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There was an elderly man who had lived during the warring states period. He was a senior to Uchiha Madara and Senju Hashirama, but little did anyone know that he hailed from a planet called Earth. When the Uzumaki family was on the brink of extinction at the age of 100, he emerged to protect his family.
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The idea has been used before with a template system and bleach powers in Naruto but the key part of this fic that’s good is using a character no one uses and having great world background. Explains mcs past slightly and solidify puts him in the fanfic. Fic is interesting too. Now onto the list of problems. The MC is supposed to be 100 years old and yet he acts like a spoiled kid. The author is trying to write the mc as if he’s Yamato but doesn’t grasp yamatos personality properly. Instead the MC now acts as an overbearing grandpa with absolutely no wisdom at all, like none. One chapter it talked about him fighting for something pointless and immediately went full powered with Tsunade next to him who happened to be a kid. Author also got the Bleach power levels wrong entirely as if he had even a fraction of Yamatos power he would kill everyone around him by just breathing, that’s why in Bleach everything is in the spiritual world and not physical.
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Fine, but I believe that a good chuck of this story was made by an ai. This wouldn’t be a problem imo if you even bothered to edit some of the text to fit the actual Naruto story.
The author re-read Chinese novels about young masters. All Naruto characters have been changed. Event mixed up.
I was completely fine with events being AU but characters act so different that this isn't Naruto anymore, everything turned chinese except the names.
The author nerfed Yamamoto power at 60%, and the whole fight between mito and mc should have ended in one chapter but it keeps getting dragged. Mito getting nine tail power is a joke to Naruto's pain and journey throughout the series. if you want to Nerf mc power then you shouldn't make him strong, it's quite annoying.
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This is kinda bad, mega rushed, just the old Mc that acts like an edgy xianxa mc murder hobbo , and everyone else « cowering in fear and awed by mc power ». Badly written of both Naruto’s and Bleach’s elements. It’s ok to speed run read it tho, but ye, kinda boring. The idea was good, sad that it’s so badly written.
I read through chapter seven, and I plan on continuing. I like it overall. It's not unique because most fics like to use Bleach powers in Naruto, but I believe it works based on the premise. I like the idea of the MC, and it makes it exciting to read. I'm usually neutral to systems and whether the world is following cannon or it's an AU. What I don't like is the style of writing choice. It's a wuxia cultivation novel in Naruto, which doesn't work out. You can descriptively tell by the attitude, dialogue, and terminology used for the characters. Grammar isn't the best-punctuation mistakes are numerous. Lastly, I dislike every character introduced so far. I'll give this a 3/5.
This is a solid start (11 chapters in) The quality so far is without fault, the characters seem alive and the story is interesting. I like the direction the story seems to be taking and the fact the main character is an old man is refreshing compared to the usual teen angst we tend get with Naruto FF. Keep it up.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.
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are the reviews on this novel paid for? or are standards just that low, i couldn't even make it through the first chapter.
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good start make more chapter How are you doing this is the only way I could have a good night I have to do with
Great idea, but please, don't make MC young again, it will ruin the whole Idea and background story , and please don't give any other template as the name suggest Fire God and who better than Yamamoto, he on par or may way stronger than many Otsutsuki members with his bankai , make him the definition of ' Never underestimate a Old man in a profession where people die young '