Please tell me he has a better grasp of his timelines in the future chapters?!
He was already running for an hour now. Then he saw the woods ahead of him.
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
Am I the only one having issues with the changes between past and present tense? When I was in writing class, we were told to keep our tenses aligned, except in certain circumstances.
The gigantic zombie lifted up its arm and tried to block Souta's attack.
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll
There is actually romance, but it takes 800 or 900 chapters to develop. The FMC is always a badass, always OP, even when fighting the literal Creator. I will always recommend this novel, it is one of the best I've read, up there with Shadow Slave, Super Gene, Let Me Game In Peace, and The Devil's Cage.
watch him make some sort of blood contract or some bs
The sense of fear somehow had to reflect in my aura or face, alerting the fox and drawing it away from its meal…
Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
U don't think we're reading the same book if you think the grammar is pperfect. it is borderline unreadable in the chapters I've managed to make it through
I'm already almost completely done with this train wreck. please tell me it gets better?!
"So he is your junior looks handsome, by his outfit I confirm that he will be recruited in an ARMY Squad future. Considering the SAFE ZONE 1012 is under ARMY Federation.He is one of many promising young samplings in this zone". Dr Mearov told.
Ancient Tears BloodLine
Fantasy · Aravind_S
proper grammar includes punctuation and capitalizing the first word in sentences. it is never appropriate to abbreviate words like though in writing.
"Lad let's go, I already called him he is here". Uncle James opened the front door.We walked in, soon the receptionist saw us, she recognized uncle immediately made a gesture to move to the upstairs room! she looks beautiful tho I laughed internally! hope it turns out to be a good day.
Ancient Tears BloodLine
Fantasy · Aravind_S
A.I. don't forget the second period. also, the correct order of a sentence is opinion-size-age-shape-colour-origin-material-purpose noun, so it would be, "long white beard"
Soon we came to a place! high tech building with huge A. I Screen which shows Dr Mearov Photos and his inventions! He looks tall, old with a white long beard I believe he is in his late sixties, no one is sure about his age maybe he will turn out to be an old monster.
Ancient Tears BloodLine
Fantasy · Aravind_S
Holy run on sentences batman
"Lad, I thought you like to look at few places considering your first visit here since you want to finish our work, Let's go now. Zack, Dr Mearov is a good person, try to give a good impression as much as possible, if he likes you he will help you whenever it needed". Uncle James said to me.
Ancient Tears BloodLine
Fantasy · Aravind_S
There only way I can reconcile the way the dialog is written is thinking the mc is autistic after. Think Mashle Burndead, the shupuff freak. Like he talks in that deadpan, flat voice.
"Hu... That was tiring..."
The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
Fantasy · DonnEll