/ Anime & Comics / When The Facade Breaks (Jumpchain)(Current World: Invincible)
摘要
(Any and all recognized media, or characters are not owned by me and are owned by their respective companies and owners.)
What is the true value of a second chance?
What would most do if they got one?
Seek power? Glory? Women?
Maybe I would want the same thing.
Its time I found out. But first I need to survive to find out.
(Expect cliches and a rather boring story, I write this for fun and it will not be a deep story. He will be OP so the stakes will be rather low. Also there will be liberties taken with the jump chain mechanics.)
World's Visited List: Jumper (Movie), Chronicle (Movie), FarmVille, Megamind, Invincible,
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Good start to a story and character is actually pretty smart. I like the concept and also the first two worlds are from great movies that have amazing powers and potential
Character of the mc is so bland and minimum interaction with the plot why mc is always hiding and why is he so much coward Red flags - mc , interaction with the plot, too much words but less useful content
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I’m very much enjoying how you’ve developed the story so far. Looking forward to more jumps and how you expand on the main character more. I also hope he collects more companions soon. Heck maybe in the last year take both Megamind and MetroMan on the jumps although I’d feel a little bad leaving megaminds love interest out.
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It's one of my new favs it has a lot of potential and it brings me happiness to read a chapter keep up the good work Author sama
So far he goes to a world, barely participates in it or just literally prevents the plot from happening and just chills practising for years only to go to the next world to do the same. .. .😑