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I hope it hasn't fallen, very good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Có vẻ như nó đã lệch với nguyên tác, nhưng không sao, tác phẩm rất hay, sáng tạo, tôi rất mong chờ khi tác phẩm đến giai đoạn 40k, nhưng bạn có thể ra chương mới nhanh hơn nữa được không? Haha cảm ơn bạn
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Despite what I wrote earlier here, the fanfic was a bit disappointing. Firstly, a very strong violation of history. Further there will be some discrepancies. Gray knights are powerful psykers, absolutely everyone! Secondly, it is also doubtful that a skilled psyker, the commander of a legion of gray knights, lost in a fight to ordinary psykers. They are already trained to fight against them in battles, using their abilities. It looks sickly, and that's annoying.
Its really great, just keep up the action scenes and daemon hunting and Your golden
Great story so far, little to none grammatical mistakes. sentence construction and even the plot is pretty good too. Hoping for more and keep publishing author.
This is a great story. There are not that many good warhammer stories with good grammar so when I read this story I was very excited. Keep up the good work.
I hope it hasn't fallen, very good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Có vẻ như nó đã lệch với nguyên tác, nhưng không sao, tác phẩm rất hay, sáng tạo, tôi rất mong chờ khi tác phẩm đến giai đoạn 40k, nhưng bạn có thể ra chương mới nhanh hơn nữa được không? Haha cảm ơn bạn
揭示劇透 Despite what I wrote earlier here, the fanfic was a bit disappointing. Firstly, a very strong violation of history. Further there will be some discrepancies. Gray knights are powerful psykers, absolutely everyone! Secondly, it is also doubtful that a skilled psyker, the commander of a legion of gray knights, lost in a fight to ordinary psykers. They are already trained to fight against them in battles, using their abilities. It looks sickly, and that's annoying.
Its really great, just keep up the action scenes and daemon hunting and Your golden
Great story so far, little to none grammatical mistakes. sentence construction and even the plot is pretty good too. Hoping for more and keep publishing author.
This is a great story. There are not that many good warhammer stories with good grammar so when I read this story I was very excited. Keep up the good work.
is this still in hiatus or discontinued , drop