I answered most of your core issues with this fanfiction.
I'm not gonna change the pairings from the young justice it's literally just introducing the future of my original work which is about to drop soon
what's the matter Luke?
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original Crystallis:The Last Star of Hope The World Needed
"The World changes; Empires Rise and Fall but discrimination remains. I never asked for these powers but I felt it deep in my own soul that I couldn't just let this City, my city down now the fate of the World rests on my hands those of my friends."10 Chs 0 收藏
- original
Young Justice: Red-Eclipse
During the attack on Cadmus Kid Flash, Aqualad, and Robin found not just SuperBoy but also another Project under the name Sa but will I be free to choose my own path or will I be under the control of the Light and The Reach? (I do not own Young Justice or the cover photo. All rights reserved to the creators the only characters I own is Arctora'hm and any other characters I create.)40 Chs 904 收藏
- original
Zarik:The First Silver Jedi
Zarik is a slave and was taken by the Sith Empire because they felt his power and strength in the dark side now he and few acolytes are being transported to the Sith Home world known as Korriban.6 Chs 33 收藏
- original
Joan of Arc: Saint of Freedom
Many know of my tale but this is the reason I was chosen to be the Saint of Freedom11 Chs 4 收藏
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Shiro Azim: The Toxic Mercury Shinobi
My name is Shiro. My dream is to be one of the seven ninja swordsmen of the mist and the next Mizukage. However, he's going to find the way of being a Shinobi will be a trying and difficult one. Join me in my journey of becoming stronger than all the other Kage2 Chs 2 收藏
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Arcus and Viona: The Avatar Twins
It's been 15 years since Avatar Korra's death The White Lotus members are searching for the next Avatar. But this Avatar is an odd occurrence within the Avatar cycle.5 Chs 51 收藏
- original
Xalazar:A Saiyan Beyond Space and time.
Xalazar was a universe 7 Saiyan who's battle power was over 600 he was so powerful that even the Saiyan council members along with the omni-king decided to banish him when he was just 9 years old to a prison built to hold those with immeasurable power. It was built in the quantum realm of where time and space are seperated from the countless timelines and dimensions. Now Xalazar is 22 and must find a way out of the prison if there even is a way out to acheieve his goals but will he escape on his own or with friends?0 Chs 44 收藏
early dialogue that's more than likely not going to be in the final product fight
"Arctora'hm, you've certainly gotten stronger than the last time, but this is the end!" "Darkseid, you've tried to control my life one too many times but now is the time I rise above you not as a King, not as a god and not even as a man. But as a spartan, and an elite god! It's time to give this world and apokalypse back to the people I may not be able to kill you but let's just give this one last go!"
Young Justice: Red-Eclipse
Anime & Comics · Knight_Hawke