'Strawberry lemonade.' I thought as I swirled the glass and took a sip. One knew they reached real luxury when they got to drink this heavenly drink, especially in a medieval world like this.
Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion
Confusing and misleading story that's somewhat boring to read. "I only remember my name" he says honestly while looking at an officer wearing a very old uniform. Also some parts if the story feel skipped and summarised.
One by one, I wrote down everything I knew about the Saint and the location of the Holy Relics.
Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion
The constant "Noir" made it unpleasant to read tbh. Thats not how you talk with someone you're close with and actually it's not how you talk, period.
faceplant= falling onto one owns face I think yo meant "facepalm"
Whatever, I accepted her request. I couldn't wait to see her look of failure as she begged me to save her.
Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion
I don't think this can be constituted as an interlude? I'm not an expert also I'm not gonna do research so take me word with grain a salt.
Chapter 22: Welcome to Utopia
Anime & Comics · The_POZ
Ughhhh I can't take it anymore 16 chapters in and all I can say is the writing is average (for ff's on webnovel), the characters are one dimensional (kinda 'fanony') and the plot is boring, ----------Spoilers I guess--------- most of the things mc has done is visit places that Aang will visit in the future, there he impresses everyone and leaves behind a lil message that sounds something like "I was here first haha I'm so cool right?"
facts
"unfortunate" Bro what. He legit sent kids with Hagrid to investigate a serial unicorn killer tf was he expecting them to find?
"Well, what happened in the Forbidden Forrest was very unfortunate. You'll be pleased to know that Mr Weasley, and Ms Granger, did not have any encounter with whatever attacked you and Mr Longbottom. However, young Neville has helped fill in what happened on your end. I have to say that you were very brave in saving his life."
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr