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摘要
My rewrite of this story is by Chapter 10. Please change to my other story The Nameless Angel in Naruto in the meantime, if you don't like my old writing style. I'll update the novel version after I'm done with the fanfiction version
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Please re-edit it.. it was so hard to understand the chapter that I had to read it for 3 times to understand completely.
It is a good Story, but I stopped at chapter 9 because I could not proceed to read. Because there are no Quotation marks to differentiate the dialogue between characters. It causes me dizziness when reading it.