thanks for the chapter it was good
Clutch for giving us the og title saved me a bit of time thank you!
Thanks for your hard work! Good chapter.
Zero has made it obvious that he's mentally strong to the point where it's insane and bam has to be molded gently instead because Bam's mental state right now is fragile I think.
Thanks for your hard work. Good chapter!
(TLDR) Overall a promising fanfic a quick read is definitely deserved. The quality of the writing is 4/5. Readable fs; just slight grammar mistakes here and there but you can get immersed in the book. Stability of the updates seems good for now so 5/5. The Development of the story is quite interesting. It has the same system as "The Lords Coins Aren't Decreasing". The author fits it very well into the story kudos to that. Also the crossover with Naruto and other realms are quite good as well. Dialogue is funny and nice to read. Story progression isn't very slow nor too fast its just right. The story development seems promising 4/5. The main character is also someone quite relatable and acts as a normal person. He's an enjoyable character to read about. 4/5 The world background gets a 5/5. Quite literally the multiverse and you can't get much better then that. Also MHA is the actual setting but the system opens up the possibility of world hopping. But maybe it will be just MHA and even then the realism with the story is decent. 3/5 (Review written at ten chapters published.)
Thanks for your hard work; also relax yourself man. Writing is supposed to be fun and a way to release some of your creativity in a way that brings happiness to you and the people who read your books. You should relax on the update schedule and write at your own pace if you feel exhausted/burnt out. And never feel pressured to meet with the demands of readers.
Actually what I would like is for the MC to ask for more knowledge about the tower as he is relatively dumb as he doesn't know much. Asking a Guardian for knowledge right now would be the best course of action imo.
That's hilarious I won't lie.
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Thanks for the chap
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