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摘要
"In essence, what is a cultivator? Someone strong? Someone who masters art? Someone beyond human bounds? Someone deity-like? Or maybe someone bound for greatness on a treacherous journey? Though close, a cultivator is those who seek the higher plane. The world above ours so to say."
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The game that took the world by surprise.
Sony didn't create it, or Microsoft, no, it was developed by an emerging company called Shindo Corp.
Featuring the first full dive cultivation VRMMORPG, it could supposedly give you a new life. Players could play the game however they want.
Yulong is a veteran player of this game who finds himself back in the past. With knowledge of the future, he will rise to the pinnacle of cultivation while knowing one vital thing that would give him an advantage over everyone else.
Cultivation is real, and it will be discovered 10 years from now...
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[Disclaimer: You Might Get Addicted]
Chapter word count guarantee [800-2100]
[Volume 1] - The tutorial volume.
[Volume 2] - Serializing...
Starting from chapter 10, chapters are now over 1500 words.
Please read the prologue and the auxiliary chapters.
Romance is not the main focus.
Update times: Sunday, Friday, and Saturday. Occasionally Tuesday.
No fanservice for the first 20 chapters.
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The writing is good (I love the intro) and and the world building is excellent, I won’t spoil you but you’ll find out after you read it. Anyone who likes cultivation related stories (or is new to this genre) should give it a read! Even though there are very few chapters now, I'm hooked to reading more. Look forward to more updates soon!
I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens. Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point. Well done overall.
Video games isn't my cup of tea but this story seems hella interesting! The concept seems unique and world building is pretty nice to. Synopsis is a great opening and it attract you to read the story and to find out about this unique universe. Great job!
This is an exciting read. The myth-making and world-building is really interesting. The pacing of the story is just enough to keep readers at the edge of their seats and waiting for more. I haven't read much works in this genre, but this is one of the best written ones I have seen here so far. Great work!
Your writing is good but i don't really read about cultivation novels, that's why i found the chapters little slow paced. I only read 4 chapters until now, but i think the story is starting to progress a bit. I would love to keep reading further if i have time. keep up the good work.
I had a very fun time reading this story and everything was laid out great. I didn't have trouble reading anything and I like the plotline. Good job author keep it up!
Such a nice and interesting story l must say.... The world that author has tried to create is hella good..... The concept of video game looks very unique to me and never read these kind of books before so it attracts me the most and now really enjoyed reading it... The writting style of author is also really great l must say.... Keep it up author...
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According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though. And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.
I read this book, and I gotta say, it's quite the interesting story line you got there. Seemed quite peachy at the start but great overall. Plus, love the comedy.
The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!
An Extremely good book. Loved it and the way the sentences are written. Good job author. Hope to see more from this book, as it is a hidden gem. I would recommend.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far.
I really liked the set up of the novel. Loved how you integrated your story with current Earth. Almode made me believe it:-) Great novel. Keep it up
The writing is very well. The world building is expectional with status on every enemy and action document the main characters. Would reccomended
Hi, author, it's a captive read...I'm not a fan of the cultivated story but your book hooked me well. I'm eager to know more and more about MC's life.....