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摘要
Traveling through time and space to become the protagonist of the Ninja World, Uzumaki Xin activated the heaven-defying enlightenment system, he can create everything from scratch, make miracles with one snap of his finger, change the destiny of anyone he sees, and most importantly is he can create the most powerful family that no one ever sees or hear.
This is the story of the rise of a fallen family from ash and taking revenge on those who betrayed them.
"Will of Fire?"
"I will show you what fire is."
"The Will of Uzumaki, Bankai: Ryūjin Jakka!"
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Uzumaki: I Can't Comprehend Anything This story needs someone to proof read or GPT
This story is fanfic of a fanfic, weak. I read a similar plot where Mc ask for mass shadow clone and shadow explosion; using gorilla tactic, hit and run, and night harrasment tactic.
why the heck Chinese people are obsessed with child soldiers. This could have been entertaining if not for child soldiers and child mc
Good try but the translation is very poor the story is mildly interesting I doubt the translator will go back and fix any of the many errors In the spelling
Overall, a good story which can be great. Just the author needs to upgrade the writing skills & for that 1 star is cut-off. All The Best.
impossible to read without getting a headache.... It's legible, but almost every paragraph is messed up. It's obviously translated quite poorly.
As much as I'd love to give this book the highest rating, could you at least try to improve its quality. You're still a novice when it comes to translating, hell i can't even read this fanfiction🤦🤦
the English is a pain to read. the story is good, but the number of mistakes and those of those types that actually confuse people while reading make it a suffering to read. please use grammarly or something to fix your text
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its a good story but has few words by chapters and It has a slow update but its still a good read [img=recommend][img=thinking]
the story is good but the writing is really really bad. author desperately needs a simple editor like Grammarly to fix spelling and grammer mistakes. Does anyone know name of original ? please share
is this work has just been re-uploaded? feels like it because the way the chapters are being updated. if you look pass the many errors in grammar, names and spelling (though not headache inducing) it is quite a good read. there are few parts that needed more focus and more details.example is on how did he created the jutsus. some parts doesn't need two paragraphs to be explain, like the classification of ninja.
The concept is good but the writing is so trash