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Manato Tsukasa is one of the top tier players of the game, Alternate World. After being humiliated countless of times in the game, he became a professional top tier Magic Knight player. When he was about to get married to the woman he is engaged with, he discovered that he she was tasked to do so.
After desperately escaping death, he encountered a similar person in the alley, bloodied and out of breath. Manato recognized this person to be the creator of the game, Alternate World. The creator then handed him out an item that will return him to his past self, hoping that he will be the one who can change their destiny. He was also entrusted to travel back in time with a peculiar data that can only be accessed back in the past since he is already dying. Desperate to survive, he grabbed the item and decided to return.
He woke up once again, in his 17 year old body where the game is still launching. In his hands, is the weapon entrusted by the creator that has been transported with him. With his photographic memory and the data in his past, he won't just go down easily and he will use this chance to stop everything that happened from repeating itself. He won't trust and promised to destroy everything that will cause his demise.
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Chapter updates depends on your dear author's mood. I will be updating around Friday, Saturday or Sunday. I have no permanent schedule but that will be my free time to update.
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Game elements with exciting twists..... But the update is really slow. Please release chapters more frequently......Hope this novel won't be dropped unlike others...............
It's good but when the transaction between MC and that one girl Sparrow went down it was a let down because he literally said that she can pay for his services like that was kinda lame but overall good just hope he becomes a savage at some points in the story and keep being solo
This Book is Great but the update is slow tho but it the author idea anyway so I just going to Wait and when this book hit above chapter 100 I going to come back and speed read it hehee.
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this story good.....................................................................YEET..........................ILIKETURTLES............TWEETTWEET................
I always hold a grudge, i always get my revenge even if i have to wait for 10 years or longer, i will have my revenge I love revenge, a sweet revenge
The overall story is a bit different from regular reincarnation video game stories. The protagonist is totally OP. I do not really understand the logic of the GM considering his weapon as legit. The whole attachment should not exist in the timeline in the first . We need to find a sensible reason for the existence of the weapon. The chapters are short in the beginning but eventually increase in length which is a good thing. The most disappointing part was to discontinue this story and create another book with a more detailed story line. I am disappointed because the new book did not catch up to this one yet.
I enjoyed this novel a lot , though there were many plotholes in between due to author being in a rush but can be solved through imagination. The Thing is ....this novel will always be incomplete,reason is because new modoified version is super bad . Author was just overthinking about stuff, was really disappointed when i realised it , i even quit reading the new version since it was so boring. I am a guy who read supreme magus which is a slow paced story , so it's NOT because of slow pace but other exisiting demerits in modified version
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Pretty good story. Grammar could be improved though. Also, add some tags to your story. I am not able to vote with Stones to your story though
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Aurther san.. great novel.. but need more chapters... Please........................................................................................................................................
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Read quite of few stories like this one about going back to the past with a vr involve. Starts off a little bit different but still the same. I like how he levels up fast then taking it slow, since its seems the max level is 1000 in the game. I understand his reluctance to be friends with people, but it would seem he was only betrayed in the beginning of the game and with is ex trying to kill him, but it seem he had good friends to since his ex mention that there were kill orders to the people close to him. I hope the author explains later on why that person wanted him dead, his friends and the creator of the game, because it seems more than just the fact he was good in the game and the creator succeed in a vr game that he didn't. I would have giving a higher rating but the MC behavior is a little annoying and I have read to many stories with this kind of setup. Hoping the author surprises me later down the road with something new and the changes to the MC to be a little big more likeable.
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