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In a new life a few years before the crisis, a young man finds himself with nothing to face it but a trading system.
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this is basically a cultivation novel but instead of closed door cultivation for 50000 years he hits the gym and trades for cultivation powers, its also set before cannon so we have no skeleton of the manga/anime to go off(hes in nejires year)
love this fanfic and you made my favorite character the main girl! I noticed her personality wasn't like in the anime like asking so many questions and it's true that wasn't her personality when she hasn't became one of the big three. she was a loner when still hasn't met Tamaki and Mirio because people taught she was looking on down on others people's quirks.
Ehhh~ It's a promising Fanfic, but, I don't really like MC's who think with their lower half, soooo... I'm just gonna go. though don't let this review discourage others from reading it!
The dialogues are too dry, you can't feel any emotion behind each dialogue which hurts the reading. It's like reading about robots because they all express themselves in the same way, you can't feel the personality of any character because they all speak the same. What should be done to have a good dialogue would be to complement it with something like, for example: "Hello! Today is a nice day, isn't it?" The young woman approached with the same jovial and happy tone as always. (nejire) Or we also have the case of Eri in this story of which we never know how she feels or what her emotions are because they only reduced her to responding with dry dialogues like yes or no. The protagonist also has no personality or a bit of charisma, he is super boring and there is nothing to say about him, we don't know what his motivations are, his goals or why he does what he does, he only exists and speaks with 0 charisma and emotion Aside from that, the idea of the trading system is interesting and original, it is also good to read about someone who is not always in class 1a of the canon
Thank you for the fanfic, it has been an amazing journey. I honestly can't think of anything I particularly dislike in this, which is unbelievably rare for a fanfic and goes to show how great it was. I would love to read another fanfic with a similar premise to this one - maybe one in HS DXD, Highschool Of The Dead (but major nerfs to what can be bought, like only really supplies and at most some weaker powers like Bending powers from Avatar, minor quirks, martial arts, cultivation arts that could barely make him superhuman, etc.), Rosario Vampire, Miraculous Ladybug, Ben 10, One Piece, Dragon Ball, Tensura / TTIGRAAS, the SCP Universe, Naruto, etc.
(Heavy Spoilers) Dislikes: -Traders: Apart from Ochirmaru the MC hasn't traded with anyone else worth noting, I would love to see him trade with Aizen or Kisuke from bleach, Dr.Gero from Dragon Ball, Frieza from Dragon ball. Or more one piece material(They were many mentions of Doffy with his nickname Joker but nothing that important) -The powers, MC through his trading system acquired many power systems(Like chakra from naruto ...) and it became very hard to keep track of all of them, I would have enjoyed it more If the story was heavily focused on famous power systems like chakra. -Unique abilites: Apart from the Sharingan the MC didn't recieve any unique ability, Anything he bought either was an item to boost his strength or a technique, In my opinion it would have been better if he bought a devil fruit or a stand or a transformation Apart from what I mentioned everything is good, the pace(I think canon just started at chapter 57) , Diaougle.... In shorter terms I hope the mc would get more unique abilites and trade with anyone noteworthy other than the snake pedo
thank you author, it was a fun trip. I hope you make good novels like this and you succeed in that too
I guess it already ended with 85 chapters... It was a fun journey, but it could have been more fun if he and his family could travel to ither worlds hohoho..
it's hard for me to explain why i dislike this story other than the fact that it feels empty and pointless. Chinese mtl feels less bland than this, it's like there's nopoint to anything in this story and not in the good way.
Very interesting and enjoyable. As someone who enjoyed the first season of the manhwa, I am looking forward to more chapters. Wish there was a little more focus on the acquisition and development of a select few unique powers rather than the gathering of numerous powers as it is now. The MC is getting stronger but with the powers now his upgrades are really anticlimactic and it doesn't really feel like anything changed besides x, y, z number increased. However, it is still early in the story and given the low level system and how you can sell your powers and progress, these could just be intermediary powers before getting something more interesting. Given how weak the MHA world is I can understand the reasoning, I just hope looking ahead it will become a little more impactful.
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This has nice comedy, give it shot. So for i like it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It was an alright story. Writing quality was okay. It was pretty interesting tho with the trading and his interactions with orochimaru but this was basically just a cultivation novel. I like that it is completed and he does solve All for one and liberation army guy.
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(TLDR) Overall a promising fanfic a quick read is definitely deserved. The quality of the writing is 4/5. Readable fs; just slight grammar mistakes here and there but you can get immersed in the book. Stability of the updates seems good for now so 5/5. The Development of the story is quite interesting. It has the same system as "The Lords Coins Aren't Decreasing". The author fits it very well into the story kudos to that. Also the crossover with Naruto and other realms are quite good as well. Dialogue is funny and nice to read. Story progression isn't very slow nor too fast its just right. The story development seems promising 4/5. The main character is also someone quite relatable and acts as a normal person. He's an enjoyable character to read about. 4/5 The world background gets a 5/5. Quite literally the multiverse and you can't get much better then that. Also MHA is the actual setting but the system opens up the possibility of world hopping. But maybe it will be just MHA and even then the realism with the story is decent. 3/5 (Review written at ten chapters published.)