Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

male LV 14

a reader, and one day like to write my own

2019-12-04 加入 India
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Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
3 days ago
Commented

it's a very beautiful story and Pacing is not a problem this is just perfect matter of fact this is one of best iIhave ever read

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
18 days ago
Posted

after some chapters you just forgot about the intelligence system he hasn't received any information from the system for ao long

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
3 months ago
Commented

braking bad

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Posted

it's all about politics and slow pace can you please make it more fun and mc is clearly a transmigration so make him a little more interesting he is a little bit laid back and not very interesting Although the story is well written and world building is very great but plot line feels a bit slow

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Commented

cant't translation to english

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Commented

name is wrong in this translation

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Commented

congratulations for getting past 300 chapters you know most fanfiction don't go past 100 chapters and get dropped but thanks to you please go strong for all of us who have come to like this novel as more than just another fanfiction matter of fact it's even more existing than any original novels

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Commented

deleting the relationship is okay seriously didn't like that much just story update speed is slow can you increase 3-4 chapters in a week

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Replied to Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

oh I just thought that he knew Harry Potter then he at least knew something about this world but now you mentioned it This makes sense

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan
4 months ago
Commented

In starting chapters mc name is Damian and scorpios so which one is used