Redfar

Redfar

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2018-03-30 加入 France
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Redfar
Redfar
1 months ago
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Oh my Bad, got my answer while reading further

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Redfar
Redfar
1 months ago
Commented

So his height is 2.87 meters like in One Pièce or do you change it to normal size for Naruto World ? I mean it would be cool if he keep his "gigantic" size but I could understand if you change it. It could be weird to meet an nearly 3meters old geezer during shinobi war xd

Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

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6. Why are you such a cutie pie? (Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

Movies · DumbedDown

Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

I mean I would not say 'No' to more longer since I like the story :3 But only if you can do it, you should not get tired of making chapters if you want to make it[img=recommend] longer.

5. Are the chapter sizes to your liking? (Y/N)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

Movies · DumbedDown

Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

YES, I like how it goes, you build surely nicely this relationship between them it help me to get more involved into the story. I mean that it's seems more realistic.

4. Is the pace enjoyable for you? (Y/N)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

Current pace seems nice to me but If you think it gonna too slow or too fast you can adjust as you wish I mean it's your story.

3. The story to move away from canon faster, or slowly deviate? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

Yes, I mean it can allowed you to have more "space" to do what you want with that story and it can help to not finish this story too fast ;)

2. Have another franchise in the novel, and if so, what would you choose? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

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Redfar
Redfar
4 months ago
Commented

No, I think story is good with one female lead, it would be "too much" to add one more!

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1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

Movies · DumbedDown

Redfar
Redfar
5 months ago
Commented

If you can, this one + plan 3. It don't mind me to give you my stone since story seems good for now.

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Plan 1: Two chapters every day. A simple yet efficient plan, I think. People love having more to read, and adding an extra chapter would double the amount they normally read.

Naruto: Faint Smile.

Naruto: Faint Smile.

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Redfar
Redfar
7 months ago
Commented

Pretty cool, I can clearly imagine him running through a battlefield and killin' monsters & co at high speed.

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Electricity has become a part of you, you may not be able to create lightning at will or cause a cascade of thunder, but with your new reflexes you can dodge them as easily as you dodge a throwing ball]

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Endless Evolution: Last Star

Fantasy · Arlemit