摘要
[Warning! #Yandere!]
Aiden Cross was a boy who was smarter than a kid his age. Born on the seemingly normal planet Earth. Who finds his life very boring.
100 years ago, World War III happened for unknown reasons. Resulting in 25% of the world population perishing in this war and no one can talk about this due to the single organization which controls the world after the war.
Does there lie a big secret behind the war that made all the previous nations fight for?
Would he uncover the secret of the war? Or will he become a pawn of powerful organizations?
But one day Aiden’s life turned upside down in an accident. Aiden lost his mother, and Aiden himself was on the verge of dying. Then he awakened the system and even met a beautiful yet haughty goddess.
"You should feel honored you meet the great me hmph!"
[Ding]
[Compatible host detected]
[Initializing the cosmic system]
[Connecting the cosmic system to the host's soul]
[Connection Completed]
A system promises to make him stronger and help him revive his mother back to life. And inform him about the awakening of his world, which is no less than the apocalypse.
With the help of the system, Aiden awakens Limit Grade Talent, but his talent is not complete and has a fatal side effect.
[Talent: Celestial (unknown)] (incomplete)
Aiden has to copy many talents to complete his talents. And travels to many different worlds.
As he meets different races, a naive elven princess, prideful and lustful dragons, bored vampires, and a horny angel who offers herself to him
“I offer you my body and soul; please accept me." An angel with a flushed red face said
Unfortunately for our Aiden his big sis is a total yandere who couldn't even let him talk to another girl in front of her. Aiden has a dream of making a harem so he has to tread a careful line to get what he wants. Will he be able to have a harem or not? No one knows.
But his otherworldly appearance wouldn't make it easier for him as he attracted many women's attention from a young age, which made his big sis even more jealous and crazy for him.
Would he be able to have a harem in his long cultivation journey to revive his mother and discover many secrets of the cosmos with his yandere sister being present?
Milfs, Virgins, Succubus, Vampires, Elves, Princesses, Demonesses, Angels, Goddesses, Dragons, Phoenixes, Dryads, Cultivation, System, Yandere, Otherworldly Handsome MC, and many more.
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#No-NTR
#No-Yuri
#Yandere
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Author is mc is naive, idiot, beta pathetic, good guy, righteous, self righteous?
I am here to write a review after 100 chapters are complete and I have gotten many comments about how excessive the background information is, but I don't think possible for me to change that as It is been in locked chapters which I can't change even if I wanted to. HOWEVER, I WILL SAY ONE THING THAT YOU CAN SKIP FROM 48 TO 59 IF YOU DON'T WANT TO SEE THE PAST OF AVA AND ISLA THERE IS ALSO SOME INFORMATION ON THESE THAT WOULD BE IMPORTANT BUT YOU CAN STILL SKIP AS I WOULD ADD THOSE LITTLE BY LITTLE IN UPCOMING WHICH ARE IMPORTANT TO FOR BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF THE NOVEL.
Shameless Author POV: "The feeling of giving your novel 5 stars is pretty good" Author "Aren't you little to arrogant for a newbie author" Some random kid "Well, If I didn't not appreciated my own work then who will" Author "Of course, I will specially the scene where Goddess **** *****..." Some random kid "Well, Aren't you a man of culture my guy" Author "You have good eyes, Author" Some random kid "Well, how old are you to be this good" Author "I am definitely 18+" Some random kid "Really" Author "Well, I am just few weeks" Some random kid "How many weeks" Author "Only 157 week " Some random kid "..." Author "Well I am going, My mother is calling me for doing school homework " Some random kid
This story really has great potential… but a ton of filler chapters and meh grammar. The filler chapters focus on too many side characters imo. Like before the MC woke up. I actually like a few chapters introducing aunt may and the sister, but it drags too long and includes too much stuff outside of whats going on. Also, too many chapters spent on MC and his sisters flirting. He was only 11. Feels weird. Should have done it closer to 15. Plus… you straight up skipped chapters on him and aunt may early on. This writing really needs polishing to make it a great story. More meaningful dialogue, and more structure. Sometimes it feels all over the place. Focus more on whats important. Thats my review from chapter 46.
This is really a great job, author! There is only one problem, and that is his excessive softness with his sister. Judging by their interactions and his constant concessions, the harem will not begin until chapter 1000, if it begins at all. I would like to hope that the dynamics in the relationship between mc and his sister will change soon, and the harem part will begin. Sorry if I offended you, just a little dissatisfaction.
It feels like the author is procrastinating getting to the actual world evolution because he doesn't actually know how he's going to write that aspect of the story. To me it feels like this entire 100 and some odd chapters are just one extremely unnecessarily long prologue that should have ended at least 30-40 chapters ago. Otherwise it's a pretty good story.
the story of particular has a good deal of potential but it's being held back with all the excessive background information of characters who haven't played any major role in the story as of yet. it would be better to avoid all the sexual insinuations tells time for the situation to happen the plot is solid and I believe it could be a really good story I've got to back off all of the info drops until it's necessary for them to happen.
I would give you five star as you are a new author but I would both Alicia and Aiden to be together okaaaayyy
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What an amazing book, I can't wait for this planet to evolve and explore other planets, discovering unique races!!! Hope this novel continues!
So far so good its a good setting with good characters and a slow pace, but I would need more chapters. And the goddess acting immature. First, I thought it was like a dual cultivation novel with logic, then I read your comment . If there is a background story behind it, then I would like to find out more. I will give you five stars for motivation and everything good so far.
haiya uncle Roger here your uncle would you support by writing a review haiya make the word evolve faster haiya and don't make aunty May too strong uncle Roger scared of her haiya and upload some more nephew
I usually didn't write reviews but I would this time first I would like of you could upload more character pictures especially alicia and about the story so far 1. the starting chapter were little lacking in writing style 2. but the latter chapter are very good and I am definitely gonna continue with you 3. lastly there are very few chapters we need more.
good story, but way too much explanation too much is just as bad as too little
This is one of the most frustrating things ever, could have been good but with all the flashbacks the story hardly progress, long winded dialogues damn. Damn every single person. don’t need this damn; all substance lost.
my only problem with this is its EXTREMLY slow paced i mean we spent 24 chapters just sitting outside the school and probably only 5-10 minutes passed in the book so I'm hopping the author speeds up the pace other than that i think the book is good
overall a good attempt for a first novel. an editor would polish this novel and correct some of the sentences that make absolutely no sense. with webnovels, you tend to accept that grammar is something you have to deal with but should it? I suppose the frustration with this novel is i liked how the system and bloodline were set up. a useful reason to have a harem and to explore other regions with limited world building in the first dozen chapters. I do thank the author for this submission. I look forward to additional novels from you because grammar is the only thing stopping you from being someone i would spend coins on.
Story is good, but translation/gramma is pretty bad, He/her is used completely random on any gender. Still story makes up for it, though I'm properly dropping it once I get caught up. The first 70 chapters have been nothing but build up teasing without any release, leaving me more frustrated and makes me not enjoy the story at all, despite how engaging it is.
came across this little gem by chance. authors first book so has a few rough spots. enjoying the way you can see the story develop as the writer becomes more confident in his ability.
I think the book is pretty good and it’s interesting but I am curious is there going to be dual cultivation techniques and if so, is the MC and the heroines both going to learn the techniques