/ 奇幻 / What if goku was in highschool dxd
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What if goku was in highschool dxd. Were going to used manga goku will all of this abilities but he is around the age of a high schooler. Meaning Perfect Master Ultra instinct and all of goku's abilities. This happens before the rating match and the story will continue on before the rating match. No! Goku will not get a harem. Goku isn't the guy to have one.
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This is messed up in many ways, 1st your grammer is terrible it is not Goku would got to school it is Goku went to school, then you are just rushing the story as well.
Yeah this is a mess man. Its not the worst attempt at writing but it far from good. You used the word 'would' in almost every sentence, I counted 320 times in just 11 short chapters...
i got cancer after reading this ..........................................................................................................................