7評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Character of the mc is so bland and minimum interaction with the plot why mc is always hiding and why is he so much coward Red flags - mc , interaction with the plot, too much words but less useful content
I’m very much enjoying how you’ve developed the story so far. Looking forward to more jumps and how you expand on the main character more. I also hope he collects more companions soon. Heck maybe in the last year take both Megamind and MetroMan on the jumps although I’d feel a little bad leaving megaminds love interest out.
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Buena historia bro sigue así. -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
So far he goes to a world, barely participates in it or just literally prevents the plot from happening and just chills practising for years only to go to the next world to do the same. .. .😑
It's one of my new favs it has a lot of potential and it brings me happiness to read a chapter keep up the good work Author sama
Good start to a story and character is actually pretty smart. I like the concept and also the first two worlds are from great movies that have amazing powers and potential
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Character of the mc is so bland and minimum interaction with the plot why mc is always hiding and why is he so much coward Red flags - mc , interaction with the plot, too much words but less useful content
I’m very much enjoying how you’ve developed the story so far. Looking forward to more jumps and how you expand on the main character more. I also hope he collects more companions soon. Heck maybe in the last year take both Megamind and MetroMan on the jumps although I’d feel a little bad leaving megaminds love interest out.
揭示劇透 Buena historia bro sigue así. -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
So far he goes to a world, barely participates in it or just literally prevents the plot from happening and just chills practising for years only to go to the next world to do the same. .. .😑
It's one of my new favs it has a lot of potential and it brings me happiness to read a chapter keep up the good work Author sama
Good start to a story and character is actually pretty smart. I like the concept and also the first two worlds are from great movies that have amazing powers and potential
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