/ Anime & Comics / Will of embers
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What would you do if you got transported into the body of someone in your favorite anime? Well, it doesn't matter because without skills, knowledge, or even memories, you can only hope that nobody discovers your secret, especially when you are the most important person in the village. Hiruzen SI after the Nine-Tails attack. Nerfed Gamer system included.
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That was the best Web novel Fanfiction I read this month, period. it was so captivating I burned my tongue while eating, good job. this is a great new idea which have never been introduced before, I applaud it 👏, well done and keep it up
This fanfic is worth reading, the fresh idea amazed me every time i read this one. Read it guys, it is absolutely one of the best fanfic in this time. I hope the author can finish it until the end
Writing quality is good, The premise is also really great as well as the character. They all feel like og and Mc is making really good development.
It's a very good fanfic, I hope you continue to write this book.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
This fic is too good to just read and ignored it,so here's my review!. Wrinting quaility is well written.. or maybe I just have poor english. The plot also is Outstanding, I can't compare it with any fanfiction because this fanfic is different from other. In conclusion ..Good fanfic! Deserve to be praise! sorry for my bad english
I hope this Hiruzen is 100% of the original, with the exception of the skills. In fact Hiruzen is so incompetent, Danzo so crazy and Itachi so blind that if it weren't for the script Konoha would have been eliminated with absolute certainty after the massacre of the Uchiha clan. The argument is very simple and logical: remember the succession of public displays of weakness and massive losses after Sakumo's suicide, the third war, the Hyuuga incident, and the massacre caused by the Kyuubi with the death of Minato and Kushina, now add the Uchiha massacre and Konoha is so weak that Iwa or Kumo can destroy it. And then comes the second point, most of these losses were caused without any of the other major nations losing anything or losing something insignificant (Hyuuga case). Because of minor things nations invade others in the real world, Kishimoto created a volcano in the script in favor of Konoha and even put some logic into this collective attitude so bizarre that the story involving the Uchiha.
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Yess I need more. The premise has me hooked and I'm already drawn in by the first chapter. Absolutely reading this.
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this is good why no updates???... please update[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]...
I feel disappointed every time I see that I am close to reaching the last updated chapters. This novel is a masterpiece, one of the best things I have read about Naruto anime. I hope that it will not be dropped in the future.(English not my first language)
This one gave me that 'cold watermelon in the summer' feeling. Turns out there are some concepts that hasn't been milked to death by the fanfic-mass-production machine.
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So far it is pretty good we just neeeeeeed moreeeeeeeee!......................................................................................................
at first it was good then suddenly the mc became the most pervert mc considering his age as a grandfather and take on all the girls no matter their age even if those girls can be considered as his grandkids. at this moment most readers will feel disgusted and dropped this story including me.
General Spoiler Alert I won’t spoil too much, but here’s a bit about the story. The MC reincarnates as the Third Hokage, but with no ninjutsu, just pure raw power. The MC feels like a slave to the system, completing quests, making wishes, and getting rewards in return. Not much is known yet, as I’ve only read 28 chapters so far, but I’d still give it a try. The novel is pretty awesome!
Sublime Just a piece of art Among the heap of mtl mediocrity the will of embers burns true to its name One of the best pieces I've come across on this platform Thank you author and keep cooking this
such a excellent book... def the hiruzen we want please don't drop such a good book and keep it up...
This is goooooood Hiruzen isn’t just randomly omnipotent all of a sudden and he actually works to make changes and improvements. A fresh read fr keep it up