Bruscar

Bruscar

male LV 10

I love reading and I am trying writing, but you will notice that I am a complete newbie, any advice is welcome

2020-02-04 加入 Global
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Bruscar
Bruscar
1 months ago
Commented

One thing that is not mentioned about Guy's technique is that the more chakra a person has technically the stronger the technique will be, the reason for this is that the last doors overdraw the person's chakra to the limit it can handle giving them a boost enormous and only in the eighth gate does it exceed that limit. But imagine opening the eighth door but having Tsunade's abilities, that is, being able to easily regenerate from any mortal wound and even better if the strange power is added.

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Bruscar
Bruscar
1 months ago
Commented

he might have wished for an increase in his adaptive capacity, which would have allowed him to go further.

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Bruscar
Bruscar
Bruscar
5 months ago
Replied to God_Doom

too small, need this

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Bruscar
Bruscar
7 months ago
Commented

are you still alive author? I loved your story and I hope you don't drop it and I don't know if you have a release schedule or anything.

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Bruscar
Bruscar
9 months ago
Commented

Now you have a super material, perfect for making heavy hypersonic projectiles. I doubt that most DC villains can withstand a hit from a 1 ton carbonarium projectile at 20 kilometers per second.

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Bruscar
Bruscar
9 months ago
Commented

There is a Japanese children's series with a lot of super strong technologies, from time travel to teleportation and even reality manipulation. The series is called Doraemon the Cosmic Cat and its technologies would return to Batman Op

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Bruscar
Bruscar
10 months ago
Commented

In Dragon Ball there are few melee moves that combine with ki. An idea could be some pointed ki knuckles or two sharp blades on the knuckles as well. or similar themes, I think it is something that is missing a lot in the series and that has a lot of potential.

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Bruscar
Bruscar
11 months ago
Commented

I know you don't want to make an op character from the beginning but any Dragon Ball fan would have thought about gravity training and anyone with a little imagination could have thought about underwater training at high pressures, which could be even more harder than gravity alone. Maybe your plan is to put it in now but I also see that you nerfed your character quite a bit, something that I don't see as bad at all if it had logical reasons

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