/ Anime & Comics / Warhammer Lost Primarch: The 2nd Knight
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21 children created through powerful genetic manipulation and the use of the Warp. Due to an incursion, each of the children were sent out into space for their safety but due to the interference of the Chaos Gods, they were scattered across the Galaxy.
Each child was sent to a different world where they had different. Some were slaves, some were abandoned in the wild, some were messiahs. But no matter where they went, each would rise to the highest position they could.
This is the story of the 2nd Child, son of the Emperor. He was given the name Baldur by the ones who found him and he would do the same as his brothers.
He would rise above those on Feluc to become the greatest before meeting his true father and leading his sons into battle. Over the years, he would gain many titles and epithets.
The Tundra Prince, The High Imperial Knight, Lord 2nd, The Grand Knight, The Savior of Ryza, The True Heir.
But the two that would all would know him by were the 2nd Primarch and Primarch of the Grey Knights.
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Despite what I wrote earlier here, the fanfic was a bit disappointing. Firstly, a very strong violation of history. Further there will be some discrepancies. Gray knights are powerful psykers, absolutely everyone! Secondly, it is also doubtful that a skilled psyker, the commander of a legion of gray knights, lost in a fight to ordinary psykers. They are already trained to fight against them in battles, using their abilities. It looks sickly, and that's annoying.
I hope it hasn't fallen, very good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its really great, just keep up the action scenes and daemon hunting and Your golden
Great story so far, little to none grammatical mistakes. sentence construction and even the plot is pretty good too. Hoping for more and keep publishing author.
Có vẻ như nó đã lệch với nguyên tác, nhưng không sao, tác phẩm rất hay, sáng tạo, tôi rất mong chờ khi tác phẩm đến giai đoạn 40k, nhưng bạn có thể ra chương mới nhanh hơn nữa được không? Haha cảm ơn bạn
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This is a great story. There are not that many good warhammer stories with good grammar so when I read this story I was very excited. Keep up the good work.