I think you mean Lich. Witch demon doesn’t rascally sit well wit my the description from what I know about Liches
Some witch demons were transformed after their demise, having studied undead magic while alive and, due to their misdeeds and heavy resentments coupled with the effects of their spells, turned into witch demons after passing. Others were living mages who willingly pursued eternal life and thus turned into witch demons.
I Ascend to the Divine Throne through Arcane Means
Games · Dangerous Tower Listening to Rain
How is M connected ? Lanlingster and augustus both have no M. The inconsistency is the biggest turnoff of this novel.😡
I can’t. I tried but the mc is an idiot. He fails to use his gift and asks permission for this and that. Thought he was supposed to be a king. It feels like a great gift was wasted on irredeemable trash taht a hi old just die. I feel like Licia has more personality than him. And while I’m at it let me add that his name if stupid too. Doesn’t have mc vibe. I ve seen extra’s with better names.
True. Atleast Camilla’s situation could understood since it was her stepmom trying to protect her son or whatever. But this is just ridiculous.
But after only a moment of hesitation, she didn't hide anything and said: "I just realized that the Lionheart Family has never intended to let a woman take the helm, no matter how outstanding they are. If I obediently married as a political chip, I would still have some value. But I refused. And some of the elders in my family felt that I had no value if I didn't choose to marry, even seen as a threat, so they made their move. And my brothers are interested in stealing the 'hero fate'... Overall, there are many who don't want me to leave the ruins alive."
Catastrophe Card King
Games · Blindness
The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.
The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.
@author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.
Which country is this black palace from ?
I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.
Is author making the mc an idiot ? There’s no reason someone should be this stupid, if they were they should be dead. Even a pig would try to use the space talent. I feel like the author is treating the readers like brainless fools who can’t even notice forced plot.
Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!
Fantasy · TheUngod