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Nicholas died under mysterious circumstances on earth and was reborn into the world of harry potter as an orphan with a mysterious ring maker system. He does not know why he is here nor why he has this system but Nicholas is determined to make the best of his new life , noseless freaks be damned.
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The MC pulls a lot of information out of nowhere and takes it for granted, like declaring Dumbledore a villain for reading the books, along with theories and explanations of how magic works that he took from the beyond and again took it for granted. I see no problem with writing an AU fic or having a manipulative Dumbledore, but the MC declaring this kind of thing out of the blue is a problem. Events are often summarized in a paragraph and then sometimes we have information coming out of the blue about something extremely important that happened that was not even mentioned in that summary. The fic spends more time with the MC making theories or thinking about fanon as if it were canon than actually acting. Other details like a police officer finding the MC extremely bruised, bloodstained and without memories taking him walking to the police station instead of to the hospital or calling an ambulance, the MC going to school a week after being sent to an orphanage with aminesia and even with injuries all over the body show that the author does not make much effort to build a reasonable story.
I was reading this trying to figure out why it was so well written so far... and realized I've read half the other stories this author has posted and thought 'yeah that makes sense'.
sorry but the mc announces too much info that he shouldn't have, and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly, I drop the story (chapter 30) it's not consistent enough with the world of HP (and the mc is stupid)
Like some Others, I love the idea of the story. But most of what is written is just a summary like "they had a pleasant chat". I am also not a fan of how many assumptions the MC makes about things he has no concrete evidence about. It was not my cup of tea, but for others, It might be. I hope your fanfiction does great but it wasn't for me.
I thought the story was great in the beginning but then it got progressively worse as I kept reading I mean come on making the world revolve around him I read so many books like that and what the all have in common not many people like it
each chapters is just a summary and there's no actual story in it, like when harry and the MC are actually talking in parseltounge but it only shows in the summary of what happened to him in that day, such a trashy writing
It's name should be like "Harry Potter and the garbage side character". Maybe that's too much recognition of the main character it should just be harry potter and maybe just add the MC's name by the end in side notes as small as possible.
I've seen all 177 chapters released, if you want a potterverse fic where there's not much fighting and everything works out this is for you,there are a lot of useless chapters that serve only to fill up the number of chapters, everything absolutely everything works out for the MC, he has no difficulty with almost nothing and finally a personal inconvenience for me,He's very nice to the point of being hypocritical, he has no goals or anything he's just following canon and wanting to save everyone he was a fan of, I'm not asking for a villain I'm asking for a human
at chapter 40 the first lesson at Hogwarts hasn't even begun. Many events that should really just be written into the same chapter are separated in to multiple instead, like getting school supplies was 4 or 5 chapters. If you can get past the frankly horrible pacing (at least imo) then its a fun enough read... Or if you're super bored and have nothing better to do at 3 a.m. on a Wednesday like me...
Only 7 ch right now but I love the concept I really hope u keep writing this story and won’t abandon it
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awesome original idea. I hope you write at least 100 chapters... ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Slightly above average. Not a fan of system novels, but it's absent most of the time. It's 4/5 for the first 100 chapters, but then the author starts to heavily modify the original content with the addition of gods (I don't know why, but only the Greek ones) and basically turns it into a cultivation novel with the introduction of wizard ranks. The MC is extremely unlikable, and his interactions with the original characters are uninteresting to say the least. One thing that was enjoyable to read were smithing/crafting scenes, but those also became overly dramatic and cliché, with things like everyone at rank 3 on the planet reacting to him forging a ring.
A recommended read. Haven't seen anything that's bad yet. Only hope that MC won't be following Potter like a little puppy. Even glad that MC was willing to change somethings; not gonna spoil what changes, so just read the novel. Hope he continues to change things.
Love this book and how the book is focusing on the mc and not really speaking about harry other than the beginning of the book where mc becomes his friend also love how the author built up the story and the whole world in the book as it adds a ton to it, if someone is looking to read HP book i would highly suggest this. I really hope the author keeps going with this book as its really good and the author seems way to good at writing books in my opinion
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( Bis Kapitel 30 gelesen) Die Geschichte ist bisher eine Kombination aus Harry Potter und Herr der Ringe was sehr gut zusammen passt . In einer Magischen Welt, Magischen Ringe hergestellt. Die Fanfiction gefällt mir sehr gut 4 von 5 Sternen. Ich hoffe das die Geschichte eine gute lange hat und nicht fallend geh lassen wird.
Good story idea and well written, but sadly like many other Harry Potter fics this one has just too much Harry Potter in it. While this might sound weird but while i love everything about the Potterverse but absolutely loathe the character Harry Potter himself. And this story seems to be going in the same direction as a great amount of other HP fics where its quickly evolving into "Harry Potter + sidekick OC" instead of a "OC in the Potterverse"