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寫檢討Although he has a slow development, he is an author who already has some experience and his other stories are pleasant to read! Recommended for readers who have the patience to wait for the development of the story.
This is shaping up to be a good story. The chat group is presented differently than normal and we're given a chance to look at the MC before he gets caught up in chatgroup shenanigans. The MC comes off as standoffish and a little removed from his own life. Part of that is certainly coming from him being a reincarnator or transmigrator. That is left a little unclear and will probably be clarified later on. The MC has a lot of the traits of a mysterious Kirito-style Gary-Stu, however, it is written well enough that I was more than able to just suspend disbelief when necessary. I personally like the emphasis on supporting characters, his family especially, and the relationship with the girls from demonslayer really give his character some life. Not a lot has happened so far, and that is definitely to the story's benefit. The slower pace is good. The only downside so far is that the updates are a little slow. Keep it up Author-san!
Good novel but publish more new chapters with a good introduction to the hero we want to break him or see new sides of his personality possessive or crazy
Just for the snark in the synopsis, but let's be honest here slow is cool but too slow is tedious to read, that's just how it is.
It has been a fun read, one of those stories to read and turn off your brain for a while, the update is slow but understandable if you see the author note. I have really liked it so far and highly recommend it for reading. What I do know is that I don't feel like reading continuously.
Actually a great story. This isn't a webnovel or some chapter of the week story that most people read. The payoffs take a long time to get to, the story moves closer to real time then timeskips, and the story is an actual story. Surprising right? If you want a regular webnovel with instant gratification, you're looking in the wrong place. If you want a story thats like a novel and takes a second or so to process, this is the story. Only down side is that its chapter releases are like an actual story. XD TLDR: Not lord of the rings story (thank god) or brain-dead fun story, but a story similar to an actual light novel. Similar in chapter releases as well.
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
After catching up and hearing/seeing the hate the author received for this story from a few reviewers I felt the need to throw some words on the other end of the spectrum. Grammar and syntax wise there is no issue and the proficiency of English is much better than other novels. Only issues you'll run into are some misspellings. Our MC is Yuu Tachibana, that last name should send shivers down anyone's back if they know of the history of that name from some cultured content. Never fear though as our MC lives in a mishmash of anime worlds so it's not all grim. For the first, I think, 15 chapters, we are introduced to Yuu and his family as well as aspects of his school life. This isn't padding, rather it fleshes out his and others characters so that when the Group Chat is introduced later we understand why he decides to go through with it's dangerous missions. I don't see why people would have an issue with a character's personality and view being expounded upon instead of just having a perfect character with the chat from Chapter 1. Now, regarding how the Chat itself is setup. Currently we only have 1 member (Yuu) and he has only done 1 mission but it seems to be well thought out given how it described the mission credentials and rewards/punishments. I hope the author continues the story once he is done with his other works. As some points of improvement consider the following: When it comes time for Yuu to use the points he gained try not to make him too OP and turn into a Gary Stu. Instead, it'd be better narratively if he gained powers with side effects he has to train for a while to overcome. We can see that Yuu is a bit of a kuudere towards those he cares for. Try to add some extra examples of him being caring or people seeing how caring he is even if he is not outright with it. This will likely stop people saying he's too unemotional when he really does care but shows it in non direct ways. Keep up the great work!
揭示劇透start is really slow but the problem with it was it wasn't really interesting for me sure it's nice that the story is really trying to build up the relationship between characters but it's not enough chat group fic for me are bout exploring multiple world yet this fic went to another world and stayed in the same place for far to many chapters. My suggestion would've been should of started the story with exciting things that would capture readers then you can slow down and show his everyday life. I'll probably wait for a few more months to revisit this.
I am writing this review as an encouragement for the author. Its my message about how much I am enjoying this fic currently. The story is very good. Though it is little slow paced but this fic have the potential to cross 500 chapters like akikan. I am sad that this fic is going to be on Hitus. Hopefully it would get updated again soon.
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I come to see a group chat but this is so far from that plot that I don't know why the title hasn't changed........................................................................... .....................................................................................................................................................
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I'm a simple man when I read about a group chat I hope I can read about a group chat But this takes forever to just mention the chat and when it finally comes out this isn't done another couple of chapters have to go through the protagonist to fix the problem
i really enjoy the story wish chapters come faster but not much can be done about that really like where the story is heading. idk why people don't like that the chat doesn't start till 11 the chapters before that are great and I even forgot that the purpose of the story was for the group chat while I was reading it....looking forward to future chapters :D
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
people ask what a dimensional chat group, why a dimensional chat group. yet they never ask how a dimensional chat group😔
I feel like there really hasn't been many chapter updates since my last review but author wants reviews, I'm not really a good reviewer and this is probably gonna be copied on the other stories, I like the story enough right now, anything that may be annoying isn't annoying enough to remember that long so isn't that bad, I guess something that seems to be a problem with this and the other stories is that sometimes it feels like nothing really advanced at all, like it feels like the chapter was just one space where conversations happened and then the end either to continue on next chapter and move to a new place. or already starting in a new place, sometimes okay also just edited this since I remembered, I can't really seem to do half stars on my phone when reviewing so I kind of just do a stable four instead of more accurate ones, since it feels worse making something go completely to the next number instead of be like half which I feel is closer
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Liked it so far, can't wait to read more.Too lazy to write more.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I noticed that you release chapters of fanfiction second life in another world less and less. Please more chapters in that fanfic, since I have already re-read it several times and look forward to new chapters
I guess I'll just do one right now since it's updating, uhh pverall I enjoy it, technically not much as actually happened especially with its slow pace which isn't necessarily bad but sometimes it could get annoying after reading and feeling like there really wasn't progressing but I will assume that will slowly work itself out when more plot comes about, I ain't a good review so I'll just put it at a 4 since I can't seem to do 3.5 for just average for now and anything lower than thay would feel bad.
Ok so I am going to give it 5 stars I myself wrote it, but I am biased bite me. Anyway, the main reason I am writing this review is for the new readers you will likely see the reviews first. The story is slow, not slow in progression but it feels slow because of the low amount of chapter updates, like I only update 3 chapters a week, each chapter being 1500 words, so it is bound to look slow. Another reason for it being slow is I am trying to build the character of the mc and the people around him. It is in the synopsis that the mc will be taking the dimensional chat group to save his family that is a given. But it won't really be as good if we don't know how the family is or how Mc normally behaves in his day-to-day life, Of course, such things can't be done so quickly for me as I tend to write a bit more descriptively and often end up going on a tangent but if you pay attention even the tangents serve their purpose of solidifying the characters that are already there. I know this might be triggering for many readers who are used to the fast development of the chat group fics or fics in general found these days, where the mc gets the chat group/Cheat or power in the first chapter and a mission in the next, but don't you ever feel like 'Why did he accept it like it was no big deal?' 'What are his motivations for doing so?' At times like these there are cliche reason's like 'He is reincarnated so he doesn't think it is weird,' or 'I need to save my family/I want to get stronger to protect my family' I get that it is the same motivation my mc has. But right now I am giving the reason he is willing to go that far, I am telling you through the scenarios that the mc thinks that his family is worth risking his life for rather than just saying it clearly 'I want to protect my family,' because then it looks like a shallow reason that has no substance or base to it in the readers mind. and the mc will be labeled as generic 'I want to save people' before the reader even makes it to the next chapter. I know it happens because I do it myself. And so I have a small message for those that will say 'It is slow' First, consume what is in front of you before asking for more, That is the basic courtesy. You do not understand half of the things that has happened in the nine chapters that are out currently. The chapters are littered with hints you just need to run your brain a little that has been turned off by reading crack fics all day and you'll like the direction, but you'd rather have the answer handed to you on the platter. Anyway, Thank you for reading this. it means a lot to me. if you want faster updates and more chapters use the power stones you have 500 of those equal to one chapter. Also, comment if you find one of the details in the chapters so that others can see what can happen if you use your brain while reading. And comment to reach out to me if you have any questions I'll answer them to the best of my ability, Once again Thank you and Bye~.
Although he has a slow development, he is an author who already has some experience and his other stories are pleasant to read! Recommended for readers who have the patience to wait for the development of the story.
This is shaping up to be a good story. The chat group is presented differently than normal and we're given a chance to look at the MC before he gets caught up in chatgroup shenanigans. The MC comes off as standoffish and a little removed from his own life. Part of that is certainly coming from him being a reincarnator or transmigrator. That is left a little unclear and will probably be clarified later on. The MC has a lot of the traits of a mysterious Kirito-style Gary-Stu, however, it is written well enough that I was more than able to just suspend disbelief when necessary. I personally like the emphasis on supporting characters, his family especially, and the relationship with the girls from demonslayer really give his character some life. Not a lot has happened so far, and that is definitely to the story's benefit. The slower pace is good. The only downside so far is that the updates are a little slow. Keep it up Author-san!
Good novel but publish more new chapters with a good introduction to the hero we want to break him or see new sides of his personality possessive or crazy
Just for the snark in the synopsis, but let's be honest here slow is cool but too slow is tedious to read, that's just how it is.
It has been a fun read, one of those stories to read and turn off your brain for a while, the update is slow but understandable if you see the author note. I have really liked it so far and highly recommend it for reading. What I do know is that I don't feel like reading continuously.
Actually a great story. This isn't a webnovel or some chapter of the week story that most people read. The payoffs take a long time to get to, the story moves closer to real time then timeskips, and the story is an actual story. Surprising right? If you want a regular webnovel with instant gratification, you're looking in the wrong place. If you want a story thats like a novel and takes a second or so to process, this is the story. Only down side is that its chapter releases are like an actual story. XD TLDR: Not lord of the rings story (thank god) or brain-dead fun story, but a story similar to an actual light novel. Similar in chapter releases as well.
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
After catching up and hearing/seeing the hate the author received for this story from a few reviewers I felt the need to throw some words on the other end of the spectrum. Grammar and syntax wise there is no issue and the proficiency of English is much better than other novels. Only issues you'll run into are some misspellings. Our MC is Yuu Tachibana, that last name should send shivers down anyone's back if they know of the history of that name from some cultured content. Never fear though as our MC lives in a mishmash of anime worlds so it's not all grim. For the first, I think, 15 chapters, we are introduced to Yuu and his family as well as aspects of his school life. This isn't padding, rather it fleshes out his and others characters so that when the Group Chat is introduced later we understand why he decides to go through with it's dangerous missions. I don't see why people would have an issue with a character's personality and view being expounded upon instead of just having a perfect character with the chat from Chapter 1. Now, regarding how the Chat itself is setup. Currently we only have 1 member (Yuu) and he has only done 1 mission but it seems to be well thought out given how it described the mission credentials and rewards/punishments. I hope the author continues the story once he is done with his other works. As some points of improvement consider the following: When it comes time for Yuu to use the points he gained try not to make him too OP and turn into a Gary Stu. Instead, it'd be better narratively if he gained powers with side effects he has to train for a while to overcome. We can see that Yuu is a bit of a kuudere towards those he cares for. Try to add some extra examples of him being caring or people seeing how caring he is even if he is not outright with it. This will likely stop people saying he's too unemotional when he really does care but shows it in non direct ways. Keep up the great work!
揭示劇透start is really slow but the problem with it was it wasn't really interesting for me sure it's nice that the story is really trying to build up the relationship between characters but it's not enough chat group fic for me are bout exploring multiple world yet this fic went to another world and stayed in the same place for far to many chapters. My suggestion would've been should of started the story with exciting things that would capture readers then you can slow down and show his everyday life. I'll probably wait for a few more months to revisit this.
I am writing this review as an encouragement for the author. Its my message about how much I am enjoying this fic currently. The story is very good. Though it is little slow paced but this fic have the potential to cross 500 chapters like akikan. I am sad that this fic is going to be on Hitus. Hopefully it would get updated again soon.
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I come to see a group chat but this is so far from that plot that I don't know why the title hasn't changed........................................................................... .....................................................................................................................................................
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I'm a simple man when I read about a group chat I hope I can read about a group chat But this takes forever to just mention the chat and when it finally comes out this isn't done another couple of chapters have to go through the protagonist to fix the problem
i really enjoy the story wish chapters come faster but not much can be done about that really like where the story is heading. idk why people don't like that the chat doesn't start till 11 the chapters before that are great and I even forgot that the purpose of the story was for the group chat while I was reading it....looking forward to future chapters :D
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
people ask what a dimensional chat group, why a dimensional chat group. yet they never ask how a dimensional chat group😔
I feel like there really hasn't been many chapter updates since my last review but author wants reviews, I'm not really a good reviewer and this is probably gonna be copied on the other stories, I like the story enough right now, anything that may be annoying isn't annoying enough to remember that long so isn't that bad, I guess something that seems to be a problem with this and the other stories is that sometimes it feels like nothing really advanced at all, like it feels like the chapter was just one space where conversations happened and then the end either to continue on next chapter and move to a new place. or already starting in a new place, sometimes okay also just edited this since I remembered, I can't really seem to do half stars on my phone when reviewing so I kind of just do a stable four instead of more accurate ones, since it feels worse making something go completely to the next number instead of be like half which I feel is closer
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Liked it so far, can't wait to read more.Too lazy to write more.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I noticed that you release chapters of fanfiction second life in another world less and less. Please more chapters in that fanfic, since I have already re-read it several times and look forward to new chapters
I guess I'll just do one right now since it's updating, uhh pverall I enjoy it, technically not much as actually happened especially with its slow pace which isn't necessarily bad but sometimes it could get annoying after reading and feeling like there really wasn't progressing but I will assume that will slowly work itself out when more plot comes about, I ain't a good review so I'll just put it at a 4 since I can't seem to do 3.5 for just average for now and anything lower than thay would feel bad.
Ok so I am going to give it 5 stars I myself wrote it, but I am biased bite me. Anyway, the main reason I am writing this review is for the new readers you will likely see the reviews first. The story is slow, not slow in progression but it feels slow because of the low amount of chapter updates, like I only update 3 chapters a week, each chapter being 1500 words, so it is bound to look slow. Another reason for it being slow is I am trying to build the character of the mc and the people around him. It is in the synopsis that the mc will be taking the dimensional chat group to save his family that is a given. But it won't really be as good if we don't know how the family is or how Mc normally behaves in his day-to-day life, Of course, such things can't be done so quickly for me as I tend to write a bit more descriptively and often end up going on a tangent but if you pay attention even the tangents serve their purpose of solidifying the characters that are already there. I know this might be triggering for many readers who are used to the fast development of the chat group fics or fics in general found these days, where the mc gets the chat group/Cheat or power in the first chapter and a mission in the next, but don't you ever feel like 'Why did he accept it like it was no big deal?' 'What are his motivations for doing so?' At times like these there are cliche reason's like 'He is reincarnated so he doesn't think it is weird,' or 'I need to save my family/I want to get stronger to protect my family' I get that it is the same motivation my mc has. But right now I am giving the reason he is willing to go that far, I am telling you through the scenarios that the mc thinks that his family is worth risking his life for rather than just saying it clearly 'I want to protect my family,' because then it looks like a shallow reason that has no substance or base to it in the readers mind. and the mc will be labeled as generic 'I want to save people' before the reader even makes it to the next chapter. I know it happens because I do it myself. And so I have a small message for those that will say 'It is slow' First, consume what is in front of you before asking for more, That is the basic courtesy. You do not understand half of the things that has happened in the nine chapters that are out currently. The chapters are littered with hints you just need to run your brain a little that has been turned off by reading crack fics all day and you'll like the direction, but you'd rather have the answer handed to you on the platter. Anyway, Thank you for reading this. it means a lot to me. if you want faster updates and more chapters use the power stones you have 500 of those equal to one chapter. Also, comment if you find one of the details in the chapters so that others can see what can happen if you use your brain while reading. And comment to reach out to me if you have any questions I'll answer them to the best of my ability, Once again Thank you and Bye~.