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摘要
[Rewriting Free Chapter's Progress: 12/49]
A boy devastated by the loss of his family turned to games to fill the void.
The game he chose was a Virtual Reality Role Playing Game where you could seduce and have passionate erotic scene's with the heroines, as it was rated 18+
On his first day before playing the game, he chose to use a preset of a character with a similar name to his, "Lucian Von Silver," a vampire baron but a sub-villain in the game's standard route, only surviving properly.
However, this route would see him lose his beloved childhood friend because of his useless talent and playboy lifestyle.
When choosing this, Lucian thought nothing could go wrong with making a custom avatar that looked like the perfect mix of the two.
When he entered the game, a strange figure appeared above his home, apologising as lightning struck down on his house.
Lucian was electrocuted inside his VR pod and died without starting the game.
Yet this was unknown to Lucian, who awakened in a luxurious nobles' room.
Slightly confused, he decided to keep playing, only to discover he now inhabited the body of the actual baron, "Lucian Von Silver!"
But this was not the game, but a real world that the game was based on.
He began to feel dread at the thought of the future until he gained the system that would guide him.
"The Seduction System"
This was the first step in his becoming one of the most lustful and powerful vampires in the entire universe.
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Coming to 40 Chapters in and I thought I should do an initial shameless 5 star review before the end of Volume 1. First, thank you to those that have read my novel and those who may read it in the future. It is my pleasure to share my hobby and passion with you all. I believe my novel started off a little better than average, but thanks to the input from readers, it quickly improved for the better. Once the first 10 chapters, my opinion is that the quality only rises. The story is still in the early stages, the enemies and bosses from the games still haven't shown. Lucian had only just set on the path to finding himself (ch.38) and many of the girls' stories haven't even started. I update daily or twice the following day if I am late. The typical upload times are 12:00pm - 4:45pm British time. Once it's contracted, I will consider adding incentives for bonus chapters! This will be a long novel, so I apologise to those that wish for a fast pace and instant story. It will take a while to build up to the moments where he finally confronts the original hero, Lance, or the people who killed both his and Carmilla's parents. I won't rush this to make sure people can see more of their beloved characters and it doesn't end with a single chapter about how he became god and became unfeeling. (Most Cultivation novel endings.) The characters are my beloved creations. Because of the slow pace of my novel, most of them haven't even shown 10% of their true selves. Just like in reality where you can live with a woman for years and she still does things that will shock you. Or leave you stunned. I don't want them to be finished until the very last moment and so you will notice many characters start off jolly and active, yet further on you might find out they were born into an assassin cell or suffer from various ailments. Duke_Asmodeus
really good .i like it and I'm going to read your other books too after this. I'm satisfied so far . I'm only in 100 ish chaps. but it already feels worthwhile so five star review for now
As the true first reader of Asmodeus' book, I can proudly say that u won't be disappointed XD ...... .................... .... .......
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-+The theme and the world itself were very interesting, but the early chapters did have a lot inconsistencies in particular with the system status. -This might be just me but it felt like the value of each status felt off, like strength somehow made some1 very fast and agility was largely ignored. -Also some times it is hard know if the mc is strong or weak and what the level actually does. -The first 20 chapters could also use a small either rewrite or edit, right now it is the biggest turn off and considering those are what make a person stick with a novel, I would recommend the author do it. +The characters feel very alive and that is some hard to find these days, especially in a harem novel. The girls are not just empty husk although at some point they start feeling similar because of the overwhelming and what not. +The MC character development was pretty good soo far but I'm still confused about some things that happened during it.
I give this story 5 stars becasue I really enjoyed reading it, the author really has good sense of humour and his grammar is top notch. Girls are like Pokemon picking but i don't really mind it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Easy 5 star for me Mc have good development Characters are well designed Story have good progress and is well paced And interactions with mc and his girls are just gold One of the best harem novels I have read
I don't know if it's just me or you all noticed that the author uses more philosophical terms and phrases than necessary, I prefer simple reading over this complex thing
Author has done an awesome job with this story. Though few inconsistencies still remain, like Lucian's past life still is properly modified. It says at first that he had casual flings with different women everyday and later on it says that he is inexperienced virgin, i hope you correct that part author... other than that it's a good story. And me as a fellow man of culture give you my respect.
I honestly really love this novel. It's different than all the generic novels these days. Only problem I would have is the lack of comma usage, but to be honest, the story is still amazing. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who wants to read an actual interesting novel.
This novel is awesome👍 .one of the best novel I read but i wanna ask one question to the author till how many chapters are you going to continue or see it to the end or well you might just drop it in the middle of nowhere . .so author please 🙏 give me an honest answer
I liked the novel the moment I dived in to read... but I don't know why I find that remnant soul of the original Fang Lord kind of annoying since I am still 20ish chapters into it... Well, writing quality is good, very good... Author writes like a native English speaker and I had to stalk his profile just to confirm😂 And I get it now how his words flow like that. Was it waddle? I learned a new word today. Character Design, hmm. Well, I find no problem with that, simply because I can remember all the characters due to their unique traits, of course there are monster girls of different flavors😂. MC comes out cowardly at first, which was a turn-off to some degree but later on, starts developing character-wise. Update stability. Just one word. Consistent. World Background. It's a simple fantasy world based off an Eroge(Title of the bk says it all). Kingdoms, Empires, Continents... I am used to CN-kind of topography, so that's why it's simple for me. Story development, hmm, the structure of the story, I don't know... it's just heading toward the right direction. With the power of the MONSTER GIRLS... I initially wanted to drop a 4.8 but since I am in a good mood today I went with 5 stars... I haven't read any Monster girls novels just watched some anime instead like Interspecies Reviewers *Cough* So this will be my first.
Great story overall, just please don’t make it too long before he starts getting his memories back or figuring out things about his sister. Pains me ever time he’s oblivious to it.
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Could you please inform me where did you get this cover art? Just the name of the character or the name of the artist is enough. I thank you in advance, and please continue with the good work. :)
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good novel (rewrite version is way better but its update stability is weak) i like it authour despite its being one of your first novels you did a realy good job thanks for the novel good luck!
Honestly surprised this doesn't have mire reviews, its quite a good read so far and it definetly has potential keep up the good work!!......