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摘要
While on a school trip, an 18-year-old falls into a frozen lake and wakes up as a baby.
Disclaimer
I don’t own any elements used in this fanfic just the Main Character.
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4.32
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寫檢討
I like the story and it's general plot. Some aspects of finer plot detail could be improved, but it's solid overall. Not a bad fic to pass the time and the author uploads regularily. Fair warning, ai is used for the story writing but the author does a pretty good job in editing the artificial parts and making the story flow most of the time. Hope you like it.
The first few chapters were good, I wouldn't even realize they were written with AI if the author didn't mention it, but soon after the quality dropped a lot, it seemed like the author stopped editing and the result was a story clearly written by AI, full of redundant moments, words that were repeated over and over again and the story in general became boring. Other points to be mentioned are how the MC was created in the white room of Classroom of the Elite but immediately jumped out of that world without ever returning, in addition to several chapters of a very poorly written investigation, with the whole Sirius Black case being another poorly written investigation. The concept of the fic is not bad, but I think when the author stopped editing so much and delegated most of it to the AI the story became bad.
it's a nice idea but boring to read in my opinion there's something lacking to it and ijust can't immerse myself to it
i was a fan until you brought minecraft into it wont even bother from that point
There is NO story here. The MC is a side character in every world this is probably one of the most boring poweful characters i have ever seen. And because of the world hopping i dont see this changing.
Updated Review The Fic is a banger. And Don't get discouraged by the negative comments Author. For anyone who is going to read this fic. It's AI written and the Author himself said that he is not a writer. As for the Storyline from chapter 1-3 it's just an explanation from the MC point of view about his early life the actual story starts from chapter 4 and despite there being some instances where you feel the usage of AI the storyline has been good so far. MC tho could interact with the others more. Keep it up bro you're doing good.
very good 👍 work and so far I am enjoying it alot and hope this work remains continues along with steady updates. give it a read.
i really enjoy your story keep up the good work cause its gonna pay off you got real talent for this thing and i want to see you continue. Also dont let none of the negative stuff get to you just keep going and youll be a ok.
I feel you bro I will give you 5 stars because it's an ai story. I too tried to write but those readers that constantly say the mc is hypocritical or there are too many plotholes turned me off. so dont give up. I know how you feel not having any stories to read so you decide to write your own but being to stupid to write it yourself so you use ai
Author actually cooking in here, Constant updates, The caligraphy and words are pleasant to read, and past the first 3 chapters it just feels so new, as if im reading a whole new story and not just a fanfic, Not even mentioning how the characters are so in line with their original personalities, from the comics and the books, not the anime/movie adaptation. 10/10 would recommend
Looks great but author mentions "fun" but I don't see it? There's no comedy, the action is overpowering enemies but not the level of coolness like saitama, bro doesn't flex like a chinese young master(but I respect that since it's the ayanokoji template lol) and I'm still finding on the good parts. Seeing that it's author's first work actually this is pretty good enough, but the rest of the scenes needed some imagination to actually enjoy yourself.
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This is great so far! The interactions feel a bit off sometimes but overall is solid.
I'm going to be honest I don't give five star reviews much because people overuse them but I think this story deserves it I like it decent not too fast-paced but not slow and agonizing where everything's drawn out just to extend the story I think if you read it you'll really enjoy reading it you'll feel a little immersion and it's nice and even if he is a little overpowered he doesn't show it so the story stays good
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What a fine piece of work! Truly a gem! The quality of fan fics recently have gone higher
Give me ideas to add in this story.Also thanks for reading this.