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What he had before him was not an ordinary bird. Standing nearly three meters tall, the animal had the silhouette and features of a dinosaur, a modified velociraptor, still covered in feathers but with a musculature and bone structure that made it appear more terrifying and majestic. The feathers were not soft or fluffy; they seemed more like protective armor. The body leaned forward, with a sharper head and deeply intelligent eyes that followed Alex's every move attentively.
Sci-fi · DreamTech
To be honest, I always wanted to finish my stories, but when I started writing, I was studying medicine, and time was not my ally, then when I planned to continue, I went back and reread the story, I didn't know how to continue it, I like to write, I do it as a hobby, and I regret every day not having continued my stories, I want to finish this one, and continue the previous ones, now that I have more time, I hope to be able to do it, and if I plan to write this one and finish it
I greatly appreciate the reporting of any errors in writing, I will work hard to improve these errors.
"The cold is acting as a barrier," Ariel explained. "Many animals have frozen, but they haven't died. The Omega particle is keeping them alive, even in this frozen state. They are still evolving, but more slowly. But once the planet thaws, those animals will be free. And their accelerated evolution could pose an even greater threat."
Sci-fi · DreamTech
I understand the point, and I see the same problem, however, I am trying to create a somewhat long prologue that explains the things that will happen next, I apologize if the story is somewhat boring and monotonous, but personally I like information and justifying the why of things, therefore I feel that the beginning is necessary for the story.
Well, I think that facing the situation that Alex finds himself in, most human beings would be in a similar position, on the other hand Ariel is an AI with logical thinking, always opting for the efficiency of doing her job, although my idea is to develop Alex as a protagonist, it is something that I feel should take its time and events, if you like the story I ask you to give it a chance and then indicate whether or not you like the continuity of the story.
I apologize if there are any repetition issues in the editing, my native language is not English and I use external help, from now on I plan to implement new measures to avoid this type of errors.
"Ariel... so, are we in the middle of the apocalypse?"
Sci-fi · DreamTech
You're right, but that only applies to a fight of strength, remember that William comes from a modern world, with another way of seeing the world, maybe it's a mistake or maybe not, we'll see what happens.
If he wanted to reach his goal, William could not use only men, so he was determined to recruit women, human society in this world was very similar to medieval society on earth, therefore, a woman in the army was wrong seen, women had to stay at home to take care of the children and do housework.
Fantasy · DreamTech
Thank you very much for the correction, English is not my native language.
I appreciate the comment, I apologize for not uploading more chapters, I have been busy with university exams, I hope to catch up on the weekend.
The idea is that the power depends on how the characteristic acquired is used, I think that in the novel it is more or less understood that it is not a super power without a reason behind it so it really depends on the possibilities and how it is used.
Fortress of the Last Dawn
Sci-fi · DreamTech