摘要
Dimensional Rifts permeate throughout the Chaotic Universe, bringing with them immense dangers...as well as innumerable treasures.
In a small Realm, a destitute boy awakens the Idle Gaming System.
Countless Dimensional Rifts later, he lazily raises his head to realize...he is invincible!
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Not really a review. Just been following Ur other novel for a long time so just giving it a 5⭐️ for supp.
Simply put if you like OP protagonists then our favorite author here is the perfect person. Love the work and can’t wait for another one of a kind OP mc.
I honestly feel it's jumping the gun making the book premium so soon and that's why I've decided to make my review. Slight spoilers btw. The writing can get very repetitive, using the same words and identifiers constantly within the same paragraph. Character and story are also pretty generic. Kid died, got reincarnated, finds out he has a OP system, the works. As far as the MC goes he's about as spicy as flour. No motivation beyond "getting stronger" after they get invaded and he sees his parents die, it's now "get stronger to get revenge". His dialouge and interactions are pretty meh as well.. It's fight scene, talk about how crazy the fighting is during the fight, then eyyyyy I got some stuff, rinse repeat. Conversations are stiff and don't really add much, there is even a section where he and his father do entire conversations from looking at each other. Overall the writing quality is average, the world building is kinda interesting, almost more so than the main story line at times. But at barely 50 chapters with a pretty lackluster story and these issues I feel the author is riding off his success with other novels. His promise of a Mashup of novels seems to be the end goal and to me he's rushing there at the cost of the story.
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I gave the story a solid chance because it was legible, but sadly, after reading the 60 chapters that I could force myself through, I settled on this rating. The story is extremely boring and doesn't really allow for any growth in the character. The parents' death was as forced as could be just to get a slight glimpse of "character building", the system is completely broken and simply hands out a ton of resources with almost no challenge. Overall, it is an extremely boring story, even in the realm of op characters.
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It's average at best. The characters and the world are bland and uninspiring. MC is boring and two dimensional. The plot seems like something that has been done a million times before. Read if you have read everything else on the site would not recommend.
No just No, when I read this it felt so bad to the point i would re-read the most boring book in the world than read this is he so dumb to the point where hes going to be a test subject or killed. I wouldnrsther trust a 5yr kid then him with a secret than thr MC,like who tells the family "oh im going to be really strong out of know where when I dont have no powers anx im really lazy , oh yes thats not wierd at all ok son thats good to know" like really in almost spit out my drink for reading that. *this is just an opinion also the total rating is 1/5
Extremely mediocre book. It's legible so it's better than a lot of stories on here, but everything else is kind of a mess. Every other sentence ends in an exclamation point to try and create fake excitement. Please stop saying "RUMBLE!" in completely random spots that make zero sense.
The author's other book wasn't half bad so i wonder how did he suddenly manage to write this one out of thin air. I would like to use many adjectives to describe it but just know that its a waste of time.
Seems to be a good novel. But not my taste. I found nothing original in the plot. Mc's incessant screaming and reactions and those capitalized words kinda put me off. I don't know why but something just feels off about this novel. I just felt like skimming through chapters without actual reading in details.
In early Chapters He transmigate and become lazy and had no motivation to become strong and his mother die because of stupidity they kneel to enemies because they can't handle and what did her trying to stop an enemy because of child she did not know?? how can he prioritize other safety over her family hahhhh tooo fooorcedd just for an called character development! !!
OP system which probably would allow MC to grow whole realm up to platinum. Story is pretty boring as well as a bit stupid. Characters aren't very special. I don't really understand high rating of this novel.
writing would be average but author likes to fool around. The grammar has many faults, wrong prepositions, common mistakes, typos, use random word when he is mind draws a blank to replace, using copy&paste The author did not bother to explain many things, unused skill books, idle system has army building purpose, inefficient system, does not have system store to sell surplus items, confusion. i could name many more things. This gets worse as it progresses
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I think this is a good story, it just isn't hitting a spot for me personally. I think from what I have read so far the story is an enjoyable read and is going to build up to some really good things but at the moment this story isn't really hooking me in enough to read everyday. I think that the writing quality is good the characters are good and premise is good I just think that you should wait until chapter 50-80 to come to a definitive conclusion if you like the book or not. reading the Author's other's work I have a strong feeling this story is going to be really good.
My own view (no offence) | Boring story.....Too repetitive..... everything forced on mc. character design meh..... well only thing good is update stability
I thought it would be good, but the plot is too forced. The characters do unrealistically and uncharacteristically stupid things just so "coincidences" can happen and plot can move forward.
Author got to chapter 36 and decided "yeah, this is where I'll ruin the story." The MC's stupid mother gets herself killed, and then the father, KNOWING HE'LL DIE 100%, goes and does the same thing and dies pointlessly. Then, the MC and his sister also almost die and the LEADER OF THE ENEMY comes and says not to kill them or they won't have a work force. Horrible plot armor, even for a Webnovel. So lame. Would've been great to just have the mother die. Side note, the grammar is bad. There's a few slip-ups every few chapters, messing up entire words or changing pronouns.
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simply op, any other novel with op mc feels nerfed TOO slow paced and weak against this mighty author's op mc ,man they should really learn what op is, from the author here .i cant even seem to continue reading other novels with op mc tags they don't feel like op at all ,i have tried many ,CAN ANY OF U GUYS RECOMMEND ME SOME NOVELS WITH SATISFYING OP MC IF ITS EVEN 50% AS GOOD AS THIS OP AUTHOR'S I WILL PRAY U LIVE TO READ MORE STORIES AS SUCH(just a random soul who wants to read some good op mc stories)
I know this is OP MC novel, but can the MC be like have a bit more maturity. I'm on ch 50 atm, but the cringe lines almost make me drop this, well I still reading it just for the fun *and sometimes laugh* so its OKish I guess. For those who like OP MC and sudden str gain, I guess this is a decent read.
Hi everyone ! The novel [My Idle Gaming System] is a story revolving around Noah Eckert, a naive transmigrator that gradually learns to be ruthless and cunning as he goes through ordeals in the world (Realm) he transmigrated in as he experiences the ruthlessness of the larger Universe he’s in. It will not be a harem like my other novel that is in the same Multiverse as this novel! You can expect a fun ride of fantastical worlds and realms, with powerful beings casting skills we can only think of in our wildest imaginations. Of course, the overpowered system behind it all- the Idle Gaming System, will be explored throughout. It’s fairly fast-paced as my other work, with the two stories actually colliding in the future as in my next few projects, we’ll be watching the main characters of this Multiverse come together for something beautiful! I wish everyone an amazing day, and even more amazing next few years as we build wonderful fantastical worlds ^.^ Happy binge reading!