Vongrak

Vongrak

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2018-11-05 加入 Australia
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Vongrak
Vongrak
1 days ago
Commented

Yeah the way they managed to get blood from both Tony and Melissa feels like a serious case of idiot ball. It also introduces a heck of a lot of consequences into the story that has so far been relatively free of them. There are plenty of ways for the villians in this story to get stronger but that felt really cheap. But, to not be too negative let's talk about some of my favourite parts. I really enjoyed the AFO fight with the Iron Might scenes. That was excellent and I also enjoyed Melissa and Tony just being together that's always great.

Vongrak
Vongrak
5 months ago
Commented

So, I'm reading this long after the fact and perhaps because it doesn't matter I feel like adding... that I'm not super in love with how this played out. He lost his arm, spent 6 months recovering, then the first thing he does is get his arm back. Don't get me wrong, I love how you sorted that issue out and if this had come 20 chapters or more down the line I would be super on board but as it stands it feels like all that talk about getting a new arm and designing it was a waste. Granted, I suspect this happened because of all the complaints so I'm not annoyed about it.

Vongrak
Vongrak
1 years ago
Commented

I'm a big fan of how the Horcux didn't so much merge with Lily as it did twist and pervert her thought process. On a technical level, nothing has changed. Her top priority is still Harry. However, with the new "perspective" the definition of "protect" has widened a lot and includes some questionable things

Vongrak
Vongrak
1 years ago
Replied to VoidStar_9183

Well considering Kat is still exploring what her sexuality means even as of the most recent chapters (989) I think that's a bit unfair to say. Plus, it IS marked as gay. There is a very clear Yuri tag on the story.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Commented

This is an amazing idea. Don't be afraid to keep doing stuff like this.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Replied to Mr_zero_san

Spoilers. It does change.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Replied to Arkturion

Honestly fair. I'm not pleased with them either.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Replied to Creyd1317

A couple of reasons. (Oh and spoilers) One is more obvious, Apep's best friend Jara is asexual. The second is because Kat and Lily are in a relationship and can actually go TOGETHER but count as '1 demon' for Apep's price range. Then there's the fact that, not that we know yet, Zurha the love interest was raised in an orphanage. Those are just some of the reasons Kat is a good choice for this.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Replied to hedz_89

The 8th of the 10 lives like right next to the orphanage. Like they share a wall with the orphage close. Lily and Kat are banking on fantasy tropes that say the random wealthy suitor has to in fact be the heir to the 8th of the 10.

Vongrak
Vongrak
2 years ago
Replied to Austeel89

I know I personally don't remove reviews for spoilers, and I don't think anyone else can. I've only removed a couple reviews that were just spam but that's it. This is only made weirder beacause I can still SEE the other review you left: ------ The author does a great job and keeps the story consistently interesting. It is a good mixed bag of drama, action, fantasy, intrigue, etc. If you are looking ONLY for sleaze or smut, this is not the novel for you (up to chapters 700 nothing explicitly erotic by Western standards in my opinion). If this is translated, the translation is amazing. I spend my coins on this. Please keep the chapters coming!!!

  • D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad original

    D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

    Fantasy SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE DEVIL YURI

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    “Kat, you have a tail” said Lily “Look, Lily, it really isn’t that big of a concern” said Kat “You.Have.A.TAIL KAT” said Lily “How is this not a concern to you?” “Well, the dream I had was a bit weird as well, but if I’m honest, I’m mainly worried about the floating text that’s on fire” said Kat “THE What?” said Lily --------------------------------------------------- Join Kat on her dimension hopping adventures as she fullfills her demonic duty and answers the call of the summoner. Each week Kat will get involved with new strange situations and oppurtunites that await her. During the week she'll have her best friend Lily, and perhaps a little help from Sylvie to figure out what's she supposed to do with her life now that she's becoming a demon. Chapters releasing daily ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Artwork by CristianAC: https://www.deviantart.com/cristianac Story Discord: https://discord.gg/YzGgDHC

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