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摘要
In contemporary Japan, Yuu Tachibana lives a seemingly ordinary life with his beloved family. However, Yuu harbors a secret: he has lived a past life in another world, making his current life his second. Having no one to call family in his previous life, Yuu cherishes his family all the more.
One fateful night, Yuu discovers an unidentified phone in his room. The message displayed on its screen is cryptic and foreboding: [Do you want to save your family from their terrible fate?]
With a sense of dread, Yuu is faced with a choice: [Yes] or [No].
Yuu must decide if he is willing to risk everything to protect his loved ones. Will he choose to save them, or let fate run its course?
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So, before you jump into the fic, let me address the frustration of some readers, This fic is slow. The Dimensional Chat Group, is not given to the MC in the first or fifth chapter.
No, no! Not even in 8 chapter, It decides to make a fashionable entrance in chapter 11. And we don't even get to fully explore it until chapter 15. Isn't that just great?
The delay in the chat group's appearance seems to be a point of confusion for many readers. While the chat group is indeed a central aspect of the story, it's important to understand why the MC would use this unknown and potentially dangerous power.
If the MC is reckless or unintelligent, the chat group's usage might begin in the first chapter.
However, if the MC is depicted as a self-proclaimed genius or cautious individual, the story will reach the point of the chat group's involvement by chapter 3 at the latest, followed by a mission.
In the initial 8 to 9 chapters, we get a glimpse into the MC's ordinary existence. He leads a regular life, surrounded by his loving family. He attends school, where he has a small circle of friends. Financially speaking, his family doesn't face any difficulties or hardships. And he is content with this simple, everyday life.
Now, you might be wondering, why on earth would a person like our MC take a risk with the Chat Group? Hear me out. He's not some thrill-seeker, or a martial arts enthusiast looking for stronger opponents, nor is he a genius bored out of his mind. He's content with his life, and he doesn't crave anything more. So, why would he put his neck on the line?
That's precisely why it takes so long for the Chat Group to enter the picture. The initial chapters focus on showcasing his everyday life with family and friends. It's all about giving you a glimpse into why he wouldn't initially desire the chat group. But, of course, he eventually takes the plunge because he discovers a reason that speaks to him.
Now, I know some of you may say, "Hey, couldn't you have summed it up in a single chapter?" Well, sure, I could have, but I didn't want to. Summarizing the MC's relationships and motivations would have resulted in a shallow excuse that you—yes, you—would probably complain about later. Plus, there's more to this story than just his daily life. But enough about that.
Let's get one thing straight: this fic is slow. If you're expecting a quick summary with occasional fights and snappy dialogue, do yourself and me a favor by clicking off this fic.
You'll find what you're looking for in less than 10 seconds, guaranteed.
So, if you're still here after this warning, I don't want to hear any complaints about the story's pace. You've been duly informed. And hey, as you read, try paying a little more attention to uncover the hidden meanings within the dialogues and monologues.
Also, I am not saying that I have done a fantastic job on the writing, No that’s not the point of this.
The point is that you the reader don’t waste your time reading something you don’t like. And I don’t get 1-star reviews for a reason as petty as ‘The Chat group took too long to appear’
That's all for now. Thank you for reading.
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Although he has a slow development, he is an author who already has some experience and his other stories are pleasant to read! Recommended for readers who have the patience to wait for the development of the story.
This is shaping up to be a good story. The chat group is presented differently than normal and we're given a chance to look at the MC before he gets caught up in chatgroup shenanigans. The MC comes off as standoffish and a little removed from his own life. Part of that is certainly coming from him being a reincarnator or transmigrator. That is left a little unclear and will probably be clarified later on. The MC has a lot of the traits of a mysterious Kirito-style Gary-Stu, however, it is written well enough that I was more than able to just suspend disbelief when necessary. I personally like the emphasis on supporting characters, his family especially, and the relationship with the girls from demonslayer really give his character some life. Not a lot has happened so far, and that is definitely to the story's benefit. The slower pace is good. The only downside so far is that the updates are a little slow. Keep it up Author-san!
The story isn't bad but I'm 8 chapters in still no sign of any chat group. A day of school alone took like 7 chapters and the chapters are long like 4kish words. The grammar is good, characters are decent but the snail as* pace kills it all for me. I won't tell you to not read it but you have been warned.
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
So the anime that is apart of this is Tachibana-san-Chi No Dansei Jijou, OreGaru, and Horimiya. The author left in a comment in one of the chapters that there wouldn't be any NTR.
I'm a simple man when I read about a group chat I hope I can read about a group chat But this takes forever to just mention the chat and when it finally comes out this isn't done another couple of chapters have to go through the protagonist to fix the problem
Everything is good but can u plzz keep posting chapter of the novel [I didn’t ask for this*] is really great novel tbhh can u like keep posting?:/
Just for the snark in the synopsis, but let's be honest here slow is cool but too slow is tedious to read, that's just how it is.
I come to see a group chat but this is so far from that plot that I don't know why the title hasn't changed........................................................................... .....................................................................................................................................................
Actually a great story. This isn't a webnovel or some chapter of the week story that most people read. The payoffs take a long time to get to, the story moves closer to real time then timeskips, and the story is an actual story. Surprising right? If you want a regular webnovel with instant gratification, you're looking in the wrong place. If you want a story thats like a novel and takes a second or so to process, this is the story. Only down side is that its chapter releases are like an actual story. XD TLDR: Not lord of the rings story (thank god) or brain-dead fun story, but a story similar to an actual light novel. Similar in chapter releases as well.
conozco y he leído las otras historias de este autor, a pesar de que a veces uno desearía más capítulos (no significa que pública lento) para leer más, el desarrolla muy bien sus historias y mantiene un muy buen orden del desarrollo de la historia y el carácter de sus personajes.
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
After catching up and hearing/seeing the hate the author received for this story from a few reviewers I felt the need to throw some words on the other end of the spectrum. Grammar and syntax wise there is no issue and the proficiency of English is much better than other novels. Only issues you'll run into are some misspellings. Our MC is Yuu Tachibana, that last name should send shivers down anyone's back if they know of the history of that name from some cultured content. Never fear though as our MC lives in a mishmash of anime worlds so it's not all grim. For the first, I think, 15 chapters, we are introduced to Yuu and his family as well as aspects of his school life. This isn't padding, rather it fleshes out his and others characters so that when the Group Chat is introduced later we understand why he decides to go through with it's dangerous missions. I don't see why people would have an issue with a character's personality and view being expounded upon instead of just having a perfect character with the chat from Chapter 1. Now, regarding how the Chat itself is setup. Currently we only have 1 member (Yuu) and he has only done 1 mission but it seems to be well thought out given how it described the mission credentials and rewards/punishments. I hope the author continues the story once he is done with his other works. As some points of improvement consider the following: When it comes time for Yuu to use the points he gained try not to make him too OP and turn into a Gary Stu. Instead, it'd be better narratively if he gained powers with side effects he has to train for a while to overcome. We can see that Yuu is a bit of a kuudere towards those he cares for. Try to add some extra examples of him being caring or people seeing how caring he is even if he is not outright with it. This will likely stop people saying he's too unemotional when he really does care but shows it in non direct ways. Keep up the great work!
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people ask what a dimensional chat group, why a dimensional chat group. yet they never ask how a dimensional chat group😔
Ok so I am going to give it 5 stars I myself wrote it, but I am biased bite me. Anyway, the main reason I am writing this review is for the new readers you will likely see the reviews first. The story is slow, not slow in progression but it feels slow because of the low amount of chapter updates, like I only update 3 chapters a week, each chapter being 1500 words, so it is bound to look slow. Another reason for it being slow is I am trying to build the character of the mc and the people around him. It is in the synopsis that the mc will be taking the dimensional chat group to save his family that is a given. But it won't really be as good if we don't know how the family is or how Mc normally behaves in his day-to-day life, Of course, such things can't be done so quickly for me as I tend to write a bit more descriptively and often end up going on a tangent but if you pay attention even the tangents serve their purpose of solidifying the characters that are already there. I know this might be triggering for many readers who are used to the fast development of the chat group fics or fics in general found these days, where the mc gets the chat group/Cheat or power in the first chapter and a mission in the next, but don't you ever feel like 'Why did he accept it like it was no big deal?' 'What are his motivations for doing so?' At times like these there are cliche reason's like 'He is reincarnated so he doesn't think it is weird,' or 'I need to save my family/I want to get stronger to protect my family' I get that it is the same motivation my mc has. But right now I am giving the reason he is willing to go that far, I am telling you through the scenarios that the mc thinks that his family is worth risking his life for rather than just saying it clearly 'I want to protect my family,' because then it looks like a shallow reason that has no substance or base to it in the readers mind. and the mc will be labeled as generic 'I want to save people' before the reader even makes it to the next chapter. I know it happens because I do it myself. And so I have a small message for those that will say 'It is slow' First, consume what is in front of you before asking for more, That is the basic courtesy. You do not understand half of the things that has happened in the nine chapters that are out currently. The chapters are littered with hints you just need to run your brain a little that has been turned off by reading crack fics all day and you'll like the direction, but you'd rather have the answer handed to you on the platter. Anyway, Thank you for reading this. it means a lot to me. if you want faster updates and more chapters use the power stones you have 500 of those equal to one chapter. Also, comment if you find one of the details in the chapters so that others can see what can happen if you use your brain while reading. And comment to reach out to me if you have any questions I'll answer them to the best of my ability, Once again Thank you and Bye~.