Enjoybale book .. easy to read .. Lazytime’s need this kind books.
I want to see more .. where is Ron development !? What is he thinking ?!
O ı almost forget.. dynamic is good and lovely .but there is smal line in commu and intir.. -Communication betwen characters İntiraction betwen characters (is different thing) -İntiraction ( mc/oc/anti-hero is going shophing and talking vendor for price) -Communication is what you do in family-freind-enemy- worlds key people.vs)dynamic
I iove communication between the family ( family dynamic) ..Refreshing ohh😌😏
More please ı lik this kind story .. but your jumping point need work man . Forest 4 chapter little bir early 5-6-7 .. but whocare ı love it .. introduction of new characters very important so please carefull .. 🤓😇🙃
(My third langue is english) Good very good.. easy to read . I add your novel in my list man.
Only patreon This is a fanfic not someting to pay
Keep up the work man .. İt is good and refreshing .. you need carefull eith it Balance is perfection.
Please re-edit it.. it was so hard to understand the chapter that I had to read it for 3 times to understand completely.
Perfect… Refresing reading… thanks … I love how harry no more manipulated and decided his choices. Please donzt drop and finish it.. ı am waiting finishline :) 10-40 chapter ..
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