摘要
What would you do if you gained the opportunity to exert revenge on your worst enemy?
What would you do if you had a second chance to correct the mistakes of your past?
Luxane Enstar had gained such an opportunity and with that chance given to him, he swore to complished a singular purpose:
"The Hero must die by my hands."
That was his oath.
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寫檢討
Starting simple the story , most of the time when I m reading in the first chapter I always get a feeling that interest me the way you express to your readers let them intrigue or suspend is to get them hooked then on the next ones explaining in detail if you want, I’m not telling you who to do what you do I just explained how to get your readers to get hooked .
is there romance in the story? if so, is it a harem?